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"She's so cute!" My mother said as she held me in her arms. I had just been born, but I was already sleeping.
"What will you name her?"
"Mitsuko, meaning bright child," She smiled.
"But how do you know that she'll be bright?"
"All children are bright, Kantaro."

Once I was aloud to go home, I woke up and started crying, but I don't remember what happened after that. Well No one would tell me what happened, because I was kidnapped after nearly killing my parents. It was because some kind of power came from me and they were in the hospital for a few months. But now I live with a man that kidnapped me, a gang leader that uses me to kill people. Although I've tried, I cant kill him. When ever I try, I can't do what ever I want.
He sent me to a school that he says has many children that are like me, but that isn't true. SO far, I've accidently killed a boy in my class that said he liked me...
"I like you, Mitsuko-chan! I was ho-" he stopped his words as he looked at his stomach.
I had stabbed him because I liked him to, but when ever I show my emotions I go out of control only with a dagger. Tears ran down my face as I took it out and kneeled down to hug him," I'm sorry, Kenji-san..."
"Th- then why-why did you stab m-m-me?"
"It's something I can't control, but you have to run or I might stab you more..."
He tried to run, but I once again I exploded and nearly shredded him to peaces....

I woke up gasping, it was another nightmare. I didn't want to see anyone, I didn't want to hurt anyone else...
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I am outside mitsuko's home......"Mitsuko! mitsuko!" i shouted.. "WE are getting late for school!!!!"
*yummm!!! munch munch!* i love eating cookies... "munch munch mitsuko.. munch hurry up! whats taking u so long!" I stare at a beautiful rose.. then lost in thoughts ******rose... isnt that what yumiko-sensei taught us at the biology class.... . yea! i remember know! Yumiko-sensei gave a lot of HW yesterday... hmmm some home work was about fungi growing on bread...yeah... BREAD... especially melon bread... *DROOL...* yeah......the new store is opening today.... i will ask some money from keiko-san... oh no! she told me to take some fruits to school... i forgot .=..=****** [PLOP!]stopped all the thoughts "mitsuko!!>o< hurry up!!!!!"
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I am outside mitsuko's home......"Mitsuko! mitsuko!" i shouted.. "WE are getting late for school!!!!"
*yummm!!! munch munch!* i love eating cookies... "munch munch mitsuko.. munch hurry up! whats taking u so long!" I stare at a beautiful rose.. then lost in thoughts ******rose... isnt that what yumiko-sensei taught us at the biology class.... . yea! i remember know! Yumiko-sensei gave a lot of HW yesterday... hmmm some home work was about fungi growing on bread...yeah... BREAD... especially melon bread... *DROOL...* yeah......the new store is opening today.... i will ask some money from keiko-san... oh no! she told me to take some fruits to school... i forgot .=..=****** [PLOP!]stopped all the thoughts "mitsuko!!>o< hurry up!!!!!"


should we make this easier by letting each other tlak for different characters?
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meeon wrote:

I am outside mitsuko's home......"Mitsuko! mitsuko!" i shouted.. "WE are getting late for school!!!!"
*yummm!!! munch munch!* i love eating cookies... "munch munch mitsuko.. munch hurry up! whats taking u so long!" I stare at a beautiful rose.. then lost in thoughts ******rose... isnt that what yumiko-sensei taught us at the biology class.... . yea! i remember know! Yumiko-sensei gave a lot of HW yesterday... hmmm some home work was about fungi growing on bread...yeah... BREAD... especially melon bread... *DROOL...* yeah......the new store is opening today.... i will ask some money from keiko-san... oh no! she told me to take some fruits to school... i forgot .=..=****** [PLOP!]stopped all the thoughts "mitsuko!!>o< hurry up!!!!!"


should we make this easier by letting each other tlak for different characters?


Okay ^ ^ u r the creator know >o< and... i want to ask u a Q... in the forum of character making u gave an example... but that girls name was matsuko or matsuki... so is she the main character or mitsuko??? maybe matsuko was an example... eh????

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^-^ going to put mine here =) going to be done later and put it up as soon as possabul~!! XD
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moke111 wrote:


meeon wrote:

I am outside mitsuko's home......"Mitsuko! mitsuko!" i shouted.. "WE are getting late for school!!!!"
*yummm!!! munch munch!* i love eating cookies... "munch munch mitsuko.. munch hurry up! whats taking u so long!" I stare at a beautiful rose.. then lost in thoughts ******rose... isnt that what yumiko-sensei taught us at the biology class.... . yea! i remember know! Yumiko-sensei gave a lot of HW yesterday... hmmm some home work was about fungi growing on bread...yeah... BREAD... especially melon bread... *DROOL...* yeah......the new store is opening today.... i will ask some money from keiko-san... oh no! she told me to take some fruits to school... i forgot .=..=****** [PLOP!]stopped all the thoughts "mitsuko!!>o< hurry up!!!!!"


should we make this easier by letting each other tlak for different characters?


Okay ^ ^ u r the creator know >o< and... i want to ask u a Q... in the forum of character making u gave an example... but that girls name was matsuko or matsuki... so is she the main character or mitsuko??? maybe matsuko was an example... eh????



oh, i guess i put a typo.. it's mitsuko.. i think...
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moke111 wrote:


meeon wrote:


moke111 wrote:


meeon wrote:

I am outside mitsuko's home......"Mitsuko! mitsuko!" i shouted.. "WE are getting late for school!!!!"
*yummm!!! munch munch!* i love eating cookies... "munch munch mitsuko.. munch hurry up! whats taking u so long!" I stare at a beautiful rose.. then lost in thoughts ******rose... isnt that what yumiko-sensei taught us at the biology class.... . yea! i remember know! Yumiko-sensei gave a lot of HW yesterday... hmmm some home work was about fungi growing on bread...yeah... BREAD... especially melon bread... *DROOL...* yeah......the new store is opening today.... i will ask some money from keiko-san... oh no! she told me to take some fruits to school... i forgot .=..=****** [PLOP!]stopped all the thoughts "mitsuko!!>o< hurry up!!!!!"


should we make this easier by letting each other tlak for different characters?


Okay ^ ^ u r the creator know >o< and... i want to ask u a Q... in the forum of character making u gave an example... but that girls name was matsuko or matsuki... so is she the main character or mitsuko??? maybe matsuko was an example... eh????



oh, i guess i put a typo.. it's mitsuko.. i think...


lets go school together mitsuko ^ ^.

(Know can u come out of ur house ?? ^ ^)
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moke111 wrote:


meeon wrote:


moke111 wrote:


meeon wrote:

I am outside mitsuko's home......"Mitsuko! mitsuko!" i shouted.. "WE are getting late for school!!!!"
*yummm!!! munch munch!* i love eating cookies... "munch munch mitsuko.. munch hurry up! whats taking u so long!" I stare at a beautiful rose.. then lost in thoughts ******rose... isnt that what yumiko-sensei taught us at the biology class.... . yea! i remember know! Yumiko-sensei gave a lot of HW yesterday... hmmm some home work was about fungi growing on bread...yeah... BREAD... especially melon bread... *DROOL...* yeah......the new store is opening today.... i will ask some money from keiko-san... oh no! she told me to take some fruits to school... i forgot .=..=****** [PLOP!]stopped all the thoughts "mitsuko!!>o< hurry up!!!!!"


should we make this easier by letting each other tlak for different characters?


Okay ^ ^ u r the creator know >o< and... i want to ask u a Q... in the forum of character making u gave an example... but that girls name was matsuko or matsuki... so is she the main character or mitsuko??? maybe matsuko was an example... eh????



oh, i guess i put a typo.. it's mitsuko.. i think...


lets go school together mitsuko ^ ^.

(Know can u come out of ur house ?? ^ ^)


"yes, I am sorry."
As we ran to the school we ran into a mob of girls running after a cute boy with grey hair.
"Oh, look. It's Ryuu," Mitsuko said still talking and looking boring.
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"wow! isnt he just soo cute"
aisa said *hearts all over*
"Oh no! We have to hurry! lets go to school fast mitsuko!!"
I grab your hand and run towards the school building leaving those mob of girls and ryuu.
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A limo pulled up jut alittle ways off from the school

driver: master ewan you sure you wouldnt like me to drive you to the front entrance?

Ewan: N-no its fine .. .i wouldnt want to cause to much trouble on the first day back * he hopped out of the car* thanks for the lift * he smiled running to the school carefully sneaky by everyone*
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La la la * humming a song*
Aisa- huh? *notices ewan*
Hey! good morning there ^ ^ How are you ewan?? ^ ^
she runs towards ewan and start shaking hands!!
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yukito enters the school building looks at aisa
*Totally fed up* " Hey aisa.. there is no need to be soo much hyper!" =_= "how many times are u gonna shake hands.... ????"
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" hm?!" he was shocked Aisa had came out of no were and waas now shaking his hand," o ummmm its err going . . . . ummm quite well ," he managed to stutter out ," h-how about yourself Aisa.
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Aisa- " I m fine ewan ^ ^" "m..mitsuko, come on.. we have to get to our classes O..O" "and u mister yuki! go to your class as well >:P " shows her tongue!
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W-well see you later then Aisa ummm you too Mitsuko" he smiled nervously and waved before he headed off to his classroom
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