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making a manga(little help here?)
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Posted 2/1/10

lolz223 wrote:

Twist the plot... what a interesting thing it would be if her new assistant was some form of ghost... It would be interesting to see how things turn out from there.

Interesting plot. Try your best at it, hopefully you make it japan! *thumbs up*


mmm..it will be like some sort of ghost sweeper mikami...
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Posted 2/9/10
sounds great! someone should die tho
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Posted 2/9/10
die?...hmm..kind of great twist but..im thinking..
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Posted 2/16/10
i agree with lolz, twisting the plot will make it more interesting. Other than that it sounds amazing and i would read it.
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Posted 2/25/10
neh! me a mangaka too! got so many great ideas..i actually have over 20 stories...3 of which are in progress..all i can suggest to you is that believe in yourself and never give up! be the best u can be!!!
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Posted 3/9/10
I would totally read it 8D.
As a shoujo nerd the things I look for in a manga is twists, romance (a lot), and comedy.
Maybe you could put in another male character as well, one that maybe is in to the girl? 8D
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Posted 3/10/10
I would totally love to read this manga. Maybe you should scan it somewhere..? I would really read it
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21 / F / Behind you
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Posted 3/14/10
More interesting plot than some mangas around there, lol
Posted 3/24/10
You could make the plot more complicated. And try to choose a genre for it before starting. You dont have to abide by the genres you choose before writing, but it helps a lot to keep you on track.
But overall, i think itll make a nice story. make sure to post it on cr and ill read it. Good luck
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Posted 4/6/10
this sound so great i want to read now!! i hope u do ur best so we can all read
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Posted 4/11/10
sorry for the very late response! still working on some more character designs! ....tsunderres maybe..
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21 / M / Harem Paradise
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Posted 5/28/10

sakuradancer wrote:



To all good-willed people who wants to help..

I'm very confused on what people told me about my manga..(still on process but here is its front page..)
It's story is about Chihiro who is a ghost sweeper(right term?) and on a very great career but her assistant just died out of a freaky ghost encounter...so she's hiring a new one.(and as other shoujo mangas are, there is a boy..predictable..)She found Shinichiro on a vacanted,creepy place and some of his memories are deleted(yah..that's right).Then she made him as his assistant(houseboy pretty much)..and after many ghost encounters and memories Chihiro just discovered that he has GREAT potential...potential much more powerful than hers..

Well that's quite a summary..Please tell me if it isn't quite a good story plot..T.Y.
~Ai-chan


I want to read it
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Posted 6/5/10
that is so awesome, is this one of those stories that's like a bit creepy. It's still awesome. Now you just need to work out the plot to make it into a doujinshi. I love the drawings.
Posted 6/6/10
very creative. keep doing what you like to do. :]
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Posted 6/10/10
It sounds really interesting!
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