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It was Friday afternoon, not just an ordinary afternoon but a hot one. Shen and Nica feel uncomfortable so they decided to buy an ice cream. Shen and Nica were bestfriends ever since, they had a common interest as well as a lot of common hobbies. While they were walking outside finding an ice cream stand, Shen found a cute guy who wore a black shirt. She didn’t like the guy but she admired the shirt his wearing. Shen called the attention of Nica who had found an ice cream stand. Of course her attention was focused to her bestfriend. “Hey, look at that guy near a post.” Shen said, Nica finally look to the direction on which her bestfriend was pointing. “He’s cute!” Nica said, and Shen and her were arguing about who will he like. Of course Shen noticed her bestfriend’s reaction and were really determined to know the guy, so she said “Fine, he’s yours. I’m just teasing you.” Nica who heard it teasingly said “You liar, thought were friends. Thanks by the way.” And smiled. The boy suddenly started walking to the and Nica can easily be known that she has a crush on the mysterious boy.

So this is my introduction...what do you think?

Not day when Nica couldn’t stop thinking of the boy. Indeed he is mysterious and that they only knew one information about him, that he studies in G.C academy. Shen and Nica are 1st year and they’ve been searching information as well as what grade he is. Nica found out that his name is J.C. and he was a grade 6 student but was just the same age as Nica. Since they already know his name, Shen helped by finding his records even if it will take days. Surprisingly, Shen had found out the boy’s record and gave the information to Nica. Her bestfriend was overjoyed to know it. Few months had already passed and Nica’s crush on J.C. had been known to J.C.’s friends as well as to Nica and Shen’s batch. Since then Nica has always been shy because many always teased her to J.C. Shen was really happy to see Nica happy and it was the best thing she could wish to her bestfriend to happen everyday.A year already passed and Shen and Nica are in their 2nd year. They as well as their friendship has developed well for they are in the same section. They also had found new friends and named their group MERCYGED. Their friends has always been supporting them and now hasn’t have much different. Though Nica’s friends tries to change what she feels for J.C. and started to tease her by one of their friends. He’s name is Andy, he is one of the genius and cutest of the class and not to mention also friendly. It has not been found out that Andy developed a crush on Nica since 1st year and their friends only knew it when they were in 2nd year. But he surrendered his feelings for Nica and choose to be friends with her than breaking their friendship for his feelings for her.

Ok so this is the continuation, sad one right?his friend Andy surrendered his feelings for Nica just to avoid breaking their friendship.

Few months had passed and MERCYGED has been friendly with everybody. Their friendship was storng when a problem suddenly occurred. It has been few months before when a rumor spread in the school that J.C. started texting Nica, It has been Nica’s dream to finally talk to him in privacy. Then it happened that one of J.C.’s friend also developed a crush on Nica, his name is Adzy. He is short but cute, not to mention funny and also friendly to people. Nica and Adzy had been texting each other when J.C. had stopped texting Nica. It had hurt Nica and she was all gloomy and essionless in the past days. Even her friends couldn’t find ways to make her laugh. “What should we do?” asked Elaine. “I don’t know, just cheer her up!” said Liza. “How about helping her with Adzy, to know if he is really a good guy.” said by Meki. “Ok that will do!” Andy said. Though they try to help Nica, it seems it just turned worse. Nica had known that Adzy was just making lies and that J.C. was the good guy after all. Nica again showed signs of confusion at whom will she choose. Will she choose to love someone she had only known for a short time? Or will she wait for the love of her life?

Oh no..what do youthink will she choose?find out!

Nica had been waiting for J.C. to notice her feelings. She had broken off to Adzy even if they had no relationships, She didn’t answer any boys for in her heart J.C. is the only one. Many years had passed and Nica had already forgotten everything about J.C. but it’s not what fate had It was afternoon when Nica was studying under a tree, but she couldn’t study well for a shadow was blocking her view. She got annoyed and said to the mysterious boy “Hey! Will you-” before she could finish her words, she saw the boy holding a cattleya flower in his hands and it seems he wanted to give it to Nica. Nica who noticed a familiar face cried and the boy came closer to her to wipe her tears but she suddenly stopped it. “What are you doing?” said Nica angrily. “Who are you? And what do you want?” the boy formed a frown on his fac and said “You didn’t recognize me? I’m the one who loved you and sacrificed my feelings just for you.” When Nica heard that, she run away because she knew it was the best thing to do. But before she could go farther a hand grabbed her wrist and stop her. “Why are you doing this to me J.C.? what did I do to deserve this?” Nica said again now crying. The rain started to fall, “Why?! I should be the one who should say that. I love you but you just throw it away.” Said J.C. “What?! I love you too and-” before Nica could finish her words, J.C. had already kissed her. And pulled away after, “Why did you that?” asked by Nica surprised. “because I love you d you love me too…so why shouldn’t I?” said J.C.while smiling. Nica smiled also as tears continued pouring down her cheeks. She didn’t know what to say. “I’ve been waiting for this to happen, at last I’ve found my happy ending.” “Really?” asked by J.C. they both smiled and like to kiss again when they were interrupted by a loud noise behind the tree. They turned to see what or who it was and found five person hiding. “Ah I guess you have found us huh? I guess it’s time for us to go now.” Shen said while the others started to run. “Ahem! Not so fast.” Nica said “You shouldn’t run you know. I just wanted to thank you guys for everything.” “It’s fine, you’re welcome Nica! Besides we’re your friends remember?” said by Elaine. And they hugged each other and welcomed J.C. in their group. It was the best thing that happened on Nica’s life, Now everything is fine and no rivalries will happen again. Nica and J.C.’s love had been known and stay happy forever.

THE END

So what do you think about my story?you too can make your own and post it here....be raedy with your pens and notebooks and start thinking ideas now after that start writing!
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thanks to all who had viewed this also..please post your stories if you have one
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hey ms., are you a filipino?
btw, ur story is kinda cute, is it a true life story?
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efaigabriel wrote:

hey ms., are you a filipino?
btw, ur story is kinda cute, is it a true life story?


Yeah..im a filipino, Thanks! how did you know that it was a true to life story?and it was my friends story....i actually kept this from her
But of course the ending was just created by me(i do thought of this story sooo hard).Anyway thanks again and hope we could become good friends

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so,are you shen?
well, just guessing.
that story was just like mine, too bad it was not happy ending..
im writting a story too, i just cant publish it, coz it was too long..
sure we could be friends, hajimemashite!
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efaigabriel wrote:

so,are you shen?
well, just guessing.
that story was just like mine, too bad it was not happy ending..
im writting a story too, i just cant publish it, coz it was too long..
sure we could be friends, hajimemashite!



Oh ok..well i like to read your story if its ok with you and yes im shen,naturally my friends still didnt guess who shen was in the real life but im surprised you guessed it fast...but if it is really long and you dont feel publishing it then its ok with me, i do understand. But can you just tell me the plot as well as the summary? im really interested(sori for bothering you much)
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It was Friday afternoon, not just an ordinary afternoon but a hot one. Shen and Nica feel uncomfortable so they decided to buy an ice cream. Shen and Nica were bestfriends ever since, they had a common interest as well as a lot of common hobbies. While they were walking outside finding an ice cream stand, Shen found a cute guy who wore a black shirt. She didn’t like the guy but she admired the shirt his wearing. Shen called the attention of Nica who had found an ice cream stand. Of course her attention was focused to her bestfriend. “Hey, look at that guy near a post.” Shen said, Nica finally look to the direction on which her bestfriend was pointing. “He’s cute!” Nica said, and Shen and her were arguing about who will he like. Of course Shen noticed her bestfriend’s reaction and were really determined to know the guy, so she said “Fine, he’s yours. I’m just teasing you.” Nica who heard it teasingly said “You liar, thought were friends. Thanks by the way.” And smiled. The boy suddenly started walking to the and Nica can easily be known that she has a crush on the mysterious boy.

So this is my introduction...what do you think?

So far. so good

Not day when Nica couldn’t stop thinking of the boy. Indeed he is mysterious and that they only knew one information about him, that he studies in G.C academy. Shen and Nica are 1st year and they’ve been searching information as well as what grade he is. Nica found out that his name is J.C. and he was a grade 6 student but was just the same age as Nica. Since they already know his name, Shen helped by finding his records even if it will take days. Surprisingly, Shen had found out the boy’s record and gave the information to Nica. Her bestfriend was overjoyed to know it. Few months had already passed and Nica’s crush on J.C. had been known to J.C.’s friends as well as to Nica and Shen’s batch. Since then Nica has always been shy because many always teased her to J.C. Shen was really happy to see Nica happy and it was the best thing she could wish to her bestfriend to happen everyday.A year already passed and Shen and Nica are in their 2nd year. They as well as their friendship has developed well for they are in the same section. They also had found new friends and named their group MERCYGED. Their friends has always been supporting them and now hasn’t have much different. Though Nica’s friends tries to change what she feels for J.C. and started to tease her by one of their friends. He’s name is Andy, he is one of the genius and cutest of the class and not to mention also friendly. It has not been found out that Andy developed a crush on Nica since 1st year and their friends only knew it when they were in 2nd year. But he surrendered his feelings for Nica and choose to be friends with her than breaking their friendship for his feelings for her.

Ok so this is the continuation, sad one right?his friend Andy surrendered his feelings for Nica just to avoid breaking their friendship.

Classic

Few months had passed and MERCYGED has been friendly with everybody. Their friendship was storng when a problem suddenly occurred. It has been few months before when a rumor spread in the school that J.C. started texting Nica, It has been Nica’s dream to finally talk to him in privacy. Then it happened that one of J.C.’s friend also developed a crush on Nica, his name is Adzy. He is short but cute, not to mention funny and also friendly to people. Nica and Adzy had been texting each other when J.C. had stopped texting Nica. It had hurt Nica and she was all gloomy and essionless in the past days. Even her friends couldn’t find ways to make her laugh. “What should we do?” asked Elaine. “I don’t know, just cheer her up!” said Liza. “How about helping her with Adzy, to know if he is really a good guy.” said by Meki. “Ok that will do!” Andy said. Though they try to help Nica, it seems it just turned worse. Nica had known that Adzy was just making lies and that J.C. was the good guy after all. Nica again showed signs of confusion at whom will she choose. Will she choose to love someone she had only known for a short time? Or will she wait for the love of her life?

Oh no..what do youthink will she choose?find out!

Nica had been waiting for J.C. to notice her feelings. She had broken off to Adzy even if they had no relationships, She didn’t answer any boys for in her heart J.C. is the only one. Many years had passed and Nica had already forgotten everything about J.C. but it’s not what fate had It was afternoon when Nica was studying under a tree, but she couldn’t study well for a shadow was blocking her view. She got annoyed and said to the mysterious boy “Hey! Will you-” before she could finish her words, she saw the boy holding a cattleya flower in his hands and it seems he wanted to give it to Nica. Nica who noticed a familiar face cried and the boy came closer to her to wipe her tears but she suddenly stopped it. “What are you doing?” said Nica angrily. “Who are you? And what do you want?” the boy formed a frown on his fac and said “You didn’t recognize me? I’m the one who loved you and sacrificed my feelings just for you.” When Nica heard that, she run away because she knew it was the best thing to do. But before she could go farther a hand grabbed her wrist and stop her. “Why are you doing this to me J.C.? what did I do to deserve this?” Nica said again now crying. The rain started to fall, “Why?! I should be the one who should say that. I love you but you just throw it away.” Said J.C. “What?! I love you too and-” before Nica could finish her words, J.C. had already kissed her. And pulled away after, “Why did you that?” asked by Nica surprised. “because I love you d you love me too…so why shouldn’t I?” said J.C.while smiling. Nica smiled also as tears continued pouring down her cheeks. She didn’t know what to say. “I’ve been waiting for this to happen, at last I’ve found my happy ending.” “Really?” asked by J.C. they both smiled and like to kiss again when they were interrupted by a loud noise behind the tree. They turned to see what or who it was and found five person hiding. “Ah I guess you have found us huh? I guess it’s time for us to go now.” Shen said while the others started to run. “Ahem! Not so fast.” Nica said “You shouldn’t run you know. I just wanted to thank you guys for everything.” “It’s fine, you’re welcome Nica! Besides we’re your friends remember?” said by Elaine. And they hugged each other and welcomed J.C. in their group. It was the best thing that happened on Nica’s life, Now everything is fine and no rivalries will happen again. Nica and J.C.’s love had been known and stay happy forever.

THE END

So what do you think about my story?you too can make your own and post it here....be raedy with your pens and notebooks and start thinking ideas now after that start writing!


Young love...how romantic..
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efaigabriel wrote:

so,are you shen?
well, just guessing.
that story was just like mine, too bad it was not happy ending..
im writting a story too, i just cant publish it, coz it was too long..
sure we could be friends, hajimemashite!



Oh ok..well i like to read your story if its ok with you and yes im shen,naturally my friends still didnt guess who shen was in the real life but im surprised you guessed it fast...but if it is really long and you dont feel publishing it then its ok with me, i do understand. But can you just tell me the plot as well as the summary? im really interested(sori for bothering you much)


yah,soon.
I promise.
im still editing the parts so maybe some other time.
and dont worry, you didnt bother me.
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This: http://login.fanfiction.net/story/story_tab_list.php

I did a fanfiction of S.A but the story is really REALLY far from S.A, I just used their names as well as their school X)
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