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Yurp. Poems go here.
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Posted 4/13/10
a little boy was standing there
full of woe
not knowing about love or trust
he became just piece of dust
than one thought of this world
made his mind blowed
his brain tore apart of thousand bits
and in his heart made a lot of pits
his arms and legs were bloating
his little life slowly floating
he asked his mother than
if he was that bland
his girlfriend calmly stabed his back
knowing he has the lack
lack of power
lack of mother
never gonna know his bother
his lover
his killer
his mind miller
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Posted 4/13/10

WoOodoOoSnack wrote:

a little boy was standing there
full of woe
not knowing about love or trust
he became just piece of dust
than one thought of this world
made his mind blowed
his brain tore apart of thousand bits
and in his heart made a lot of pits
his arms and legs were bloating
his little life slowly floating
he asked his mother than
if he was that bland
his girlfriend calmly stabed his back
knowing he has the lack
lack of power
lack of mother
never gonna know his bother
his lover
his killer
his mind miller


O_O did you really write that? It's awesome!!
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Posted 4/13/10

WoOodoOoSnack wrote:

a little boy was standing there
full of woe
not knowing about love or trust
he became just piece of dust
than one thought of this world
made his mind blowed
his brain tore apart of thousand bits
and in his heart made a lot of pits
his arms and legs were bloating
his little life slowly floating
he asked his mother than
if he was that bland
his girlfriend calmly stabed his back
knowing he has the lack
lack of power
lack of mother
never gonna know his bother
his lover
his killer
his mind miller


O_O did you really write that? It's awesome!!

yup i did...=D....around midnight=D....and thanks(again)=D....
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Posted 4/13/10
lol but there's grammatical mistake=D....and also word order=D....
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Posted 4/17/10 , edited 4/17/10
run away
from this play
or else
ur body starts to blaze
ur eyes will bleed
hear that creed!
get away
or u will may
stain ur hands
choose the clans
in ur lifes
filled with cries
change the fate
stand its blade
i heard the clop
of that drop
was it blood?
or the tears
of one who bears
that hoped-for death
please take ur breath!
i won't lose my hope
one time we will lope
to our desire place
where i brace
ur naked body
make it cloddy
from ur guts
i'll lick the drops
of ur tasty blood
i'll carve u thousand pits
and cut u into bits
if u cry
u'll be mine
but u made no sound
my heart felt bound
now don't u love?
i know it's just a bluff
see ur broken limps
see its glims
with ur guilt
that u've build
in my heart
i acted the part
i won't ever let u sleep
u'll suffer deep and deep



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Posted 6/22/10
lightly falling
desperately calling
not knowing
the mean of crawling
bounded with the heart
won in chart
of worst lifes
filled with cries
but the fall's not coming
and u'rebecoming
to understand the every meaning
of deceiving
the tears are winning
but the time is spinning
the heart is loosing
u're focusing
on skies
full of flies
u're loosing
not focusing
on the gride
chanched with pride
of these flies





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Posted 6/23/10
falling
desperately calling
not knowing
the mean of crawling
hardly trying
smoothly crying
out ur life
filled with cries
but the fall's not coming
and u'rebecoming
to understand the every meaning
of deceiving
the tears are winning
but the time is spinning
the heart is loosing
u're focusing
on the skies
full of flies
u're loosing
not focusing
on the gride
changed with pride
of these flies
hopefully screaming
i'm not believing
ur false face
when u brace
ur nasty words
theese corny odds
makes me feel
insencere




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