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Posted 11/20/09 , edited 3/8/10
open in full page for better reading XD
and read from left to right!
chapter 3 is finally up!!...took me a long time to finish this...but thanks to blckfox7 aka yoyok121204 i was able to draw the entire chapter 3 faster =P...i also suggest that you guys read the "love contract" script that he's doing right now...i highly recommend it =P...
heres the link if your interested! ... http://www.crunchyroll.com/group/Making_Anime#s=/group/Making_Anime/forum%3Fextra_param%3D610299%26page%3D0
but dont forget to read my manga too! XD...the script would definitely be ahead but ill be sure to add this and that to the manga so it would have a "refreshing" feel to it XD...or at least youll see difference between the script and the manga!...
anyways...ill probably gonna rest for now...and play FF13 w/c is coming tomorrow XD..hehe.....and as always...
please rate and comment =P

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chapter 2


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Wow, I love what u have done with the manga, the characters r real close to the original and to b honest i likee your art style a lot, over all the chapter whas really enjoyable and havin read the script prior to this i can say its fantastic how much it actually came to life. Great job!
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thanks...well right after the contract signing part i have to make my own story since i havent really read the whole script...so im just wondering...can you guys still see the script?...the reason i wasnt able to read it full is cuz for some reason the scripts that are supposed to be inside the spoiler are not there...its empty XD....i only have like 4 chapters i think...
and since its almost thanksgiving...i might not be able to log in much cuz we might go out of town...hopefully we stay in a place where the internet is good XD....
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Posted 11/22/09

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Wow, I love what u have done with the manga, the characters r real close to the original and to b honest i likee your art style a lot, over all the chapter whas really enjoyable and havin read the script prior to this i can say its fantastic how much it actually came to life. Great job!


sorry for double posting...but it seems like i cant delete my post XD...anyways...can you still read the love contract script?...
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Posted 11/22/09

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yaidoll wrote:

Wow, I love what u have done with the manga, the characters r real close to the original and to b honest i likee your art style a lot, over all the chapter whas really enjoyable and havin read the script prior to this i can say its fantastic how much it actually came to life. Great job!


sorry for double posting...but it seems like i cant delete my post XD...anyways...can you still read the love contract script?...


When i read it 2 days ago i was able to read it fine, now its no longer there, must have got some damage during the last cr update, somethimes this things happen and graphics r the ones afected the most.
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Posted 11/22/09

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yaidoll wrote:

Wow, I love what u have done with the manga, the characters r real close to the original and to b honest i likee your art style a lot, over all the chapter whas really enjoyable and havin read the script prior to this i can say its fantastic how much it actually came to life. Great job!


sorry for double posting...but it seems like i cant delete my post XD...anyways...can you still read the love contract script?...


When i read it 2 days ago i was able to read it fine, now its no longer there, must have got some damage during the last cr update, somethimes this things happen and graphics r the ones afected the most.


sad...i guess i have to check once in a while and hope i get a chance to read it....i only have a copy of chapters 1...6 and 42 XD..thanks for the reply anyways =P
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Posted 11/22/09

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yaidoll wrote:


reijin007 wrote:


yaidoll wrote:

Wow, I love what u have done with the manga, the characters r real close to the original and to b honest i likee your art style a lot, over all the chapter whas really enjoyable and havin read the script prior to this i can say its fantastic how much it actually came to life. Great job!


sorry for double posting...but it seems like i cant delete my post XD...anyways...can you still read the love contract script?...


When i read it 2 days ago i was able to read it fine, now its no longer there, must have got some damage during the last cr update, somethimes this things happen and graphics r the ones afected the most.


sad...i guess i have to check once in a while and hope i get a chance to read it....i only have a copy of chapters 1...6 and 42 XD..thanks for the reply anyways =P


its no problem m more than glad to help in anything and sry i didn't knoticed when it happened, i would had notified u right away.
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thanks...again XD....i guess i cant help it...every time i check theres nothing there...so if its not too much...if theres a time where youre able to read it again..can you post it here in this forum topic XD...it would be a great help..but im not forcing you to do it ok?...hehe...
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Sure its no problem at all, and i really hope it does get fixed for everyone else to read.
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This is wonderful, wonderful work. Not only have you retained everything that was good about the version yoyok first made you have also made changes to the pacing and presentation that I think improve it, such as your decision to start after the contract has been made and then flashback to the contract, or your decision to make Enma a girl.

The art is very attractive and likable. The dark, thick lines remind me of the wonderful Shaman King art style. In general, it is very minimalist, but also very satisfying and emotional.

My only real complaint is that I can't finish it. The way you've posted it, I can't see the pages in your post. I was reading it in jpegs, but then one of them didn't work. Could you help please?
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This is wonderful, wonderful work. Not only have you retained everything that was good about the version yoyok first made you have also made changes to the pacing and presentation that I think improve it, such as your decision to start after the contract has been made and then flashback to the contract, or your decision to make Enma a girl.

The art is very attractive and likable. The dark, thick lines remind me of the wonderful Shaman King art style. In general, it is very minimalist, but also very satisfying and emotional.

My only real complaint is that I can't finish it. The way you've posted it, I can't see the pages in your post. I was reading it in jpegs, but then one of them didn't work. Could you help please?


wow thanks!....i tried to base as close as possible to his work but i wasnt able to read the full version of his work or even met yoyok here in the group...by the time i noticed his work i only read like 4 chapters...so my only solution is to add some elements on my own...
anyways about the images....i tried it and all images work...i guess you just have to refresh the page since the images are pretty big (some are like 6mb) and i need to use image shack instead of uploading it here in cr...i saw this once too then refresh and sure enuf the images are there..
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HAHA I love it!!!!
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wow thanks!....i tried to base as close as possible to his work but i wasnt able to read the full version of his work or even met yoyok here in the group...by the time i noticed his work i only read like 4 chapters...so my only solution is to add some elements on my own...
anyways about the images....i tried it and all images work...i guess you just have to refresh the page since the images are pretty big (some are like 6mb) and i need to use image shack instead of uploading it here in cr...i saw this once too then refresh and sure enuf the images are there..


Hi reijin. This is me yoyok.. It just took me today to remember this group and try to visit again. This is my other account here in crunchyroll. I was really surprise to see the manga you made based on my work. First of all thank you very much that you made my work a manga. I really thank you from the bottom of my heart.. I stopped my work because of something horrible that happened in my life last year that I even nearly killed myself. I dropped this work and try to make a new novel since no one gave feedback in Love Contract for a month. I thought I have no more readers thus deciding to nuke my account. I have the rest of my work from chapter 1 to chapter 42. If you want I can continue this work until it finish. I would post the other and new chapters of my work if you want to make you continue this but I guess I should change also my work a little to blend in the new pace you made in my story, But of course if you don't want to and you have a plan of your own in my work its up to you. Again thank you so much.
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wow thanks!....i tried to base as close as possible to his work but i wasnt able to read the full version of his work or even met yoyok here in the group...by the time i noticed his work i only read like 4 chapters...so my only solution is to add some elements on my own...
anyways about the images....i tried it and all images work...i guess you just have to refresh the page since the images are pretty big (some are like 6mb) and i need to use image shack instead of uploading it here in cr...i saw this once too then refresh and sure enuf the images are there..


Hi reijin. This is me yoyok.. It just took me today to remember this group and try to visit again. This is my other account here in crunchyroll. I was really surprise to see the manga you made based on my work. First of all thank you very much that you made my work a manga. I really thank you from the bottom of my heart.. I stopped my work because of something horrible that happened in my life last year that I even nearly killed myself. I dropped this work and try to make a new novel since no one gave feedback in Love Contract for a month. I thought I have no more readers thus deciding to nuke my account. I have the rest of my work from chapter 1 to chapter 42. If you want I can continue this work until it finish. I would post the other and new chapters of my work if you want to make you continue this but I guess I should change also my work a little to blend in the new pace you made in my story, But of course if you don't want to and you have a plan of your own in my work its up to you. Again thank you so much.


oh hi!...finally able to meet you =P....and uh...thnx too...i was amazed on the idea on your story...and that time..i was looking to draw something thats why ive been browsing through the stories in this group...so right after i saw it...i decided to make a manga for it XD...unfortunately...i only got to read a few chapters cuz for some reason it doesnt show anymore...so i had to make my own twist =(..
anyways...id love to draw manga for your work...i woudnt demand that you finish it.....since....as you can see...ive been very busy lately and havent done any drawings at all XD....but if you have the copy of the older chapters...i would love to read it all and continue the drawing when i get the time =P...
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Posted 2/20/10 , edited 2/20/10

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reijin007 wrote:


wow thanks!....i tried to base as close as possible to his work but i wasnt able to read the full version of his work or even met yoyok here in the group...by the time i noticed his work i only read like 4 chapters...so my only solution is to add some elements on my own...
anyways about the images....i tried it and all images work...i guess you just have to refresh the page since the images are pretty big (some are like 6mb) and i need to use image shack instead of uploading it here in cr...i saw this once too then refresh and sure enuf the images are there..


Hi reijin. This is me yoyok.. It just took me today to remember this group and try to visit again. This is my other account here in crunchyroll. I was really surprise to see the manga you made based on my work. First of all thank you very much that you made my work a manga. I really thank you from the bottom of my heart.. I stopped my work because of something horrible that happened in my life last year that I even nearly killed myself. I dropped this work and try to make a new novel since no one gave feedback in Love Contract for a month. I thought I have no more readers thus deciding to nuke my account. I have the rest of my work from chapter 1 to chapter 42. If you want I can continue this work until it finish. I would post the other and new chapters of my work if you want to make you continue this but I guess I should change also my work a little to blend in the new pace you made in my story, But of course if you don't want to and you have a plan of your own in my work its up to you. Again thank you so much.


oh hi!...finally able to meet you =P....and uh...thnx too...i was amazed on the idea on your story...and that time..i was looking to draw something thats why ive been browsing through the stories in this group...so right after i saw it...i decided to make a manga for it XD...unfortunately...i only got to read a few chapters cuz for some reason it doesnt show anymore...so i had to make my own twist =(..
anyways...id love to draw manga for your work...i woudnt demand that you finish it.....since....as you can see...ive been very busy lately and havent done any drawings at all XD....but if you have the copy of the older chapters...i would love to read it all and continue the drawing when i get the time =P...


It's okay.. Thanks too.. I'll make a new thread and post the other chapters there but I guess it would takes me a few days to post it since I have to re-edit the story after the changes you made. If you want I can start over in the current progress of your version and combine it with my past chapters. I wouldn't demand that you draw it quickly. I'm even grateful that you have made it as far like this. Thank you. I just want to know if mayu is the first girl in the ring and what would be enma's plan. If you don't want it to be a spoiler to others you can just pm me.
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