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What do you think about my OWN anime idea?
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Posted 6/16/10

LosingOrbit wrote:

There's extreamly too much going on and it becomes very confusing. To be honest, it doesn't seem interesting.

I see a hater...

Posted 6/16/10

popcornpuffs wrote:


LosingOrbit wrote:

There's extreamly too much going on and it becomes very confusing. To be honest, it doesn't seem interesting.

I see a hater...



Sweetie, let's get one thing clear: in no way am I "hating" on your story. You wanted an opinion, so I gave you one. It may not be what you want to hear, but believe when I say that there will be someone else who has even harsher words for you. That's what happens when you enter the world of literature.
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Posted 6/16/10

LosingOrbit wrote:


popcornpuffs wrote:


LosingOrbit wrote:

There's extreamly too much going on and it becomes very confusing. To be honest, it doesn't seem interesting.

I see a hater...



Sweetie, let's get one thing clear: in no way am I "hating" on your story. You wanted an opinion, so I gave you one. It may not be what you want to hear, but believe when I say that there will be someone else who has even harsher words for you. That's what happens when you enter the world of literature.


Darling, don't get me started. I want to see you post your own literature if you are as good as me. But in your case, I think you'll fail. But anyways, I'm just keeping it real....

Posted 6/16/10


Then keep it real, girl, but I think you're jumping to conclusions. I never said that I would be able to write better than you. Speaking of which, I happen to write stories myself and was hoping to post one here in the future, but I've been having terrible writer's block; it's no good for me.
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Posted 7/15/10
It needs to go through some changes. Demons and people never lived in peace because demons were created to torture humans. I have some ideas of my own as well, but they are nothing like this.
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Posted 7/31/10
I lol'd every time it said "rape".
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Posted 8/10/10
haha.... well umm interesting i dont like the name Rex change it to Kei or Riku or somethin... and mayb u should list other bad chaotic things than rape. Set a time period. I thought what u were saying was kinda dull u should try to bring some life to it but overall i give it an 8 gl :O
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