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Okay, that was some shock. WTF? was the only thing to traverse Jaden's mind. My brother doesn't want to go on a quest? Since when did the sky fall?
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Posted 1/26/10 , edited 1/26/10
Two months ago, he would've laughed at his brother's dumbfounded expression - all wide eyes and gaping lips, like carp waiting for children to throw breadcrumbs into lily-covered ponds - but he had changed since then; heck, they all had. If the smiles they shared weren't drawn from madness, they were faked - nothing about them was real any more, they had thrown away their normalcy (along with everything else) on that chaotic night of gunshots and fireworks, thrown everything they were into that ever-flowing (ever-expanding) river of blood, blood and blood...





ffffth sorry that was too much, wasn't it? xD
/kind of got carried away
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Two months ago, he would've laughed at his brother's dumbfounded expression - all wide eyes and gaping lips, like carp waiting for children to throw breadcrumbs into lily-covered ponds - but he had changed since then; heck, they all had. If the smiles they shared weren't drawn from madness, they were faked - nothing about them was real any more, they had thrown away their normalcy (along with everything else) on that chaotic night of gunshots and fireworks, thrown everything they were into that ever-flowing (ever-expanding) river of blood, blood and blood...





ffffth sorry that was too much, wasn't it? xD
/kind of got carried away


(ıts actually against the rules but I'll let you pass this time cus its really GOOD )



Jaden stared into his eyes... through their fake smiles. And simultaneously their smiles faded... "Tell me what happened now Ash... you have blood stains all over you... again"
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"I got in trouble," Ash simply answered, his grin gone from his face. Jaden frowned, knowing this wasn't like him at all. Yet something rang a bell. "You got in trouble with the dryads and nyads didn't you?"
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Posted 1/28/10 , edited 1/28/10
"Its not that..." Ash knew he was constantly worrying about him but it was also annoying him that the first thing he thought was "that"...
"I am sorry," Jaden apologized sitting next to him on Ash's bed noticing his grim expression...
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Posted 1/28/10 , edited 1/29/10
The nyads and dryads were a serious matter being the children of Poseidon and Demeter, the God of the Seas and the Mother of the Earth. The dryads and nyads had made a pact to guard the Earth and keep it healthy so every dryad and nyad were a guardian of a small body of water or forest. Ash and Jaden were an exception, being the only half-ling children known to exist. They shared the same human mother and different fathers, Ash being half-dryad and Jaden half-nyad.

(Is this okay? )
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Posted 1/29/10 , edited 1/30/10
(I don't think they're allowed, so I'm going with your first post, and "borrowing" your idea of half-lings so we can still use it. ;3)

Unfortunately, that was growing more difficult with each passing year, what with forests being torn down and poison seeping into lakes and rivers, dryads and nyads were falling here and there like autumn leaves. The mortals with their growing curiosity and greed were getting dangerously close to discovering the secret of the ancient world - as half-lings, it was Jaden's and Ash's task to prevent that from happening.







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Posted 1/29/10 , edited 1/29/10
Sure, there were demigods. There were tons of them in fact, since most of the gods albeit not all of them often committed one-nighters with humans. Every now and then there was always a god that truly fell in love with a human. And yet there were no half-lings.
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(Pfft. Way to make mine make no sense whatsoever. xD)



In short, they were freaks. Or rather, that's how the rest of the hidden world perceived them - blasphemies, beings that were not supposed to exist and therefore, ignored. Even humans - blissful, ignorant humans - shied away from them, sensing they weren't quite right.
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Not her though. She had never shied away from him. Ash remembered that with a ache in his heart. She had never even once made it look like he was a freak. An abomination of nature. She had never once flinched because of his true self. She had accepted him....... 'How brave of her...' Ash thought with another ache shrinking his heart.... 'Or... how stupid of her....'
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That caused her to die. Or commit suicide. Or get murdered. Who knows? Ash didn't and Jaden didn't. Nor the dryads, nyads, demigods, gods, goddesses or their mother. And yet both brothers fell in love with her.
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Ash irreversably and passionately, Jaden... so quickly... so... unconsciously... It was too late when he was aware of his feelings for her. Since from the first moment.... Dawn knew who she wanted. Her eyes had never seen anyone else but Ash... and Jaden was always a great friend to her. That was all.
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Dawn, Dawn... Oh god. Even her name was like glass - so elegant and fragile like cherry-stained windows lit up by dew and daybreak. But break it and it's like knives, sharp, jagged edges, cutting through him, cutting deep... But still so breakable - just like she had been in those final moments: doll eyes blankly reflecting the fireworks unfolding in the sky. Doll eyes and porcelain skin, rag-doll limbs bent at awkward angels, rosy cheeks growing redder as crimson seeped into her clothes, bled into her hair...
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Both brothers never got to the bottom of her death. Now her entire existence was forgotten, living only in the sub-conscious pit of memories in Jaden and Ash's minds.
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Only to be wrenched back violently, writhing like a decomposing corpse rising from memory's graveyard.

Ash drew a shaky breath, folding his fingers and then unfolding them, as if not quite sure what to do with him. The room had lapsed into an uncomfortable silence, one that he didn't want to break, but had to.

"Jaden, there's something... something I need to tell you..."
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