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Posted 4/13/10 , edited 4/7/11
Application for Made Up Characters
Please apply following the format below:


Username:
Name of Made Up Character:
Race: [Terran, Methuselah, Crusnik]
Character Description: [include a brief history of the character and personality]
Appearance:[please include a picture of the made up character. for crusnik application, please include 2 pictures, in human form and in crusnik form]
Abilities:[please take note that abilities should not be godlike]





Crusniks
00. Eve Arashikaze074
1. Hanna Redwood narutosakukegal44
2. Gabriel Von Kamfer dreco12
3. Terra Lamprodge sunfloweranime
4. Kazuki (alias Black Dragon) KAKASHI2000
5. Zerus von Krieges rkanubis
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The Vatican

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Ryoushi [former member of the Vatican] ShadowKurama

AX Agents
1. Hanna Redwood narutosakukegal44
2. Kazuki (alias Black Dragon) KAKASHI2000
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The Department of Inquisition
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The New Human Empire
1.Gabriel Von Kampfer dreco12
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The Rosenkreuz Orden
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The Kingdom of Albion
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Posted 4/13/10 , edited 4/13/10
Username: narutosasukegal44
Name of Made Up Character: Hanna Redwood
Race: Crusnik
Character Description: Hanna never knew what had happened to her in the past, until she met Abel Nightroad. She found out that she was also a test tube baby, however she had had no initial purpose. She was not as strong as Abel, Cain, Lilith, and/or Seth, so she was tossed aside, only to be found later by Abel and the Cardinal of the Vatican. She is now working in the Vatican with Abel, who has been like an older brother to her. Hanna is strong-willed and determined, but she is shy, though she tend to be mostly open around Abel.
Appearance:

Abilities: Can summon and control fire and ice. In Crusnik form, speed and agility is increased depending on the percent activated. (ex: 20% = x2 speed and agility increase, 40% = x4 increase, etc.)
Posted 4/13/10

narutosasukegal44 wrote:

Username: narutosasukegal44
Name of Made Up Character: Hanna Redwood
Race: Crusnik
Character Description: She never knew what had happened to her, until she met Abel Nightroad. She was also a test tube baby, however she had no purpose. She was not as strong as Abel, Cain, Lilith, and Seth, so she was tossed aside. She is now working in the Vatican with Abel.
Appearance:

Abilities: Can summon and control fire and ice.


aha... we have the first Crusnik! accipio, accepted
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Posted 4/13/10 , edited 4/5/11
Username:Dreco12
Name of Made Up Character:Gabriel Von Kampfer
Race:Crusnik
Character Description:In an attempt to have a secret weapon in case Cain decided to betray him Isaak Fernand Von Kampfer began to try and recreate the experiment by the Mars human colonist. He was successful due to the fact that he had access to the 100% Crusnik nanomachines(When making Cains current body), making a being similar to Cain and Abe in appearance but not personality or loyalty.Isaak gave the me the name Gabriel Von Kampfer since i was his creation it made me in a sense his none biological son.(go figure)With me as his secret weapon Isaak began to have me train in various things such as, Hand to hand combat, swordsmanship,marksmanship,Gun Kata and even went as to educate me in manners, aristocracy and how to control my crusnik form.

After 700 hundred years of teaching and honing my skills Isaak finally seen me fit to take on Cain if need be, but things took a turn for the worse Isaak piloting the Orden's airship while leading an attack on the city of Londinium in Albion his ship was destroyed presumably killing Isaak.Not hearing from my master in a few weeks was not normal at all, so with that i took it upon my self to break out of the Rosenkruez Orden underground compound were i was being held and began to wonder around in search of him but to no avail.With that i took upon my self that he was dead and began to travel around far eastern Europe until i stumbled upon the city of Byzantium(or Constantinople).

The city was vast but and filled with many wonders that i seen from outside the barrier.Feeling my presence from inside the city the empress Augusta Vradica(Seth Nightroad) herself came out to ascertain the the presence of another Crusnik other then her own family. she seen me from inside the barrier and watched me.Gabriel looked on for he had never seen another like him since he was always cooped up in the underground chamber,simple learning and training. He felt a gentleness from her even threw the dome, it felt similar to the feeling his father gave off whenever he looked upon Gabriel.

*The queen ordered the dome to be opened to let Gabriel in.Gabriel came threw and looked upon the queen once more and then knelled in front of her. From then on her knew he had to protect her.Protect something that actually made him feel something,something that he wanted to feel forever.From then on he pledged his life to her,protecting her and her city as her first knight

Appearance:Human Form-

Crusnik 80%to 100% Form-


Personality-Gabriel is a cunning sort inside and outside of battle. His loyalty lies to the empress and the people of the New Human Empire so in turn he always acts in the interest of the Empire, whether the stakes are high or not. His very chivalrous and charismatic with a slight hint of sarcasm.Sometimes his motives aren't known by his subordinates nor the empress herself but he is given leave way due to his unwavering loyalty to the people and the respect given to him from the people of The New Human Empire.

Abilities:Gabriel power is of the black flames and can use psychokinetic waves psychokinetic waves to pulverize objects and enemies and to generate barriers. Outside of his Crusnik form he possesses strength and speed that is as superior to a Methuselah's as a Methuselah's is to a normal human.In Crusnik form also sees a marked increase in strength and speed from his human form, and an enhanced regenerative ability which enables him to heal injuries such as stab wounds instantly.At 80% power his speed and strength are again increased, and his regenerative abilities receive a drastic upgrade.

His regenerative abilities are only apparent in human form for minor scraps cuts, bullet wounds,burns and bruised but in Crusnik form they vary from percentage of power, at 20%(Stab wounds assault rifle bullets wounds blunt force trauma)40%(Heavy artillery fire,appendage severing)60%(the same as 40%)80% and up(almost everything but at a slow rate unless feeding or have fed on a vampire before hand which speeds the healing rate or if i feed on another crusnik)

Weapons-Human form- 2 Beretta 92FS (modified)
is main weapons when in this form, they can be switched from semi to full automatic and are always by his side.The magazines holds 18 silver hollow bullets filled with silver nitrate.Gabriel is a master of hand to hand combat studying and mastering all forms of close range combat due to his training to beat Caine.

Crusnik Form- A abnormally long long sword is materialized from crystallized blood in his hand.At 80% two another is materialized in his opposite hand.
Posted 4/13/10

dreco12 wrote:



another Crusnik... accipio, accepted!
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Posted 4/13/10


another Crusnik... accipio, accepted!



But of course but i wish to be part of the new human kingdom(Methuselah's) since it's in my story that I'am a knight of the empress Augusta Vradica(Seth Nightroad)
Posted 4/13/10 , edited 4/13/10


so true. i'll be making the forums and i do hope that you and the rest of the members will have fun
Posted 4/13/10 , edited 4/14/10
Username:sunfloweranime
Name of Made Up Character: Terra Lamprodge
Race: Crusnik
Character Description:Terra's life is that of loneliness and despair. She awakened with no memories to whom she truly is which is a a lost Crusnik. Unable to trust anyone and slim to none recognition of her past. Terra has been an orphan most of her life. With only the memories of figures she can't place in her dreams, Terra is aware that she isn't your average human or what they call a Methuselah being but what was she really? Drawn to things unholy to most Terra finds herself hurting those around her and though she doesn't mean to she can't help but to feel as if she was made to bring upon a plague to those who get too close to her. Now she roams the street as a rogue trying to avoid being discovered both by humans and Methuselah alike.
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Abilities: Can conjure and manipulate electricity. Sonokinesis-Terra has the ability to produce sound waves from here hands giving her the ability to produce sonic booms and sounds blast from a flick of here wrist or a swing of her arm. If she were to put here hands to the ground she could produce tremors by sends sound waves into the ground, shacking the earth under her opponents feet to throw them off balance.
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Posted 4/13/10

benihime38 wrote:


narutosasukegal44 wrote:

Username: narutosasukegal44
Name of Made Up Character: Hanna Redwood
Race: Crusnik
Character Description: She never knew what had happened to her, until she met Abel Nightroad. She was also a test tube baby, however she had no purpose. She was not as strong as Abel, Cain, Lilith, and Seth, so she was tossed aside. She is now working in the Vatican with Abel.
Appearance:

Abilities: Can summon and control fire and ice.


aha... we have the first Crusnik! accipio, accepted


Arigatou. ^_^ I'll be a good little Crusnik. XP
Posted 4/13/10

narutosasukegal44 wrote:



Arigatou. ^_^ I'll be a good little Crusnik. XP


may the force be with you my child...
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Posted 4/13/10


Semi-Approved Seeing as you are a Crusnik you are already more powerful then any other being except other Crusniks.The ability to touch a someone and gain there powers and skills is a very powerful ability in itself. This power mixed with your owns and another power plus there skills is a bit much so i will give you some options. You can take away the electricity and have the absorb ability as you main and you telekinetic abilities or you can make it so that when you absorb some one else powers that you are not able to use you other powers until the ones you absorb have worn off meaning that you will have to give a time limit on how long you can hold on to anothers powers. Also be more detailed in your powers like how large of an object can you move with your telekinetics and if you absorb someone's powers are you making a copy of there powers or are you stripping the powers themselves from the person, are the powers you have taken just as powerful as the owner of the powers? These things will help when judging a fight or if a person accuses you of god-modding. Please edit and let me know so i may look over it.
Posted 4/13/10

dreco12 wrote:
Semi-Approved Seeing as you are a Crusnik you are already more powerful then any other being except other Crusniks.The ability to touch a someone and gain there powers and skills is a very powerful ability in itself. This power mixed with your owns and another power plus there skills is a bit much so i will give you some options. You can take away the electricity and have the absorb ability as you main and you telekinetic abilities or you can make it so that when you absorb some one else powers that you are not able to use you other powers until the ones you absorb have worn off meaning that you will have to give a time limit on how long you can hold on to anothers powers. Also be more detailed in your powers like how large of an object can you move with your telekinetics and if you absorb someone's powers are you making a copy of there powers or are you stripping the powers themselves from the person, are the powers you have taken just as powerful as the owner of the powers? These things will help when judging a fight or if a person accuses you of god-modding. Please edit and let me know so i may look over it.


I'll keep it simple and stick to what I know. Is this okay or do I need to post my techniques as well?

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Posted 4/13/10




Approved

But in my opinion i think you should keep your Telekinetic powers or have psychokinetic powers or even a power that revolves around sound. It's stated that it's seen often from Crusniks For example-
But this is your choice. With or without it your Character is still Approved
Posted 4/13/10

Thank you and I'll think on it. I may add it tomorrow If decide but thank you for the advice.
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Posted 4/13/10

sunfloweranime wrote:

Thank you and I'll think on it. I may add it tomorrow If decide but thank you for the advice.


No problem, anymore questions feel free to ask me
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