[FanFic] shugo chara: stolen moments
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Posted 6/4/10 , edited 6/17/10
Stolen moments

O.K my first fan fic so it'll probably suck, Please read and comment if u want!

made up characters: Yuurei Nekotani and her charas

Chapter 1 how much I love you


Chapter 2 gone with the wind


chapter 3 Where do the diamonds shine?


Chapter 4New uncoverings


Chapter 5 The fortune, spent?!
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Posted 6/4/10 , edited 6/4/10
I dont really get the story....
Can you explain it simpler?
Posted 6/4/10
i agree with puppykiz at first i got kind of confused i think the reason was because of the really fast switch between amu falling asleep and then suddenly it switches to the next day with ikuto appearing... was that on purpose? just wondering...

but otherwise plot lines kind of interesting, i'll wait to see what happens.
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Posted 6/6/10 , edited 6/14/10
Yeah I kinda want to keep the story a little complex @ the start but start explaining it ,via the story, as it goes on. Thanks reading btw!
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Posted 7/3/10
it this gonna be about ikuto and... that "yuurei" girl?!
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Posted 7/11/10

inuyasha_tamago wrote:

it this gonna be about ikuto and... that "yuurei" girl?!


Nope ;P

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