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Posted 5/13/10
umm..
can someone plz critic on this fanart i made of tegami bachi??
i kinda got inspired a scene in its maga so i drew dis X3
i wanted opinions on it coz this is basically my 1st tym coloring a drawing in such a complicated and hand cramping way O.O

[[juz so u noe, im NOT a yaoi freak! i juz found dis kyut 4 some reason ]]

plz tell me if it needs improvements in certain areas^^
arigatou!

ooh, and sorry if i put in 2 much words in d pic.
ive just been a victim of drawing stealers 4 a while now and i dont think i can stand it anymore
if u want 2 c d whole original pic without d copyright of watever, juz pm me :D



hope its okay ><

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katkat15 wrote:

umm..
can someone plz critic on this fanart i made of tegami bachi??
i kinda got inspired a scene in its maga so i drew dis X3
i wanted opinions on it coz this is basically my 1st tym coloring a drawing in such a complicated and hand cramping way O.O

[[juz so u noe, im NOT a yaoi freak! i juz found dis kyut 4 some reason ]]

plz tell me if it needs improvements in certain areas^^
arigatou!

ooh, and sorry if i put in 2 much words in d pic.
ive just been a victim of drawing stealers 4 a while now and i dont think i can stand it anymore
if u want 2 c d whole original pic without d copyright of watever, juz pm me :D



hope its okay ><


The first thought that comes to mind when first seeing this picture for me was:
Wow.
It was very nice; though it seemed to lack something...
I am not one-hundred percent sure, but I believe it is detail.
The reason I believe this is because the eyes are the main thing; they are the largest element of a manga drawing. They lack detail, therefore the entire picture lacks.
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hop_step_jump_shugoshugo wrote:


katkat15 wrote:

umm..
can someone plz critic on this fanart i made of tegami bachi??
i kinda got inspired a scene in its maga so i drew dis X3
i wanted opinions on it coz this is basically my 1st tym coloring a drawing in such a complicated and hand cramping way O.O

[[juz so u noe, im NOT a yaoi freak! i juz found dis kyut 4 some reason ]]

plz tell me if it needs improvements in certain areas^^
arigatou!

ooh, and sorry if i put in 2 much words in d pic.
ive just been a victim of drawing stealers 4 a while now and i dont think i can stand it anymore
if u want 2 c d whole original pic without d copyright of watever, juz pm me :D



hope its okay ><


The first thought that comes to mind when first seeing this picture for me was:
Wow.
It was very nice; though it seemed to lack something...
I am not one-hundred percent sure, but I believe it is detail.
The reason I believe this is because the eyes are the main thing; they are the largest element of a manga drawing. They lack detail, therefore the entire picture lacks.


hahaha, yeh, ive been told :))
im still such a newbie @ coloring dat it annoys me :/
lol, anyway, thanks 4 d comment^^
ill try improvin on dat
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Posted 5/16/10

katkat15 wrote:


hop_step_jump_shugoshugo wrote:


katkat15 wrote:

umm..
can someone plz critic on this fanart i made of tegami bachi??
i kinda got inspired a scene in its maga so i drew dis X3
i wanted opinions on it coz this is basically my 1st tym coloring a drawing in such a complicated and hand cramping way O.O

[[juz so u noe, im NOT a yaoi freak! i juz found dis kyut 4 some reason ]]

plz tell me if it needs improvements in certain areas^^
arigatou!

ooh, and sorry if i put in 2 much words in d pic.
ive just been a victim of drawing stealers 4 a while now and i dont think i can stand it anymore
if u want 2 c d whole original pic without d copyright of watever, juz pm me :D



hope its okay ><


The first thought that comes to mind when first seeing this picture for me was:
Wow.
It was very nice; though it seemed to lack something...
I am not one-hundred percent sure, but I believe it is detail.
The reason I believe this is because the eyes are the main thing; they are the largest element of a manga drawing. They lack detail, therefore the entire picture lacks.


hahaha, yeh, ive been told :))
im still such a newbie @ coloring dat it annoys me :/
lol, anyway, thanks 4 d comment^^
ill try improvin on dat :D


;D oki~ i sounded waaaay pro there. i rlly hav never coloured a picture before on the computer...
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haha, neither did i til just some days ago.
before, i watched some tutorials on how to color,
den i was lyk, '...dude, no way am i doing that' O.O
d step by step was so complicated!

after a while, i tried it out juz coz i was bored...
'............this is way harder than i thought.....'
:))
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Why putting gay Art? o.O... can u just draw Lag and Niche or Gauche with Aria? why does it have to be sick? :/
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