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making a manga(little help here?)
Posted 6/12/10
wow sounds good I'm making a manga too but mine is way different. its really hard to do the actual panel story isn't it? But making characters is fun ! Good luck!

PS. I think plot twist are great ! by far my favorite plot twist would be from Claymore (manga)
(this thread just caught my eye)
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Posted 6/13/10
I didn't quite understand your plot. I think you should re-type it and make it much more better. You have to write your plot in a way to captivate the reader's mind, by making it sound interesting. Try writing your plot as if your presenting this manga to an audience or a famous anime producer. I think that'll help. Also, try using stronger vocabulary. So if you have microsoft word 2003, use the thesaurus or the dictionary. Trust em I use to write a lot in there, and now my writing and vocabulary has improved.

PS - I admire you for being passionate about what you do. Keep up the good work
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Posted 6/15/10
Ahhhh, I love potential. That's why I see the stories I see, if the main character has a lot of potential. Or, perhaps, a inner demon...
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Posted 6/25/10
what do i do if i want to draw manga but in the half story im I'm daunted
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Posted 6/29/10
this is awsome ive drawn a couple of mangas but this is great i want to read it right now
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Posted 7/6/10
lol well your story is great ^_^ I love the artwork as well! But you probably should add something...different. ^_^ A twist? >.o I dont know how to explain but I guess the story is great but I feel I already read or heard it before somewhere. Argh....I'm terrible at explaining things...im sorry ;-;
Your doing great though! And again, love your artwork!
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Posted 7/12/10
That's a pretty good idea serpentura! I think that idea would add a twist.
But anyway the manga sounds awesome so far and i would love to read it.
And wait. How about the girl is in love with the boy. But thay can't be in love and she can't tell him because he's a powerful demon. So if they love eachother the girl could die? Bit odd. Very big twist. You can take it if you want but if you don't like it, don't use it. I don't really care. It was just an idea.....
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Posted 7/14/10
I have attempted many times to write a manga and have successfully..... Failed. But i have found out one thing People don't like repetitive stories so try not to make it the same thing happening over and over and over the same plot bores people to an extent hardcore fans will bail out eventually if you don't make it exciting enough make sure there are a lot of twists but not too many that no one can follow the story at all
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Posted 7/31/10
ohh..geez..its been a while since im ol again...well the first few chapters of clandestine was finished already but i cant post it...O_o""..i dont have any scanner...nor any computer...im just renting at the shops.....(depressing....-_-"")
I really dont want to disappoint you guys....so i am trying very hard to earn and have my own things...
Oh!and thank you again for the posts!!really help me!..^O^~moe
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Posted 8/10/10
Maybe have some one who can absorb the ghost for power?
Posted 8/22/10
Never give up!
thats the advice i want to give, just keep on moving forward and youll be once step closer to your dream!.
good luck!
Posted 8/29/10
i like it!
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