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Posted 6/22/10
Post your poems here, please? XD
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Posted 6/22/10
My attempt at writing something:


What is love?
I don't think I know
But I feel so strongly just for you though
They say love's when you get butterflies
I get that feeling with the sight of your eyes
I miss you when you are gone
You might be my true and only one

But how would I know a thing at all?
My memories wash away like the leaves in fall
I'm just a kid as you can see
Don't get me wrong, please don't leave me be
Maybe it's best, but just for now
To take things slow, just slow things down
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Posted 6/24/10
Here's another attempt at writing a poem. I know it totally SUCKS...

So in the end, I was right
Ha ha ha, surprise surprise
You left me now like you did before
Just one of many you adore

And now you're gone, you're gone for good
You could have stayed, but like you would
You didn't last those six long years
And now I've lost something I've held so dear

I miss you more than words could say
Is it better off this way
I don't want the true end to come
But that's just me, I'm only one

There's really nothing I could do
This choice is clearly up to you
One last chance, I say goodnight
I bid you well as you take flight
Posted 6/28/10
I think it's good o_o! I like it a lot actually o_O do you have more?

I only write when I have inspiration & this was for young mothers, it's not good to any degree .__. but it means a lot...

Things to fear
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I watch you silently as you feed,
And make sure that I do well as I lead.
You know all I do, is just a good deed,
But im sick of watering this damn seed.
I give you life, and you never plead,

You just watch me; one of the girls who bleed.
I sit back ;I do like with abook with life & read.
You call it responsibility on my part; you mislead.
I call it something else on its part...greed.
For once I want to quit and with words speed,
But life...seems to be more than mine is to proceed.
I'll stand on my fears and succeed.
My fears can die along with this disease,
The sickness of loving you is a need.
I no longer fear all these things, am i free?
Nope, because now I fear for you my baby seed
You did much, you in my arms are kneaded.

You are my one joy and my biggest fear.
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Posted 8/1/10




Don'tGo. . .

I'llMissHowYou'reThereForMe,
I'llMissHowYouMadeMeSmile,
I'llMissTheFeelingOfBeing Loved,
CuzIFeltItFromOnlyYou.

YouWEREThereForMe
NotAnymore.
YouDIDMakeMeSmile
ButItFadedIntoDepression
IReallyDIDLoveYou
ButIGuessTheFeelingIsLost.

IMissYou. TheOldYou.
ButIt'sGoneLikeOurLove
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