The Last Song
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Posted 2/27/10 , edited 3/13/10

The Last Song










The names, places and titles used in this story are completely fictitious. Any resembles to anything or anyone real is merely a coincidence.


















Fear sneaks upon me from the corners of my blackening mind. I can only feel the cold and the eternity of the nothingness. My consciousness cannot comprehend it. I can’t feel my body anymore. I know where my hands are but they are unreacted to my orders.

I was told there should be a light here… The famous light at the end of the tunnel. Of course if this is a tunnel. But it must be… I know I am dying. So this must be the tunnel. Then… where is the light?

The cold is compressing me. I can still feel the shadow of the pain in my head… The pain I suffered for so long. At least it would be gone. I am not going to miss that…

I am sorry Mother… I am so sorry… Tell Ky and Lea I am sorry. I know you understand that.

I feel so sleepy. I want to let it take me…and… I will. I can’t fight this anymore… Velvet blackness, the sense of drifting away… It’s so easy…



What is this?

I feel something warm.

On my hand. Is it Mom? Holding my hand? Can they really understand I am leaving?

I smell something. My heart gives a twitch at the familiarity of it.

It’s impossible. It can’t be…

And then…

He sings…



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Posted 3/6/10
It's so unique and sorrowful. It's not like the other stories (even mangas) when someone is dying of an illness or cancer. Every once in a while, a story or book (xD) will pop up. It will be so exquisite and intricate that it has become a genre of its own. I'm quite certain that this story has its own type of genre that could not be mimicked.
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Posted 3/13/10
They say... a picture paints a thousand words.
In here, a thousand word paint a beautiful picture.
Simply Amazing.
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Posted 4/2/10
Like Aoi says: Coming Soon
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Posted 4/1/10
I'm excited to see the next Chapter
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Posted 4/23/10
Just checking if there's a new entry already. LOL~ Hey Elmira 8P
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