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Posted 12/14/09 , edited 12/15/09
Story by Embie-chan and Koko-chan
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Okay, so this is how it's gonna work.
I (Embie-chan) will write a chapter of this story, and when I'm done, Koko-chan will add to the post with the next chapter. Then I'll add the third one, and so on and so forth.

Anyways, enjoy the story, and feel free to comment XD







Chapter One :: Chicken Girl, Chicken Boy

A girl, about the age of fourteen, sat despondently on a park swing. There was a smudge of dirt on her face, and she had her head bent forward, to hide away the tears.

“Chickeeennn!” They had called, and shoved her down the slide.

It was horrible, really. Already fourteen years old, and still afraid of the slide in the playground. The other children made fun of her for it.

“Hahaha, just like a Chicken!” They all jeered, and chanted, “Chickeeen, Chickeeen!”

She sniffed, and wiped away a tear that was falling down her cheek. Why did the other children have to be so horrible… just because she had this name.

She’d been born, fourteen years prior, in a small town far away from this place. Her mother, a French woman who’d fallen in love with and married an American man, had been in labor. Her father, a timid man, had been backing away, afraid of being a father.

Before she’d known it, the woman had given birth to a beautiful baby girl.

And shouted, “POULET!” at her father. “CHICKEN!” Just after the nurse had asked her what she wanted to name the child.

And it was set in stone.

Poulet’s father had left after that, and she had moved with her mother to the town they lived in now.

For as long as Poulet could remember, the other children had looked at her funny, and called her names. “Chickeeeenn!” They had called her, once they found out what her name meant. And when it was found out that she was terrified of heights, and could not go down the slide, they teased her for that too.

She was at the point now, where she told people to call her Paulette. It sounded better than Poo-lay, and it sounded almost like her name looked… but the name had never caught on. She was still Poo-lay, just a chicken who couldn’t go down the slides at the age of fourteen.

There was a squeak and a creak, and Poulet looked up and over. In the swing next to her sat a boy. A boy with tanned skin and raven black hair. He looked over at her with a smile, and she could see his dark brown eyes shine.

“Hey, why are you crying?” He asked.

Poulet looked back down and shook her head, not wanting to speak for fear of her voice cracking.

The boy frowned. He was fifteen years old, and had lived in this town his whole life. This was the first time he’d seen this girl, sitting on the swings and crying.

“Aw, c’mon… you can tell me!” He urged, swinging in the swing sideways so that he got closer to Poulet, then farther. Closer and farther.

Poulet couldn’t hold it anymore, and she spilled it all. From her mother’s accidentally naming her Chicken, to her fear of heights and the taunting she’d grown up with.

When she was done with her story, the Boy was still smiling at her. It was contagious, and she couldn’t help a slight turning up of the lips. “W-what’s your name…?”

The Boy smiled, and a slight wind blew his black hair. “Name’s Pollo.” He grinned.

Poulet looked up, eyes wide. P…"Poyo"… Pollo… Chicken, just like me.


M o r e .. S o o n ~~
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Posted 12/14/09
I dub thee "First Post Under Heaven!"

Frankly, I like it.
Posted 12/15/09 , edited 12/15/09
LMAO WOW OMG XD
AWESOME!
CHIIIIICKENN XD

But, i thought wen YOU introduced POULET on chap 1 I would be introducing Pollo next on chap 2, and HIS story XD Like, Poulet and her gettin teased/etc Dx
but you already did that for MYY POLLOOO D: -grr-
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Posted 12/15/09
Best thing EVER.
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Posted 12/15/09 , edited 12/15/09
Nuh uuhhh, he just said his name D: You get to REALLY introduce him ^^
His past and history an' all that =w=
I just wanted to do the meeting part >w<

And lol, thanks Meg-chan XD
Posted 12/18/09
Ehhh, D:
POLLLOOOOOO AAANDDDDDDDD POULETTTTTT DX
SORRY FOR TEH ... NO UPDATING FROM ME T~T -dies- Laziness...laziness has overcome me...
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Posted 12/18/09
NE, YOU BETTER UPDATE SOON OR I'MMA TAKE THE STORY OVER COMPLETELY >8D
Posted 12/18/09
Lol xD
I think you should T_T
Honestly, meh updateing has went POOOFFFFF ~ !
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Posted 12/18/09
lol mkay I WILL XD
Posted 12/18/09
LOL
WAAAIIITTT XD

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