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Posted 3/1/10
whatever you say, and how much lacking you may see us, but I totally understood this story and truly liked it. I think you are using a great topic, and excellent, rich meterial. One of a kind historical tragedy, harnessed with your creative talent. I think it will be inspirationally good (as it already started to be) and if you can continue till the end, both you and we will see the writing of a masterpiece from scratch...
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hahah love the title
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I was thinking of rewriting Night of the Angel into chapters but it's just a suggestion. I don't know if I'll do it.
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i think you should give it a try...
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Sakura!!! Another well written story!! Or essay.. o.o At first, I didn't really understand Angel and the spirit part but then I did. xD It was pretty interesting to see from a different part of view besides the original lovers' view. ;D I was so sad when I got to the part that they had to board the ship since I was thinking that Lee and Angel would separate. BUT!! You got me there! xD They didn't! YAY! Aside from a few grammar mistakes, it was a great in depth re-telling of the Titanic story. ;]

Oh! I don't really understand the last part.. maybe cuz I'm slow. xD Was it suppose to be a joke when Angel said not to light the boat on fire?
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