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Posted 4/2/10
Potential writers, you need to write a fight scene, an introduction to your character (general traits) and a converstation (that should have actions scattered around).

In CAS, we don't just write with our own characters - it's not a role-play. It's a story where we all manipulate other people's characters and write with them, to make it more interesting.
Posted 4/16/10
what? seriously what do you mean a converstation (that should have actions scattered around)?and why does it seem like i'm the only one applying here?
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It seems like you're the only one applying here because you ARE. Our first Support Group got shut down by a mod who got very annoyed with us all (Rule Number Ten had just come into effect). So... Write a short introduction to your character , then a conversation with the heading Conversation, a fight, headed Fight and then we'll read it and decide. Make it good.
Posted 4/16/10
whoa...you guys are spooky. talk about obsession...dun get me wrong, it's cool. Sorta. Okay, deal. I'll write, tho I hv no idea what you guys mean by writing...but not today, gotta run. Work! Dun kick me out just yet..
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Posted 4/17/10 , edited 4/19/10
Writing as in... writing. Imagine a fight and write about it... you know... imagination on paper... forum... whatever...

Like this:

Fight (copied over with a few edits):

'I don't think so,' said Serena, flipping backwards. Pulling her wire taut, she blocked his sword, then flicked it at his legs. He lept backwards, swinging at her again and catching her wire with a force that jarred her small body. And so they fought. Swinging and blocking. Shekul was enjoying the fight. She lashed at him and caught his wrist, she tugged and he was surprised by her strength as he flew through the air, he flipped in mid air and wrapped his hand around the wire and pulled, jerking her off her feet. He landed on the ground and Serena landed on top of him and he fell down, hitting his head hard. Serena jumped off immediately, before his head could stop spinning enough for him to reach out and grab her and kill her. The wire had cut his hand deeply and he released it gently. He reached in his pocket and took out a bandage and in a quick flip wrapped it around his hand. Serena picked up her wire again and turned to face him, just as he was getting up. His head was bleeding a little, but it hardly seemed to impair his fighting. He swung at her, and she once again blocked it with her wire. This time when she flicked it, it wrapped around his wrist, slicing into the skin.

He grinned at her and pulled, Serena once again flew through the air. He was waiting for her, his fist dug deep into her gut and she coughed blood then he turned and kicked her sending her flying and landing on the ground, bouncing, before becoming still.
He held out her wire in front of him. 'Say 'bye bye'.' He said and then seemed to disappear. Serena only saw a shimmer of a blade before he appeared once again standing where he had been. Her wire had been cut into shreds. He raised it into the air and a strong wind blew and the shreds flew away.

'Little girly, ran into the fray. Little girly, had a tough day. Little girly, meets a scary guy. Little girly, is gonna die!' he sang then launched for the final kill.

Conversation (also copied over and edited a little):

'Now why would I ever help a SF soldier?' Shekul asked, his eyes twinkling.

'Because you absolutely adore me, and you don't want me to die?' asked Serena, a mischievious grin on her face.

Shekul burst out laughing while the soldiers behind her squawked in terror.

'Then follow me, Milady.' Shekul bowed with a mock flourish and stuck out his arm so that Serena could take it. Serena took it with a smile while the soldiers flurried about, afraid for their "soon to be martyred Lt.Gen." as they had begun reffering to Serena under their breaths.

Shekul and Serena talked and laughed and anyone looking at them wouldn't believe just weeks ago they had been trying their hardest to kill one another.

'How do you know where the base is?' Serena asked, raising her eyesbrow.

'Ask me no questions and I will tell no lies,' he said solenmly, his eyes dancing with laughter.

Suddenly they heard splashes of water up ahead.

'Water!' the soldiers yelled, already racing towards the oasis.

'Anyone would think they hadn't seen water for a week,' commented Serena. 'It was only about five hours. I think.' Shekul grinned and walked towards the palm trees dotting the water.

'Let's rest here for a bit. It's cooler.'

Serena sat under a tree and leant back, closing her eyes and sighing. 'I forgot what it was like to actually have shade that wasn't a tent.' Suddenly they heard yells from the water side. Serena opened her eyes as there was a crash that shook the small oasis, and watched a couple of palm trees topple to the floor. Two girls in the pool were hugging each other, and the third was standing up, seemingly having tired to punch Shekul, without effect. He was standing there, looking slightly surprised.

Serena hauled herself lightly to her feet and went down to the pool edge. Hovering over the water, she headed towards the girl standing up, and bent to whisper in her ear.

'You might want to duck back into the water. For someone who hates people watching them, you sure are showing a lot.'

Yurissa squeaked and ducked back down, her face burning. Serena smiled and pulled Shekul away.

'Stop spying on the pretty girls, Shekul. There are plenty more, but most don't like being watched while bathing.'


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*a red hole appears in the sky as several Creatures carved through*

Masuta: "You will never be able to win!" *Masuta is a man who always wears black. his skin is pain, but he is not a vampire. he is the Demon King. he is madly in love with a human girl who is not really human. her name is Tria.*

Namida: "I won't let you!" *Namida is an angel who is also in love with Tria. he usually wears blue. he looks depressed because he knows the truth about both Masuta and Tria. his job is to protect Tria no matter what.*

Tria: "Stop this! Leave this town alone, Masuta!" *Tria is a Demon Hunter. she is able to use magic, ut she has hidden it from Masuta. she is in love with Masuta, but has some feelings for Namida. she wishes they could all get along. she can not go against her duty and must kill Masuta.*

Masuta: *looks at Tria then at Namida* "It seems the party has been interrupted. Let us continue somewhere else." *there was a flash of purple light as Masuta and Namida were sucked into a different world.*

(there fight will continue as Tria must find the 13 Powers of Giza, which are people that are very powerful and have different powers.)
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Posted 4/26/10
No. That's role play style. We don't do role play. Did you not read the examples? We want description and conversations, not random explanations and asterixes. We WRITE. As in, book-style like.
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Hi Yuki-kyo-kira, sorry about this but Im going to have to say no. We dont have this style of story writing in the group. Maybe if you adapt your style to suit our stories we'll gladly take you in CAS=).
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Posted 4/26/10
And maybe this is hypocritical with the about of bad grammar in CAS, but please attempt to sort it out, even just a little bit. Oh, and it won't be so much adaption as forcing your writing to our style. And it won't be easy at the start (you'll be the Clueless on our front page).
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Posted 4/26/10 , edited 4/27/10


How about this?

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Posted 4/26/10

Yuki-kyo-kira wrote:



How about this?



Yuki-kyo, its better than the first, it truly is. but our group dosen't write in First person, i'm not expecting you to write another story or whatever, but maybe if you could take your current story and turn it in a third person format... if you don't quiet understand 3rd person I suppose you could Message me and I could help you with what 3rd Person really is

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Posted 4/27/10
And although it's better, it's still not really the same standard. Our group, though full of mistakes is not 'he did... she did... he responded...' I'm sorry, I don't think you'll fit like that. I also think you'll get pestered an awful lot if you do that. I still vote no.
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I fixed it and turned it into 3rd Person!
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Posted 4/28/10

Imagination-Enigma wrote:


Yuki-kyo-kira wrote:



How about this?



Yuki-kyo, its better than the first, it truly is. but our group dosen't write in First person, i'm not expecting you to write another story or whatever, but maybe if you could take your current story and turn it in a third person format... if you don't quiet understand 3rd person I suppose you could Message me and I could help you with what 3rd Person really is



I think Yuki has potential =D, though Yuki IF you join you have to stick to the story line we have and might have to adapt your writing alot more to suit our story format. If you're cool with that, I think we can have you in =3

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Posted 4/28/10 , edited 4/29/10
But... okay... with a LOT of adaption, it COULD work. Maybe.




Okay, fine. I'm sorry, I don't think it will. Not well.
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