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19 / Desert Bluffs
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Posted 11/5/09 , edited 3/12/11
First & Last Name: Toru Tsukiyomi
Position: (Emo kid, Prep, Class Clown?)gangster
Lunch #: [IF you want to eat Lunch at my School]4613
Grade: (High school wise, so Year 1, 2, 3, 4?)4
Age: [You can be five in high school for all I care XD]19
Did you get your shots?: [Y-es or N-o]yea
Phone #: [Make it up](134)-700-6325
A Little About You: *Isn't mandatory* I don't like mean ppl [thats one reason i came to this school] or goody-two-shoes,i like gutars,my ipod[i hope i can hide itttt],.....*cough*my gun*cough*,gold :3,CATS!!!X3,MuSiC,my violin,chocolate,i know the cat language =w=,ETC XD

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First & Last Name: Tori Tsukiyomi
Position: (Emo kid, Prep, Class Clown?)raver/yandere
Lunch #: [IF you want to eat Lunch at my School]777
Grade: (High school wise, so Year 1, 2, 3, 4?)4
Age: [You can be five in high school for all I care XD]19
Did you get your shots?: [Y-es or N-o]yea
Phone #: [Make it up](174)-744-780
A Little About You: *Isn't mandatory*
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First & Last Name: Tora Tsukiyomi
Position: (Emo kid, Prep, Class Clown?)bully
Lunch #: [IF you want to eat Lunch at my School]13666
Grade: (High school wise, so Year 1, 2, 3, 4?)4
Age: [You can be five in high school for all I care XD]19
Did you get your shots?: [Y-es or N-o]yea
Phone #: [Make it up](136)-773-6663
A Little About You: *Isn't mandatory*

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First & Last Name: James Smith
Position: Know-It-All
Lunch #: [IF you want to eat Lunch at my School]1567
Grade: (High school wise, so Year 1, 2, 3, 4?)1
Age: [You can be five in high school for all I care XD]19
Did you get your shots?: [Y-es or N-o]yes
Phone #: [Make it up](136)-789-7650
A Little About You: *Isn't mandatory* [bv13 is lazzzyyy]
Posted 11/5/09
WEEE GANGSTERRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR!
Lol wth tho!?
A gangster who hates mean ppl....that makes no sense! XD guitars....? VIOLIN!?
HEHE <3 PIC LOOKS CREEPY/CUTE OwO

IM HYPERRRRRRRRRRRRRRRRR! D8
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Posted 11/22/09
First & Last Name: Zoey Rosa
Position: Know-It-All
Lunch #: 32309
Grade: Year 1
Age: 13
Did you get your shots?: Yes
Phone #: 123-4567
A Little About You: LOVES CHOCOLATE
She's the kind of person that actually does the work
A weee bit talktive...oh wat the heck! SHES TALKATIVE...SOMETIMES
LOVES PENGUINS
Dislikes for being TOO smart (she skipped a grade in middle school)
Dislikes clowns or anything that relates to clowns
Slightly confused if she should dislike or like retards
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Posted 12/17/09
Where do I sign?
Posted 12/18/09
@angelo: you....fill in the form like everyone else? o-o
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Posted 12/18/09 , edited 12/18/09
Can I have 3 labels then?
Posted 12/18/09
3....? o_o
Umm, sure i guess XD
gooo aheaddd~ owo I feel ... un-caring if you even use 827549 labels xD
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Posted 12/18/09 , edited 12/30/09
Name: Ehsan Tuah (I'm from Malaysia, deal with it! Westerners...)
Position: Asian (What's it to you? Never seen a Malaysian before?), Person with hidden talents
Lunch #: 105000
Age: 16
Height: 5'8"
Weight: 100 kilograms
Year: 4 of high school
Shots: Yes
Phone: (123)-555-7889

Info: I'm from Malaysia, and I'm an exchange student. My clan are descended from those brave Malay warriors of ancient times. I do have a high sense of honor, and trying to adjust to student life in America, so please bear with me when you see me doing something that you don't see as normal. I'm not lazy with work and I do have the slight tendency to defend myself when needed.

Of course, since I'm new in the school, I'm needing new friends. Me and my friends back in Malaysia do hang out, even though now, it's more of chatting. I also play online games just like any normal teenage guy. Of course, I balance that with my studies. Mind you, I'm not to be taken lightly, especially in academics and athletics, even though I have problems in dating. Even though I'm a highly peaceful person, that doesn't mean anyone can bully me. Besides, because of the adjustment period, I am uneasy in socializing to the point of paranoia sometimes. That comes from my lack of physical good looks, to a point.

Likes: Malaysia, Malay heritage and culture, online games
Dislikes: Jerks, idiots, bullies, those who disrespect Malay culture, being single

Appearance (This is what I would look like, but I'm human, not a small avatar):

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Posted 12/18/09 , edited 12/18/09
.... Angelo you should keep it to two (ONE if you can AT ALL) labels.
Koko-chan doesn't care but I do =w=
And we should try and vary things, so chose one of the ones that hasn't been chosen yet.

And.... ehhh, Nerd/Goody-Two-Shoes and Jock kinda are the EXACT opposite of each other...

You've got another Mary Sue thing going, Angelo. This guy does too much and seemed to be good at everything. Give him some weak points aside from "dating" DX
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Posted 12/18/09
Also, uhhh.
I hate to say this but it looks a LOT like you just copied my character's info thing and added things in and changed words.
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Posted 12/18/09
I know, but one label doesn't fit me, at all.
Actually, being a jock, a nerd and a goodie-two-shoes aren't really opposites, especially if it's the one raised in the Malay setting. Even though he's like that, he's far from perfect. My point being, my character is a paradox.

I do have flaws, like physical appearances, dating trouble and of course, the fact that I'm adjusting to life in America.
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Posted 12/18/09

ember1116 wrote:

Also, uhhh.
I hate to say this but it looks a LOT like you just copied my character's info thing and added things in and changed words.


Not really.
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Posted 12/18/09
Actually Yeah Really.

Here's MINE ::




ember1116 wrote:


First & Last Name: Katharine Eneroe (Don't you dare call me a nickname...)
Position: Goodie-Two-Shoes ... Nerd
Lunch #: 130282
Grade: 3
Age: 16
Did you get your shots?: Y
Phone #: (000)-555-1234
A Little About You: I follow the rules... do my homework... do my chores.... and never stay out past Curfew... I'm one of the younger ones in my grade because I skipped 2nd grade.
The things I like most... Books, and my Orange sneakers. Things I don't like.... people who get in the way of my studying, and people who disrupt the class... people who don't care about school.
I'm the top of the class, of course. I've never gotten anything below a 98% on a test, and don't intend to stop that any time soon. I've already started applying to College...

But I DO have a life. I like to hang around with my friends and chat on the phone, like any other teenage girl. As long as I still have time to study and keep my spot at the top of the class.

And here's YOURS ::

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Name: Ehsan Tuah (I'm from Malaysia, deal with it! And, no nicknames!! Westerners...)
Position: Goodie-two-shoes, Nerd, Asian (Obviously), jock (Martial Arts included)
Lunch #: 105000
Age: 16
Height: 5'8"
Weight: 100 kilograms
Year: 4 of high school
Shots: Yes
Phone: (123)-555-7889

Info: I'm from Malaysia, and I'm an exchange student. My clan are descended from those brave Malay warriors of ancient times. I do have a high sense of honor, and trying to adjust to student life in America, so please bear with me when you see me doing something that you don't see as normal. I do follow rules, and I'm not lazy with work, be it homework or chores, and I do have the slight tendency to defend myself when needed.

Of course, I do have a life. I do hang around with my friends, chat and play online games just like any normal teenage guy. As long as I can study and be able to compete with the other students for the top spot in class that is. Mind you, I'm not to be taken lightly, especially in academics and athletics, even though I have problems in dating. Even though I'm a highly peaceful person, that doesn't mean anyone can bully me. Besides, because of the adjustment period, I am uneasy in socializing to the point of paranoia sometimes. That comes from my lack of physical good looks, to a point.

Likes: Malaysia, Malay heritage and culture, books, online games
Dislikes: Jerks, idiots, those who get in my way just for kicks, those who disrupt the class, those who disrespect Malay culture, being single



Special emphasis on the bolded bit.
The order of the colors (which correspond) is even EXACTLY the same, except that your likes/dislikes thing is at the end rather than the middle like it is in mine.

Sorry but in case you haven't noticed, I take RPing seriously and I'm a stickler for ORIGINAL characters that aren't good at everything and aren't like copies of other characters.
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Posted 12/19/09 , edited 12/19/09

ember1116 wrote:

Actually Yeah Really.

Here's MINE ::




ember1116 wrote:


First & Last Name: Katharine Eneroe (Don't you dare call me a nickname...)
Position: Goodie-Two-Shoes ... Nerd
Lunch #: 130282
Grade: 3
Age: 16
Did you get your shots?: Y
Phone #: (000)-555-1234
A Little About You: I follow the rules... do my homework... do my chores.... and never stay out past Curfew... I'm one of the younger ones in my grade because I skipped 2nd grade.
The things I like most... Books, and my Orange sneakers. Things I don't like.... people who get in the way of my studying, and people who disrupt the class... people who don't care about school.
I'm the top of the class, of course. I've never gotten anything below a 98% on a test, and don't intend to stop that any time soon. I've already started applying to College...

But I DO have a life. I like to hang around with my friends and chat on the phone, like any other teenage girl. As long as I still have time to study and keep my spot at the top of the class.

And here's YOURS ::

Angelonius wrote:

Name: Ehsan Tuah (I'm from Malaysia, deal with it! And, no nicknames!! Westerners...)
Position: Goodie-two-shoes, Nerd, Asian (Obviously), jock (Martial Arts included)
Lunch #: 105000
Age: 16
Height: 5'8"
Weight: 100 kilograms
Year: 4 of high school
Shots: Yes
Phone: (123)-555-7889

Info: I'm from Malaysia, and I'm an exchange student. My clan are descended from those brave Malay warriors of ancient times. I do have a high sense of honor, and trying to adjust to student life in America, so please bear with me when you see me doing something that you don't see as normal. I do follow rules, and I'm not lazy with work, be it homework or chores, and I do have the slight tendency to defend myself when needed.

Of course, I do have a life. I do hang around with my friends, chat and play online games just like any normal teenage guy. As long as I can study and be able to compete with the other students for the top spot in class that is. Mind you, I'm not to be taken lightly, especially in academics and athletics, even though I have problems in dating. Even though I'm a highly peaceful person, that doesn't mean anyone can bully me. Besides, because of the adjustment period, I am uneasy in socializing to the point of paranoia sometimes. That comes from my lack of physical good looks, to a point.

Likes: Malaysia, Malay heritage and culture, books, online games
Dislikes: Jerks, idiots, those who get in my way just for kicks, those who disrupt the class, those who disrespect Malay culture, being single



Special emphasis on the bolded bit.
The order of the colors (which correspond) is even EXACTLY the same, except that your likes/dislikes thing is at the end rather than the middle like it is in mine.

Sorry but in case you haven't noticed, I take RPing seriously and I'm a stickler for ORIGINAL characters that aren't good at everything and aren't like copies of other characters.


Alright, I see it.

And please, do guide me. I am so needing to be taught by you.

However, I am also a goodie-two shoes and a nerd, but with more of a jock. The difference between Ehsan and myself is rather simple as far as the categories go. He is fulfilling himself in being a goodie-two-shoes, a nerd and a jock, while for myself, I'm also a jock, but I rarely do so. The difference is that Ehsan has support from his family, while I do not. As far as the goodie-two-shoes go, I'm a nice guy, and so is Ehsan. One can be a goodie-two-shoes by helping people out and stuff like that, as we both know. But I do like your argument, hence I respect that and I'm looking more into it. I do have a suggestion: why not a subcategory of the goodie-two-shoes?

You're telling me that he's good at everything? Not so. True, he is tall and cute, but he is not visible on the ladies' dating radar as much as compared to any prettyboy. He's a nice guy, and most girls nowadays aren't into nice guys. There have been studies on the matter actually, but any argument from either side only negates the other, hence those two opposing arguments about nice guys finishing last is still an open debate. There are other reasons why he isn't well sought-after, but it will be explained in due time by my him, as long as I am not left alone by you, or anyone else. Hence, please let me catch up, as also in the KHRP and our group RP. Since I'm having difficulty catching up and I feel left out, please do help me in helping myself.

Besides, when was the first time I did a Mary Sue? (Since it's a guy, it must be called Gary Stu, just so you know.) Besides, as I said earlier, I'm trying to make him into a paradox as well, because my own personality is a bit of a paradox.
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Posted 12/19/09
DX
See that's the problem. You make your characters just like you. That's not creative. RPing is about getting your creative juices flowing.
And I never said HE was good at everything DX Just that I don't like those kinds of characters.
And You do know that the Jock personality and the Goodie-Two-Shoes/Nerd personality ARE completely different. Jocks are arrogant and conceited stereotypically, while the GTS/Nerd is nervous and picked on by the rest of the class. A Jock would NEVER act like a Nerd. That just doesn't happen. That's where I was getting at with the whole Mary Sue thing (I'mma just stick with Mary Sue for now for boys and girls alike). He can't be good at everything except for dating. Which is basically what he is.

And I can't teach you how to make a character, because that would be from MY head and not yours.

How about this, to try your creative abilities. Make this character the class bully. Make him arrogant and stupid and beautiful, and see how you do with it.
Or, don't even do that. Do something else, but make him the opposite of how you think you are, okay?
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