The Notebook
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The Notebook
Chapter 1: The Start
It was 1923 when Edward Cullen was in college studying to be in music . He has been going to school for a few years now then one day a girl had walked in into his classroom they weretalking engish so it was the girls first day Bella Swan . She went up to the teacher she gave him a piece of paper then he showed her the empty chair she took it and placed her things down then she took a piece of paper out to take notes on a topic she already knew . Edward was just sitting there taking notes himself and once in awhile he look at her then Bella would look at him . Class was almost over then the bell rang and Edward was out of his chair at once Bella just sat there thinking to herself "did I do something wrong?"
no she thought to herself then she got up and started walking to her next class. She took her seat did the same thing as she did as she did in the class but there was no one next to her this time. Took notes then the bell rang again she got up then went to lunch and got some food she ate with a group of friends she got to meet a few days ago then she saw Edward Cullen walking through with a group of friends. They didn't have any food they jus went to the table and sat there and said nothing they would say a few things to one another but then the table was quite again . Then lunch was over and everyone was leaving to get to their next class . Bella had gotten her things and leaving the room to go to P.E . now Bella can't not play sports well in the game she tried but then the ball came she hit someone's head Mike Newton . He had the ball in his hands and he ran towards Bella and they started talking and bella had said I am sorry Mike said no problem Isabella no my name is Bella . Sorry about that Bella . So it was the end of the day and Bella got finished getting dressed and then she went to her car started it and she couldn't get out because there was another car and it was a really nice car . Edward Cullen was driving the car stoped and he waited for the rest of his family to come to the car he looked away at Bella then looked away and he was off and Bella drove herself home her hair was wet so she dried it on the way home she got home she saw Charlie in the living room sleeping she woke him up then she started dinner they had dinner Charlie asked Bella how school was she said it was fine . Dinner finished and bella cleaned up then opened the computer homeowork she saw her mom wrote her an e-mail her she read it e-mailed her back and then she finished her homework then got ready for bed and then went to sleep . End of chapter .
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It has a good structure
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Aww thxs want a few postes before posting the next chapter how many postes ???

Aww thxs • also wrote in the wall •

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Posted 2/14/10
wow i really love it was goood I can't wait unit the next chapter
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Thxs glad u liked it going to keep my readers waiting kk is that kk????
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alright I can't wait I love it i add your group to my fav
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Thxs for adding the group .......just trying to help the group
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alirght I will try
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Kk trying is not that hard .........
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Aeko2's Story: The Notebook


You know Plagiarism is against the law right?

Edit: 02/19/2010: http://en.wikipedia.org/wiki/Twilight_(novel)

Not her story...

delete this forum please... You don't need a wanna be writer posting Plagiarism in your forums.
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There has been complaints saying that this is a rip off of Twilight. I'm afraid I have to close this forum!
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