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So like i had said on the wall, i wish to write a new anime story. The problem is that both these new ideas are of the psychological genre. I myself consider this to be one of the toughest genres to do. Both these are pretty much a short summary of the first chapter on each of these. So please read and please leave a comment on which one you believe is best to do or you would like to read. as well any other comments you might have

Water Mirror(Genre: Psychological and Sci-fi)
The main character is a last year elementary school student in preparation to enter middle school. He is an intellectual kid but he doesn't show it often except for when it comes to tests. He said that there is no need to stress out for such easy matters such as class and homework. He sleeps in class or is skipping sleeping off somewhere else. His main hideout is a hidden room located inside the gym, which he mainly uses to skip out on P.E when it or he considers it to be, “Too hot”. Due to his secluded nature, he does not have many friends. His parents allow him to do anything he wants as long as he studies and encourage him to enroll in the top elite school in the city. He has two female friends. One of them considers him more of a rival since he tries so little yet succeeds in so much. The other is the neighbor and the class representative. Then there is the male friend who seems to understand the main character the best. Though there is that relationship, they have yet to consider themselves as best friends. One day it starts raining and the main character didn’t bring in an umbrella. At this point he says “That‘s weird. The clouds weren’t in any formation showing rain. Moreover, the sky looked clear. Oh well.” He started running through the rain, stepping on puddles. He eventually started thinking "I wish there was something worthwhile occur soon". He then comes across another puddle and when he stepped in it, he sank in and blacked out. He then woke up and looks at a mirror and he is now a college student.

He stares at himself in the mirror and tries to analyze things. He then in panic stepped back and activated a message from his future self. The message replies saying “Hello past me. If you haven’t figured it out yet you are in the future. The reason you appear older is because only your mind has been transferred. At this point of time, time travel machinery has been created but bringing anybody from any other time period is illegal. Therefore, I found the loophole and created a machine. This machine allows my brain wavelength to match that of me in the past aka you and transfer you to my body. Unfortunately, from here on you are on your own. While you are in my body, my mind becomes dormant. You may be thinking that this is impossible, well believe it. I don’t have much time left to explain *the message begins to break down* But there is a reason why you… are here….you,… ne-…to….. Help….. Find the… cause… anything happened… do … your.. Best.”. With this information he tries to deduce what the last part of the message. He travels outside and is amazed at the sight. He is unable to to deduce where exactly he is located. He lives as himself and is recognized by his friends from the past but all grown up.

He lives normally trying to live as his future self. His friends get the feeling that he is acting differently. The main character passes it off saying he has been studying a lot. Then a group of masked men appears on a big monitor and every screen around the town. The main character is confused but notices everyone panicking including his friends. The terrorist mention that the are about to explode another city in the world. Everyone starts to run to a hidden shelter though the main character believed it to be a bluff. Thinking it was a bluff he ignored it and played along until a city in Australia was bombed. He then started running around the shelter and came across another water puddle. He accidentally stepped in it and transported to back when he was a kid standing there on the street. He looked at his watch and no time had passed. He was shocked with such an occurrence to occur and stood there on the rain. He now realizes he can transport between his child life to his adult life through water. Nevertheless, he now feels like he needs to discover how to stop the terrorist group from existing.

Now the main character has to figure out who and where are these terrorist. However, he must use his brain since due to his age; no adults want to believe in his words. He must prove to others by actions created by him behind the scenes but perceived to be someone else. But will he be able to figure out who is the enemy in time.

Rule Breaker
(Genre: Psychological and School life)
The main character is a student entering his last year of high school. He goes to an elite school but he is a big troublemaker. He has gone up to crimes inside the schools. Though the teachers are aware of this and his attitude they can’t accuse him because they have no proof. The main character conceals it so well that he continues on doing so and the teachers and students fear him. THe principal has lost several of its best teachers cause of him. By the new term he had to accept new rookie level teachers. The main character is at the top of his class in everything so no one makes any negative assumptions on him so the new teachers fail to recognize his true nature. In the end only 3 new teachers applied and received the job. There are 2 males and one female. One of the male becomes the homeroom teacher for the troublemaker. The main character tended to ignore him and began to listen to his music. The teacher noticed it and confiscated it. The main character and the teacher glared at each other as like a challenge had been issued. All the other students were shocked and began whispering cause of the shock of him going against the troublemaker. In the end the teacher had taken it away and returned it at the end of the day and let him off with a warning. The teacher thought his act was weird and became cautious.

2 days passed and the teacher is seen looking for his phone. He said that it had been missing. A girl is seen crying with the principal by his side. She had told him that he was peeping in the girls’ locker room. The principal had asked to see his phone. The teacher explained he was unaware of where it was since it had been missing. The principal pointed at it on his desk. He was surprised but he noticed that the arrangement on his desk was off which he knew someone had been there, but whom. The new female teacher had told him that the main character delivered some papers to her just recently. He deduced that it was him. But still, he wondered what to do in that situation. It then moves on of him coming out of the principal’s office and a letter asking him to go to the roof.

The main character was there and began saying things like "how does it feel. Being kicked out for something you didn’t do. That just how humankind is. They will believe anything as long as what is perceived is correct". The teacher chuckled. while the student was confused. The teacher said "Who said that I was kicked out". He explained that the phone wasn't his. "Since it had been missing for 2 days. I was suspicious of you. On the first day I cancelled the plan on it and bought a new phone. All the contacts on there were called ahead of time to side with me. I called each contact and told them if they received a call and i don’t say a secret word first. Say that you don't know me at all. That’s right; i temporarily removed myself from their existence. So that phone found was not mine, but someone else’s" The student was shocked but began to laugh. He then stops but shivers in joy and says "what was your name again teacher". The teacher says his full name. The student walks towards the door and says "I have to remember that *as he closes the door* just know that this is only the beginning". The teacher stares at the city and glazes upon it and says to himself "It certainly is.... but i will bring it to an end soon enough".

The student wants to get the teacher expelled and humiliated publicly, thus he will be labeled by the cruel humanity he perceives humankind to be. The teacher wishes to put the student in jail so he won’t be a menace to society, or to himself, when he graduates. Now it has become a mental battle each with his own goal as well as a battle against time. With only one school year left, who will win?



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Posted 1/9/10
I like the first one.
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Posted 1/9/10 , edited 1/9/10
Thank you, thats one for Water Mirror
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ok, so here is what i think. i like both of them, especially that they are pyschological.

Water Mirror: the story's main antagonist would be the terrorist. now, the story is going be, what i'd call "vast". i mean you're talking about the world in here. not just some small community like school. i think this story would have more depth than the second one. but the main character is a middle school kid and this story being pyschological i feel like it won't be realistic enough if the main character is a middle school kid trying to save the world by finding the terrorist. Terrorist! not unless you're going to make him grow til he's a high school student or college before he actually face with the terrorist.

Rule Breaker: like the title. way better than the first. sound more catchy. this one doesn't need the character to age or find clues before he face off with the opponent. so, the battle between them would start off faster than the first one. and since the setting seems to be in school, characters are limited to students and teachers.

that's my opinion, but you know this is just me. others- or you yourself- might think different and disagree with me. so, don't take my opinion way too seriously. though, my opinion is serious.

still, i pick the first one. water mirror. it just seems more interesting to me. but again that's just me. i've tried writing psychological story before, and tell you what- they're pretty hard. especially that i'm the kind of author who doesn't plan the story and just went straight to the computer and type some random shit.

well, good luck! when you post it here. i'll make sure to read it.
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