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Just describing two of my charcaters...
Well, my main character Rex Muradakai is a demon. He has long silver white hair,blue eyes, light tan and is 5'10. He is attractive and has an intimidating look to him.
Izumi Kitase, is a beautiful female with long black/brown hair and brown eyes, and her skin is like a medium tan and she learn martial art from the guy who saves her who later on die because he apparently was killed by Res father, and she is after Rex father. She is introverted, quiet, mysterious, but very compassionate.
Rex Murdakai was born unto a chaotic world where humans and demons cannot live in harmony. Five years after Rex was born his mother abandoned him who later died from a sickness. Rex’s mother never loved Rex because Rex was always an unwanted child, and she had him 9 months after she got rape by his father, an elite assassin who was wealthy. Leaving Rex to live in such a chaotic world by himself, he witnessed all sort of sins. He witnesses adultery, rape, and other sort of violence. Rex was living in the slums. He was then found by his grandfather who happened to walk by and resembled him in an alleyway. His grandfather decides to take him in and train him with some kind of martial art to prepare him for the real world. Rex was taught to kill at such a young age, that at the age of 18 he was already known for his assassin skill. He is seen as an introverted, arrogant, emotionless and cold-hearted person. He himself grew up doing the same thing as those men he saw in the past, and became acknowledge in the demon community. Killing became his passion… Rex was a ruthless bloodthirsty killing machine, and vicious. He learned to withstand pain and poison. The word love was unknown to him or what it was.
At the age of 18, Rex rapes a human girl(Izumi Kitase) who happened to be blind who was desperately looking for her father in the demon community who is eventually killed. After he’s done raping her, he is aiming to kill her by making his hand sharp as a knife through her heart but then gets interrupted by one of his demon companion saying that something serious was going on. So she is left alive, and she is crying. A mysterious swordsman walks with 4 other human beings who looks like travelers/fighters and sees her lying down. These people destroyed many demons. As Izumi hears footstep she wonder who it is and ask for help. The swordsman grabs her and asks her what happens. She cries answering and she is given a choice to get her eyesight fix and forget her past or to not forget her past and be blind. She chooses to forget the past and fix her eyesight. The sword man grabs his index finger from both his hand and hit a certain area in her head. This swordsman then trains her and the past never become mention to her. But Izumi still has a bad feeling that something bad happened to her.
Another 5 years has passed and Rex coincidentally meets Izumi Kitase who he raped 5 years ago but does not remember her and neither does her. In the chapters things happen for these two to actually tavel together. The weird thing is that this girls (Izumi Kitase) eventually fall for him and later on in the anime she shows Rex what love is. Rex however does not recognize what love is. He eventually remembers that she he raped because of Izumi always telling him she has no memory of the past and just remeber her master. He feels the need to tell her but he doesn’t say it right away. Like he feels what he did was wrong but later on in the anime he tells her the truth and she becomes angry, actually seperating from him. Rex how ever remains emotionless and does not see what's the big problem.
Just a bit on what’s about but that’s not the plot. I thought about this like since 9. Just trying to come up with a perfect anime
QUESTION: GOOD OR BAD?!
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Some thing were left out because it'll make things longer. Like when Rex tells her she was rape by him, she thinks of commiting suicide. Rex tells her not to be foolish and lies twlling her he killed her master as a way for her to not commit suicide and for her to avenge him. But then tells her the truth. He then falls for her as well but he's not sure what "love" is so the feeling to him is new and unknown. But he strta caring for her
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you might have a psychological problem :S TOO MUCH RAPE!!!
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Holy rape, Batman!
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...I didn't finish it. So many rape moments. That's not good to think about that kind of stuff in my opinion.
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His mother was rape. And Izumi was rape. ..just two rape was mention. I mean he had a tragic past and he was brought that way. Sheesh! I need to make it interesting, and diffent. And the world is chaotic -_-
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Is this based on Raping? Nah, I'm just kidding.
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Nice anime. Better if it was a manga though.
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Where's Sue Sylvester when you need her?
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Who is your target audience? Unless it's seinen, there's too much rape!
Anyways, I guess this could be a nice tragedy + physiological series. GOOD LUCK !
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Don't name him Rex. Gay name. Everything else is good.
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it's not a fanfic it's the OP's "OWN anime idea"
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It still goes in fan fiction >_>
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Only two rapes were mentioned so I don't think....that is bad. It ok, just make it longer ^_^ and a lot of parts, for some reason, I was already able to predict what happens(i read a lot of stories so it all seems familiar to me). Try to make is interesting and add something that people wouldn't expect  But overall, its a good story ^_^ |
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There's extreamly too much going on and it becomes very confusing. To be honest, it doesn't seem interesting.
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