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Posted 6/25/10
thanks for commenting =3 haha yeah Aki and his mood swings... like I said, hopefully the reason will become clearer later on... first encounters with a person seem difficult to write because a person wouldn't act as they normally would with someone that they are familiar with... unfortunately his gentlemanly personality will be quickly vaporizing >:3

and yeah, neither of them is full japanese... actually... i kind of lost my character profiles at the time of writing that last chapter and hence messed up a bit... originally Aki was French-Japanese and Mei was English-Japanese... looks like it works the other way now =3

So yeah, Mei's character profile (or part of it) should be up by tomorrow or Sunday
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The latest chapter is great as the previous ones. The descriptive words that depicts each characters thoughts & emotions were well written. I'm excited for the next chapter to unfold. How Mei & Aki shall meet again. If they'll know who they really are & recognize the attraction they have for each other (I'm presuming Aki is the "one" 8D).
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Posted 6/27/10 , edited 6/27/10
Thanks for the comment~ haha.. keep imagining the possibilities of how this story progresses if you wish~

On another note, as promised I have added Mei's character biography~ It may be more annoying than anything else though because over half of the more significant details have been omitted. At least... you know what I picture her to look like? xD Aki's comes next, but not until another couple of chapters are released which... could be awhile...? I'm working on the next one now anyways, but it may be a few days before I post it
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Posted 6/27/10
Yeah, I'm like that especially when I love the story I'm reading,lol. No prob & we shall wait for you to post the next chapters. A chapter dedicated to Mei's description & background shall be great in order for us to picture how she really looks like. I'm anticipating Aki's as well ;D
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Ahaha... I have something better than a chapter actually. But that's for much later.


Hmm... random thought as I write chapter 9... I probably introduced the arranged marriage partner way too early... >_> oh well~ at least then I'm not doing it at the cliched point where it becomes the problem when two characters fall in love~
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Posted 11/23/10
AHHH!!! I'm soo in love with this story!! It's soo addicting!! I really liked how you put your words together. It has this light and airy feel to it. It's not too elaborated and it's not too less detail. It's in between the two categories. (I don't know what I'm talking about. XD) I've found another great writer on here!! YAY!! ;D Can't wait for the next chapter!! x]
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