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looks good to me and dont worry, youll get plenty of practice =D
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The little boy did a clean backflip as he landed on his toes a few metres back "You look fun, Wanna play?", he giggled.

The two vampires stood before the little boy looking greatly annoyed, they felt looked down upon.
The female vampire hissed violently at the boy, "Pesky Human.. you think you can destroy us superior creatures.. Prepare to meet your doom!!"

Crystalline Shadows!


The little boy seemed to care less at the she-vampires summons, even when he saw he was surrounded by mini shadow creatures covered in crystal armor, he continued to grin mischeviously.. As if he had done something wrong.

As the crystalline shadows approached the little boy, they began to munch on his toes, slowly biting them until they bled. But the little boy continued to smile as suddenly a forcefully yet slightly comfortable breeze blasts from all sides pushing the little creatures awkwardly onto their faces, followed by a brilliant yet painful light shone brightly from the little boy's body.

The little creatures then evaportated into light as the little boy stood there, giant white wings shooting out of his back, his eyes turning light pink, and his whole body glowing brilliantly.

"I am not mere human. I am nostale. The Angel of Mercy."



That okay? > 3 <

Sorryy.. Im not used ta writing third person D: Im more of the personal writer or rp writer x) but thats kinda how it is for me..

In english class i get straight As whenever we're just doing personal writing, diaries, or stuff like that. But the moment we're not.. :\ i get Cs and Bs D:


I like it too ^-^, Welcome to the group Teru Chan ^-^
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You know, I actually really like that. You are a good writer...
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Knowing Teru he's probably going to power-play his way through...
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Thx x)

So whut do i do now? > <
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You'll get an invite from someone.
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Knowing Teru he's probably going to power-play his way through...


I appreciate you caring how that one statement would make me feel (:
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Meh you know me, always trying to keep players in check
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Meh you know me, always trying to keep players in check


haha yeaa... *forced smile* JUST how i like u (:
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CodemanAlpha wrote:

Meh you know me, always trying to keep players in check


haha yeaa... *forced smile* JUST how i like u (:


Haha XD
did you both get the invite?
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Candy_boy wrote:


CodemanAlpha wrote:

Meh you know me, always trying to keep players in check


haha yeaa... *forced smile* JUST how i like u (:


Haha XD
did you both get the invite?


yuupp imma go make character nawwh!
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(dont really know what to do. 3rd person isnt really my thing but this is what i got hope you like it.)

Lyn had been going to town to pick up a few things before heading back to the Academy. She had been with her bestfriend for Christmas vacation and her friend had been called for a trial. Lyn had been told she was to return to the school but she had refused telling them she had to go to town first. She had walked into a small clothing store to get something for her training instructor when she saw them picking on a lady in her twenties. The group of guys she recognized were immortal vampires called Strigoi. They saw her watching them and went on their way. Lyn had followed them knowing they needed to be killed right away. She ran behind them easily, keeping far enough away that they wouldnt hear her. She watched them enter the secluded three story house. After 15 minutes she decided she couldnt wait for help and she took off across the yard and into the house.

The Sky had gotten even darker outside. The small window to the left showed that there was no sign of light coming anytime soon. Strigoi couldn’t go out in the light which made this a perfect time for them. Strigoi were once living vampires, also known as Moroi, who had changed into immortal vampires. This meant that they had killed another Moroi or a protector of the Moroi called a guardian to become what they were. The Dark house had once housed one of the Moroi royal families, which had probably been killed. The house smelled of dust and death. The walls still held a hint of the happiness that used to surge through the house. With its faded yellow walls and hole filled white silk curtains the house looked like it was mourning for its lost owners. The shadows held the feeling that they were waiting for her to come out.

Lyn stood in the corner with her black guardian clothes on and one of her stakes in her hand. She retraced her steps through the house from the top floor. Stepping gently on the hardwood oak floors. She tried to keep them from squeaking and not succeeding she looked around the dark modern styled house wondering how she’d been stupid enough to follow the attackers in here. She heard them before she saw them. It was as if they materialized out of the air but she knew better. These were Strigoi. They killed without hesitation and Lyn realized what she was up against. She had been trained all her life to be a guardian and protect the Moroi from the Strigoi. Now she knew she had acted reckless and should have gotten help when she'd first seen them. She remembered there were only three ways to kill Strigoi. One of the Strigoi approached her.

Looks like we have a lost little guardian on our hands. And dear i must say you do smell delicious.

He gently pushed back her long dark auburn hair exposing the soft caramel colored skin of her neck. Lyn smacked his had away knowing what he was about to do and regarded him evenly and calmer than she felt. The man was surprised buy her action but waved it off.

You were dumb to wonder in here. you set yourself up to die

Lyn’s tempered flared and she gripped her silver stake tighter and lunged at him. He was fast but he wasn’t expecting her to attack him so suddenly so he had only moved enough that the stake didn’t hit his heart but it connected with his shoulder instead and he let out a piercing scream that had even Lyn covering her ears. She pulled the other stake out of it holster and moved back to drop into a fighting stance.

Well i think i might kill you first

She smiled at him and his face hardened.

yeah i dont think thats gonna happen

The leader hit her directly in the chest sending her flying towards the wall. As her body slammed into the wall she dropped her stake and fell to the ground. She recovered quickly spiting some blood on the floor. Lyn grabbed the two swords she carried on her back and started for the leader.

i guess we will just have to see!

Lyn gripped her swords tightly ready to start swinging at him.

Well child. your alone and theres no one here to save you. stupid guardian. your going to die.

The Strigoi leader threw himself at Lyn his fangs ready to bite into her. Lyn leaped out of his path and had just enough time to swipe one of her swords across his chest. She stood watching him. The top of his white shirt was ripped and a line of dark red had already begun staining it. Lyn took the opportunity of his distraction to make her next move. She swung out with her sword and hit him in the side of his neck and he reached up to hold , blood trickling through his fingers while he screamed in pain. The leader fell to the ground and Lyn continued swinging the sword until his head was completely severed from the rest of him body. The Remaining Strigoi lurked in the shadows not being able to believe what had just happened. Lyn straightened up and looked around the room.

Anymore of you want to try me. I’ve got plenty where that came from.

The Strigoi looked at each other and then disappeared and escaped from the house before any of them ended up like their leader who had been the strongest out of all of them.



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looks good ill get a second person to look
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looks good ill get a second person to look


give me a minute i edited it....to help better explain whats actually going on hehe!
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Are you using the Strigoi from Vampire Academy here? And the guardians? And the Moroi? And the silver stakes? Can we have SOME originality? This isn't a fanfiction site.
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