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Rimahiko Fanfic:Can Comedy and Sports ever go together?
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Posted 12/17/09 , edited 1/11/10
EDIT: Nevermind I want to put this story on FF.net but I need to think of a better name! So yeah I'm thinking.......

This is my VERY first time writing a fanfic but plz tell me what you think. im not that good so yeah!!! im kind of thinking about making the story like 10 chapters long i don't know but im really busy drawing and stuff so yeah......I DO NOT OWN SHUGO CHARA OR ANY OF ITS CHARCTERS......enjoy.....

Chapter 1:Rainy days


(I promise chapter two is better than chapter one!!!)

Chapter 2:Ehhhhh!!!! A new student?!


Chapter 3:Annoying?Class time.....



Chapter 4:Afterschool? Guardian? Why?


Chapter 5: Basketball? Confession? Cousins?





Chapter 6: Why are you telling me? And not her?




Chapter 7: He's gone crazy...I have lost them now....Why me?


Chapter 8:This is his room?




Chapter 9: At home sick?!



Chapter 10 is on a different post in here!!! I just didn't have enough room to put it on here!!! Just keep looking down in this forum!
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Posted 12/17/09
Hm, it's a good start (even though I'm not the biggest fan of Rimahiko, it still looks interesting lol). Keep at it Vanna-chan!
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Posted 12/18/09
Vanna-Chan! Is that the title!??! I love this story!!! Keep going!!!
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Posted 12/18/09

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Vanna-Chan! Is that the title!??! I love this story!!! Keep going!!!


Its sort of the title but now i feel like i want to change the title now......but yeah....

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Posted 12/19/09
Woah, random....nice Rimahiko moment ^_^
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Posted 12/19/09

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Woah, random....nice Rimahiko moment ^_^


woah you actually read it aimz?
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Posted 12/19/09

redfrog253 wrote:


aimzstar24 wrote:

Woah, random....nice Rimahiko moment ^_^


woah you actually read it aimz?


Yep. Doesn't mean I like Rimahiko a lot though (but sometimes you can't help it. Heck, even I'm putting some Rimahiko moments in my fanfic lol). You write nice romance scenes
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Posted 12/19/09

aimzstar24 wrote:


redfrog253 wrote:


aimzstar24 wrote:

Woah, random....nice Rimahiko moment ^_^


woah you actually read it aimz?


Yep. Doesn't mean I like Rimahiko a lot though (but sometimes you can't help it. Heck, even I'm putting some Rimahiko moments in my fanfic lol). You write nice romance scenes :D


Thank you aimz!!! (and go for it!! its really fun!!)
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Posted 12/19/09

redfrog253 wrote:


aimzstar24 wrote:


redfrog253 wrote:


aimzstar24 wrote:

Woah, random....nice Rimahiko moment ^_^


woah you actually read it aimz?


Yep. Doesn't mean I like Rimahiko a lot though (but sometimes you can't help it. Heck, even I'm putting some Rimahiko moments in my fanfic lol). You write nice romance scenes :D


Thank you aimz!!! (and go for it!! its really fun!!)


No probs! (Seriously, it just wrote itself in, and it suited the story so I'm going to keep it, and many put more random Rimahiko moments in lol)
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Posted 12/19/09

aimzstar24 wrote:


redfrog253 wrote:


aimzstar24 wrote:


redfrog253 wrote:


aimzstar24 wrote:

Woah, random....nice Rimahiko moment ^_^


woah you actually read it aimz?


Yep. Doesn't mean I like Rimahiko a lot though (but sometimes you can't help it. Heck, even I'm putting some Rimahiko moments in my fanfic lol). You write nice romance scenes :D


Thank you aimz!!! (and go for it!! its really fun!!)


No probs! (Seriously, it just wrote itself in, and it suited the story so I'm going to keep it, and many put more random Rimahiko moments in lol)


Coolio aimz!!!!!! ( so you couldnt help it!!! lolz!! they are like a side couple in ur fanfic!!awesome!!!)
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Posted 12/23/09
Chapter 7 was full of action! Nice work
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Posted 12/23/09

aimzstar24 wrote:

Chapter 7 was full of action! Nice work :D


Yeah it was.....but it was sad.....
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aimzstar24 wrote:

Chapter 7 was full of action! Nice work :D


Yeah it was.....but it was sad.....


Yeah...Rima's dad is evil...
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Posted 12/23/09

aimzstar24 wrote:


redfrog253 wrote:


aimzstar24 wrote:

Chapter 7 was full of action! Nice work :D


Yeah it was.....but it was sad.....


Yeah...Rima's dad is evil...


Yup! but there is more fluff in chapter 8
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Posted 12/24/09 , edited 12/24/09
LOL i can totally imagine you running to get something that has to do with bleach and nice chappie update soon!~
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