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Posted 4/16/10 , edited 4/16/10
Heres a template to follow

pic in spoiler (you can draw it or BlitzScythe can on request)
Stand:
User:
Type:
Ability:
Stats:
Strength - Speed - Range -
Staying - Precision - Learning -



Stand: Death Letter
User: Son House
Type: Auto activation/Independent manifestation
Ability: Can attack through any text the user can see within a 50 meter radius. User can use an anagram from a line of text and Death Letter will attack the enemy by imitating that word.
Stats:
Strength - C Speed - B Range - B
Staying - C Precision - B Learning - C
Posted 4/16/10 , edited 4/17/10


thats pretty cool! accepted

(heres mine)

Stand: Under Pressure

User: Cloud Grey

Type: Manual activation/Independent manifestation

Ability: increases or decreases gravity on people or objects that arent heavily anchored to the ground
( float/speed-up or slow/immobilize anything )

Stats:
Strength - b Speed - n/a Range - b
Staying -b Precision - a Learning - e



Posted 4/17/10 , edited 4/17/10
pic in spoiler
Stand: Fallen
User: Alex
Type:Independent manifestation/Manual activation
Ability:Can controll metal
Stats:
Strength - Speed - Range - E
Staying - Precision - Learning -E




Posted 4/17/10


fixed*

will, if its a sword, then the staying should be e, range e, speed b, and strength (depending)

Posted 4/17/10 , edited 4/17/10

ok
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Posted 4/17/10 , edited 4/18/10
Stand: Ascendancy
User: Tam
Type: Independent manifestation/Manual Activation
Abilities: Can alter the probabilities of chance, making the user seem unnaturally "lucky." The higher the roll when used, the bigger the event can be that's being altered
Stats:
Strength-A, Speed-A, Range-D,
Staying-E, Precision-B, Learning-C
Posted 4/17/10


approved, but range means how far it can attack/ how far its ability reaches... im going to fix the info lol, you can fix this if you want, but if you intended for this, you can keep it.
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Posted 4/17/10 , edited 4/17/10
k/ how far its ability reaches... im going to fix the info lol, you can fix this if you want, but if you intended for this, you can keep it.

Yeah, i fixed the stats better, but it's range is short, since it has "see" it's target in order for it to tell it's weakness, and as a die, it doesn't "see" very far
Posted 4/17/10



thats pretty good, accepted
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Posted 4/17/10 , edited 4/17/10
not to be rude but these could use some work

Ill be specific


mizukemumu wrote:

pic in spoiler
Stand: Fallen
User: Alex
Type:Independent manifestation/Manual activation
Ability:Can controll metal
Stats:
Strength - Speed - Range - E
Staying - Precision - Learning -E



I love the power but Fallen is a bad name for a stand that controls metal. Second a sword is kinda lame for a stand , i can DRAW you a humanoid stand. Its what i do


unLUCKeCHARMS wrote:

Stand: Ascendancy
User: Tam
Type: Independent manifestation/Manual Activation
Abilities: Can instantly find a person's weakness, either physically, mentally or emotionally
Stats:
Strength-A, Speed-A, Range-D,
Staying-E, Precision-B, Learning-A


The power is akin to godmodding and ignoring the power, using dice for it is just... words fail me.

Theyre good for a start but these need work
Posted 4/17/10

BlitzScythe wrote:

not to be rude but these could use some work

Ill be specific


mizukemumu wrote:

pic in spoiler
Stand: Fallen
User: Alex
Type:Independent manifestation/Manual activation
Ability:Can controll metal
Stats:
Strength - Speed - Range - E
Staying - Precision - Learning -E



I love the power but Fallen is a bad name for a stand that controls metal. Second a sword is kinda lame for a stand , i can DRAW you a humanoid stand. Its what i do


unLUCKeCHARMS wrote:

Stand: Ascendancy
User: Tam
Type: Independent manifestation/Manual Activation
Abilities: Can instantly find a person's weakness, either physically, mentally or emotionally
Stats:
Strength-A, Speed-A, Range-D,
Staying-E, Precision-B, Learning-A


The power is akin to godmodding and ignoring the power, using dice for it is just... words fail me.

Theyre good for a start but these need work


Sure!!
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Posted 4/17/10


now please give me a list of your favorite bands songs and albums
Fave Bands:
Fave Songs:
Fave Albums:
Posted 4/17/10

unLUCKeCHARMS wrote:

Stand: Ascendancy
User: Tam
Type: Independent manifestation/Manual Activation
Abilities: Can instantly find a person's weakness, either physically, mentally or emotionally
Stats:
Strength-A, Speed-A, Range-D,
Staying-E, Precision-B, Learning-A


change the stand from that to something else, and i didnt relise it was god modding at first, but it is... so please change that too
Posted 4/17/10 , edited 4/17/10
Stand: Deceiver

User: R.James

Type: manual control/ independant manifestation

Ability: Shadow Traveler (travels through shadows), Shadow Finger (finger turns into a blade, and can stab people 30ft (~10 m) away, Night Lift (lifts stand user if stand user wills it)

Stats:

Strength - c Speed - a Range - b
Staying -a Precision -b Learning - c

pic
Posted 4/18/10

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now please give me a list of your favorite bands songs and albums
Fave Bands:
Fave Songs:
Fave Albums:


Ok

fave Bands:three day grace ,Fly leaf, Boys like girls, Vocaloid, Hollywood undead

Fave Songs:now or never,city,Fully alive,Young, Break me down, Bring me to life

Fave albums, Fallen,The open door, One-X ,End of silence
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