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making a manga(little help here?)
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To all good-willed people who wants to help..

I'm very confused on what people told me about my manga..(still on process but here is its front page..)
It's story is about Chihiro who is a ghost sweeper(right term?) and on a very great career but her assistant just died out of a freaky ghost encounter...so she's hiring a new one.(and as other shoujo mangas are, there is a boy..predictable..)She found Shinichiro on a vacanted,creepy place and some of his memories are deleted(yah..that's right).Then she made him as his assistant(houseboy pretty much)..and after many ghost encounters and memories Chihiro just discovered that he has GREAT potential...potential much more powerful than hers..

Well that's quite a summary..Please tell me if it isn't quite a good story plot..T.Y.
~Ai-chan
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Ooo, I'd read that c:
I like it, it's totally my kind of story.
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It sounds awesome I totally would read that too. Be sure to give us CR-ers the first volume!
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thank you very much!!!oohh..my first reply!!IM SOOO HAAAPPYYY!!!
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34 / M / calexico CA/mexic...
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wow. Im impressed! you have a dream and you go for it!

do what makes you happy and just go for it. (again)

if you need some tips and stuff I know of websites that can give you some ideas and get some general information on stories and characters.

one is called http://tvtropes.org/pmwiki/pmwiki.php/Main/HomePage basically its a wiki for media!
beware though It can be addicitive but it is a fun site to help you get some ideas and help you improve on your ideas

another site I like is http://www.drunkduck.com/ Other talented people have put their work there for all to see. They also have tips and suggestions for webcomics artists and stuff

Well good luck and do what makes you happy!
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Posted 2/1/10
ooh!!my 3rd one!thankz a lot guys..by the way im just new in making mangas..(im 16 yrs old)so im quite stiffy at these stuff but i love it!^^
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Posted 2/1/10 , edited 2/1/10
This story lack a strong plot it need to make a great story. The story is a bit generic but it may have some potential if you add a strong plot to make it stand from the rest.

Btw, I think it's not wise to ask this sort of question here in this part of the forum least you ask for trolls to ruin your thread. I suggest that you ask the Mod to move this thread to a safer place namely the fanfiction section.


http://www.crunchyroll.com/forumcategory-391058/fan-fiction/

EDIT: Add some interesting character development while you are at it. People are sticklers against stagnant protagonist/antagonist.
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ohh....is that so? thank you Maou068!
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Posted 2/1/10 , edited 2/1/10
sounds interesting!! give it some comedy tho readers wants some smile in reading manga!
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Posted 2/1/10
some comments on my drawings?maybe I'll scan chapter 2(one is quite on the brink of destruction)
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22 / F / Under the scorchi...
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Would love to read it.
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It's good, (I guess), well, I can't judge it as REALLY good if I haven't read it yet...
And I, myself, is in the middle of creating a manga too...
plus, this should be in the manga section, right..?
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24 / M / Hmm.. somewhere l...
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Twist the plot... what a interesting thing it would be if her new assistant was some form of ghost... It would be interesting to see how things turn out from there.

Interesting plot. Try your best at it, hopefully you make it japan! *thumbs up*
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Oh wow thats amazing!
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25 / M / tabi tabi
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how about making the boy a hermaphrodite demon.

now that is what i call some real plot twist.
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