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write every good story that you can write


the theme will be;

how can you find love in the middle of the war and how can you also loose it in the middle of the war

got it so easy right so write your best love war story here hahahahahah
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(I'm not exactly sure of the time setting and place, so I'll create my own)

Finding love in the middle of war is easy yet difficult. If one ever finds that he/she is feels attached or longing for someone, be it boy or girl, it may mean that you have developed a feeling for them. If one finds that the opposite have also feelings for them, the two will soon become attached and form a relationship. As easy as a relationship is formed, it may be broken, here I tell a sad tale of two lovers on the battle field.

Not long ago, there was the War of Enact, there was two people, both on opposing side in this war. The two ships, Eternal (part of the military) and Ptolemaios (private army who is trying to eradicate war) have been fighting for dominance. One girl and one boy met on the battlefield by fate. The boy named Hiroshi and the girl named Leesa.

"HIROSHI! GET YOUR LAZY BUTT DOWN HERE!" a voice yelled through the intercom. Hiroshi sat up from his bed. "Mmm..." Hiroshi stretched. He got off the bed and got dressed. Hiroshi was quite handsome for his age. He was tall and has brown hair, brown eyes. Eye candy for the girls (and maybe guys) Hiroshi walked down the hallway into the cafeteria. "Morning peoples" Hiroshi greeted. "Morning? Morning? It's 11!" a purpled haired boy yelled. "Tieria, calm down." a man about 20 said, laying a hand on Tieria's shoulder. "Sorry, I was up all night studying the machinery of the Gundam." Hiroshi said sheepishly. "You're always defending him, Lockon!" Tieria looked away in disgust.

~~MEANWHILE ON THE ETERNAL~~

Leesa looked out a window and sighed. "Hey, why the long face?" Johan asked. "It's just that, it's so dead and depressing up here. I want to..." Leesa paused. "You want to..." Johan pressed on. "I want to go down there" Leesa looked out the window to see the earth. "I want to too, but not just yet. We'll go soon." Johan gave a reassuring smile. "It's breakfast now, then we have to meet in the debriefing room." Johan floated (walked?) out the room. Leesa gave the Earth one last look and left.

After breakfast, Leesa and fellow coordinators: Micheal, Johan, Luke, Aria and Karen, stood in the briefing room waiting for their captain. The door opened and in floated the captain. Everyone saluted, "Good morning, Captain Kujo" Kujo nodded. "I'm going to send the six of you down to earth." Kujo started. Johan smiled and looked at Leesa. Leesa's face lighted up. "I want you to observe the surroundings. You'll be going as yourself, but mention to no one about us. There is a house down there and a driver will bring you to it. Go pack your things, anything necessary, you'll be down there for a while. Dismissed." Kujo left the room.
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"Oh....I feel weird." Karen said as she stumbled a bit. Luke helped stabilize her. "Thanks" Karen gave a weak smile. Arianne and the rest looked around for their driver. Not very far from them was Hiroshi and company. "Man, finally! A vacation!" Allelujah stretched. Tieria looked around, "I still prefer space than gravity." Lockon laughed, "Now, now."

THE NEXT DAY

"DUDES! Let's hit the beach!" Hiroshi yelled as soon as he got out of the car. The crew of Ptolemaios decided to go to the beach the next day. Tieria shook his head, "No manners." he muttered. "Come on, Tieria, relax! It's not like it's going to end the world!" Lockon said. Allelujah found a spot and set up their stuff. Hiroshi was swimming until he accidentally bumped into Johan. Hiroshi quickly got up and said "Sorry about that, didn't see you." Johan smiled and said "No problem."

Not far, Arianne, Leesa and Karen were playing with a beach ball. They were chatting about boys. "I swear, Johan looks hawt in his swimming suit. He looks like a model." Arianne said. "Nuh-uh, not as hawt as Luke." Karen disagreed. "What do you think, Leesa?" Arianne asked. Leesa was looking off in the distance. Unknown to Leesa, her companions stood beside her and looked at what she was looking at. Of course, Leesa was just in a trance, but to Arianne and Karen, they saw her looking at Hiroshi's back. "Ohh...I see." Arianne gave a wicked smile. Karen smiled back. "You're looking at that browned haired boy." Arianne said wickedly. "Huh? What?" Leesa snapped out of her trance. "Come on. Let's go over there." Karen pointed at Hiroshi's pack. Arianne and Karen dragged Leesa behind them.

"Oh, come on, Tieria, just get in the water!" Hiroshi said. "Stay away from me!" Tieria was trying to avoid getting wet due to Hiroshi was dripping. Allelujah was snickering and Lockon coughed, trying to cover his laughs. Tieria looked at Hiroshi with disgust. "Hello boys." Karen greeted. Allelujah, Tieria, Lockon and Hiroshi all looked at the girls. "Uh...Hi?" Lockon was uncertain about what to say. Arianne whistled, "You chose a group of hotties." Lockon raised an eyebrow then stood. "Sorry ladies, I'm taken. But you can have the rest." Lockon picked up his laptop and walked towards the cafe near the beach, with a smile. "LOCKON!" Tieria was angry.

"Come on, it'll be fun!" Karen said, trying to get Tieria to tag along. Allelujah, Hiroshi, Arianne and Leesa were already in the water. "You know what, you stubborn goat, I give up" Karen walked away to join the others. Johan joined the group, Micheal went off flirting with other girls and Luke was tanning or as he called it 'Sleeping'.

As the day wore on, the 2 groups had tons of fun. Lockon came back who knows when, and Tieria fell asleep. "Guys! Time to go!" Lockon called from shore. "COMING!" Hiroshi yelled back. "Aw...You have to go already?" Arianne asked. "Yea, sorry." Allelujah said sheepishly. "HEY! I know let's trade e-mails." Karen said, waving her phone. So everyone traded e-mails and went merrily on their way.

As days past, the 2 groups met together and had fun! But then they had to separate and leave. "E-mail me!" Arianne called. "Will do!" Allelujah said. Tieria rolled his eyes and looked away. One on the *orbital train, Hiroshi said, "I gotta say, that Leesa was pretty hot." Allelujah snorted, "Leesa? Arianne was hot, dude. Get you eyes checked." Tieria stood and left the cabin. "Alright, alright, calm down." Lockon said.

~~MEANWHILE~~

Arianne sighed, "Allelujah was hot." Karen giggled, "Nah, I thought Tieria was hot. I like the silent types." Micheal rolled his eyes and mimicked Karen. Luke coughed to cover his laugh. Johan just smiled. Leesa just stared out the window. "Hey, Leesa, are you ok?" Johan asked. "Yeah, fine." Leesa replied. "I bet she's thinking of Hiroshi." Karen said. "IS not!" Leesa yelled. "Is too" Karen replied. Everyone in the cabin laughed.

Of course, after returning the two crews returned to their ships, they led their normal lives as a coordinator. Checking in with the captain, going over missions, repairing their mobile suits, joke around, so on. Until....


"Alright, guys, I need you to go back down to Earth to pick somethings up for me as well as info gathering." the Ptolemaios' captain, Sumeragi, said. "You'll meet up with Wang Liu Mei and she'll give you what I want. I want you to while you're their see people's reaction to what we're doing. Understood?" Everyone nodded.

Once again, fate began to tug at the strings, making the two lovers meet once again.


After coming out of the theater, Hiroshi and company started chatting about it. "No way, man, I thought that Miss. Aria was portrayed better." Allelujah said. "Nah, Carla was." Hiroshi argued back. Just then there was a girl running and accidentally bumped into Hiroshi, making both of them fall. "Ah! I'm sorry, I didn't..." the girl trailed off. Hiroshi looked up to see Leesa. Leesa's eyes darted around. "Leesa! What a coincidence!" Hiroshi exclaimed. Leesa looked worried. "Hey, are you ok? You look kinda pale." Hiroshi helped Leesa up. In the earpiece, Arianne said, "Hurry up and get out of there! There's no time to loiter. You need to get to the destination." Leesa looked from Hiroshi to her escape route. "Hi, Hiroshi. I'm kinda busy right now, can I talk to you later?" Leesa hurriedly asked. "Uh, yea, sure." Hiroshi was confused. Leesa darted off down the side walk.

Later on, Hiroshi and crew were called out on a 'date.' Everyone had tons of fun. Johan, Micheal, and Lockon wandered away from the group. Slowlt, Leesa and Hiroshi wandered away too. "So, how it going?" Hiroshi said after an awkward silence. "Fine....I guess." Leesa said. "You guess?" Hiroshi stopped and looked in to the distance. Leesa looked away, "I wanna tell you something...." Leesa said timidy. "Hm? What it is?" Hiroshi asked. "I really, really, like you!" Leesa said. Hiroshi looked at Leesa surprised, "I...I don't know what to say. You completely read my mind!" Hiroshi said and swept Leesa up in to his arms. Not far, Arianne had confessed as well. Such sweet words, such sweet scenes, but soon to be broken.

As fate had twisted strings for the fated to meet, it also had twisted strings to make them fight on the battle field. Days after returning, the Ptolemaios crew were called to battle stations.

"Feldt! Have all Gundams ready!" Sumeragi said. "On it!" Feldt called back. "Christina, help the pilots launch!" Sumeragi ordered. "Roger!" Christina said. "All systems go, Kyrios, ready for launch." Christina said through the intercom. "I have control," Allelujah replied. Same happened with the others.

On the opposing side, the others were being launched as well. "Throne Eins, ready to launch" Arianne said. "Alright, Eins, you can launch." This process went through the others as well.

Not far from the ships, the two sides clashed. "Formation E-32" Lockon said to the others. "Right!" Everyone got in to position. Lockon and Hiroshi created a diversion for Allelujah and Tieria as they attacked from behind. This battle wore on, until.....

TO BE CONTINUED AFTER THE BREAK.


CONTINUED.....

This battle wore on, until a voice spoke, "Why are you guys doing this?" All the Gundams stopped. "Arianne?" Allelujah whispered. "What?" Tieria asked. "It's Arianne...." Allelujah repeated to the others. "Then that means....Leesa is out there." Hiroshi stopped cold at the thought. "Guys! We're in the battlefield right now! Don't let your emotions get to you!" Lockon yelled. Hiroshi shook off the thought and continued their fight. The battle wore on for what seemed like hours, but soon, the Ptolemaios crew saw a change in a Gundam. Leesa was tired and couldn't handle anymore fighting. "Leesa, hang on, I'm coming!" Karen said. Arianne was engaged with the Kyrios. "Why, Arianne? Why?" Allelujah asked. "I don't have a choice!" Arianne cried.

Lockon, who was at a distance, shot at Micheal's Gundam. "Come and catch me, you creep!" Micheal teased. Lockon, displeased with the attitude, decided to shoot straight on. The shot hit Micheal's Gundam, Throne Drei, on the left leg. "MICHEAL!" Johan yelled. "Micheal, falle back and get back to Eternal, we'll take care of this. I'll cover you!" Luke said coming into position. "I'm ending this right now." Lockon searched for Luke's Gundam. Leesa, who saw this, disengaged from her fight with Hiroshi and rushed to Luke. Lockon pressed the trigger and as if everything slowed down, Leesa's gundam pushed Luke's away, so in turn Leesa's got shot straight on in the chest where the cockpit was. "Nooooo~" Karen cried, blinded by fury, she flew head on towards Dynames, Lockon's machine. In protection, Lockon fired at Karen, deliberately missing. "YOU KILLED HER! YOU KILLED LEESA!" Karen yelled. "Damn it, I have no choice!" Lockon muttered then shot at her weapon first, warning her, then her gundam's leg.

Not far, a flare went up as a signal of retreat, then another in a different color as a sign of surrender. Ptolemaios, too, sent a flare up as retreat soon after Eternal's.

Inside the Ptolemaios, Hiroshi leaned against the wall of the briefing and cried. "I'm sorry, I wan't aiming at her." Lockon said, apologizing. "It isn't your fault. She did it by herself," Sumeragi said. Hiroshi looked at the crew who was comforting him, he gave a sad smile, "Well, that didn't turn out as expected. I guess fate's just too cruel." Hiroshi wiped his eyes.

On the Eternal, others were trying to calm Karen down. "It was her decision, Karen, respect it." Arianne said quietly. "I should've been the one that got shot." Karen hit the wall. "Then Leesa would be angry with herself. " Johan said. Karen silently cried on Arianne's shoulder and her friends comforted her.

Well, children, days after this horrendous event took place, the 3 nations decided to make peace with one another and stop fighting. Ptolemaios was forgotten and hidden away, until it was needed again. As cruel as fate was, it was kind, it reunited Allelujah with Arianne and Tieria, surprisingly, with Karen. Lockon disappeared but communicates with his friends often. Hiroshi, well, let's say, he moved on, but will never forget Leesa. Every year, both crews of Ptolemaios and Eternal, minus Lockon, will gather at Leesa's grave to visit and renew old memories.


As said in the beginning, finding love in war is nice, having someone to depend on, but as easy as it was gained, it can snap like a twig on the battlefield. But nonetheless, love can always be found, where ever you are.



*This sets place in the future where fossil fuel had ran out so the planet is using solar energy. Orbital trains are trains that go into space.

Those in blue are the narrator the rest is the story. Okay, I lied, the one's in blue is just stating settings and sorta narrating but as in the story, there is narrating in most paragraphs. But I hope you enjoyed.

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cool cool story i love the story i want to cry already but i think they should remember leesa as one of the bravest pilot

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in return heres mine but im not sure about their quotes

it's from gundam seed

its the love story of kira yamato and flay allster

in the colony heliopolis there are some collage students that talking in the side walk


when kira, mirallia and tolly made it on their school sai argylle give a project to kira from their proffessor
no one know's that flay and is engage to each other.
a few minutes later the group of athrun zala attact the place were the group is been studying
everyone is rushing through the scape pad but kira saw a girl that is running through the bASE of some military facilities
kira followed her


kira run and look for other scape pad but captain marrue ramius saw him



kira run to cpt. ramius at the time he reached her athrun zala fired capt. ramius when he don't have anymore bullets left he get his knife and tried to point it on capt. ramius.

kira saw his childhood friend athrun zala

kira; athrun? athrun is that you?
athrun didn't say anything

when ramius finally recovered the fired on athrun so that he'll choose to find another gundam he pushed kira on the cockpit and followed
after they get out on the base a ZAFT pilot tried to stop them. ramius is the one that is piloting kira fels so nervous about this that he saw his friends running below them that he have no other choice but to fight.

kira; what the heck! how can you pilot this thing with this old ...... this is it thats all
( he's talking about the weapons )

after a day

he saw a scape pad that been stranded there happy to say that flay is one of the people that inside of the scape pad

the archangel crew eagerly anticipate their rendevous w/ the 8th fleet advance force none more than flay the daughter of an alliance minister. when the crew of rau lecruset attacked the 8th fleet flay saw her father's death and she took lacus clyne as an hostage he blame everything to kira ( flay volunteer on the alliance )

UHMM I CANT REMEMBER THE OTHER HAPPENINGS

when they landed on earth kira is been sick flay is taking care of him after a few hours flay came to visit kira but she's handling a paper flower that's been given to kira by a little kid kira cried and the next is i dont want to say it for olders only

can i get to the end already i al tiered of this

ok flay is become an hostage of rau, kira heard of it in the battle field he rushed to flay's side but athrun stoped him flay is beem got by the dominion. when flay is in the dominion his been thinking of kira.

meanwhile on the eternal where kira is he also missed flay.

in the final battle natarlie vadgiruel ordered to abandoned ship
flay is so happy that she's going to see kira again

kira and rau is having a fight. rau saw the scape pad from the dominion he fired at it. kira did protect the scape pad but still it blows kira cried alot that he also killed the one who killed flay









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All Gundam related. Nice story. ^__^
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All Gundam related. Nice story. ^__^
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All Gundam related. Nice story. ^__^


thank you your story is also cool
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