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Post Reply !!! *Poems* !!!
Posted 4/15/10 , edited 4/15/10

Ok since im first ill post mine first, hope you like it, *dont laugh* lol ......

Hopefully if alot of ppl participate or post thier poem, insha-allah we might have a competition... !!!





Fading Light

As the day emerges and seems trough,
I grow ever wary of what I do.
I start to contemplate of things that I said,
So tormenting, they unfold from my head.

I bring to mind the time when we had no beat,
Hanging on, not giving in to defeat.
No matter what surfaced on our way,
As long as we were together we would be ok.

But then the atmosphere gave way for our nightmare,
The last flash of joy and the creation of despair.
For our chain to be shattered so easily by a mere fight,
Is what makes me regret why I thought we were alright.

Now we wither away alone and full of remorse,
Our hearts lost and blinded all thanks to divorce.




plz comment thxs !!!
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Posted 4/15/10
owesome walla 7bait el-idea

" No matter what surfaced on our way,
As long as we were together we would be ok.




BTW! nice poem ,, N keep it up
Posted 4/15/10
lol thxs alot, i got a few more, but ill post after a while like when other ppl post, y dont u post ... lol :p.
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Posted 4/15/10
Enshalla
Posted 4/18/10
still w8ing, but tyt lol
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Posted 4/20/10
Great :D:D:D
i rate it as....
if i didnt read it here.. i'd assume that someone took it from a literature book or something
Posted 4/20/10
lol gee thxs hehe !!! , and its not like those ones form literature books they r too complex hehe !!!
Posted 5/28/10
hmm no comments anymore maybe i should post another *thinks*
Posted 5/31/10
well here is another ............



Searching Soul



Every human is on a journey,
To find the reason why they’re lonely.
They wait anxiously till someday,
They find in their soul what will lead the way.

Kindness is neither a feeling nor a belief,
It’s an element of peace and relief.
It fires up from the pure essence of unity,
Engulfing one and all towards tranquillity.

Like a companion follows a bond,
Materializing the serenity for so long.
It flows through ones nature like a pond,
Enchanting ones rhythm resembling a song.

As time flies on so does the feeling,
Making the soul have only one meaning.
The pond is calm, the searching is done.
For the rest of eternity they are one.



plz comment hehe :P


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Posted 6/2/10
walla it's really nice poem
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As time flies on so does the feeling,
Making the soul have only one meaning.
The pond is calm, the searching is done.
For the rest of eternity they are one.
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Posted 6/2/10
my poems will be coming soon
Posted 6/2/10

miwa37 wrote:

my poems will be coming soon



yh know will be gr8 cant w8 *biting nailz* hehe

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Posted 6/5/10
nice zacher w mawi
keep it up
Posted 6/25/10
Essence of love



Im here today to share a joy,
those who felt it know its no toy.

Once you felt its unique sting,
it starts to grow and never goes thin.

Although its invisible it has no margin,
its also one of the things money cant bargain.

At times of pain or solitude,
its the medicine with the greatest gratitude.

Those that dont feel it are blind and asleep,
waiting for their holder to touch them so deep.

Those left behind are all confused,
not knowing wat they feel or who to choose.





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Posted 6/25/10
luv3 it <333

I really like the way you described the way you feel

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Although its invisible it has no margin,
its also one of the things money cant bargain.


sOo keep it up zaCo
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