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Hi everyone!! Thank you for whomever is reading this. I just wanted to add this so that you guys can read something if you wanted too as your here. Anyways, this is my new book, "A Simple Wish". It is a story about a girl named Renee, so enjoy!! Here's the story!!

~♥A SIMPLE WISH♥~
writer of this story::::: Hanauo::::: Also known as Hana.


~~~♥ PROLOGUE ♥~~~
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It was a dark night in the land of London. All was still except that one thing, it was a woman. She seemed desperate to get this one thing in her arms away from something. You could hear a tiny little wail from the woman’s arm indicating it was a child, a child so young not to even know what was going on with its own life. “Please be quiet little one. Please be quiet darling. Shsh…” she said calmly to the child. Her eyes seemed otherwise. In it, fear and sadness filled her eyes. It seemed as though she could not let herself to depart from this child.
All seemed well until a dark voice, a woman’s voice, cut through the silent darkness. “Where do you think your going, Mortella?” Eyes of red and gold flashed in the darkness. “You aren’t thinking of abandoning this child are you? Why, this child has a power that none others could possibly have. We could use her for defeating Starus, Mortella. It’d be wonderful victory, and it would be all because of this child there.” Her eyes seemed filled with enjoyment of the thought of this. She stared at the child as a hungry wolf would at a defenseless lamb.
“I could never do that, Morga. You know very well that if that were to happen than this child will become a monster.” Mortella told her. She clung to the child tighter as if it was the only way to keep her away from this woman. She chanted several indistinct words softly to herself. Suddenly, electricity comes from the dark sky out of no where. The sudden burst of electricity hit Morga with a jolt. Screams could be heard, but none reached the ears of the people around them. Nothing stirred at all.
As the screams could still be heard, Mortella ran away from Morga as fast as possible, hoping this would buy her time to get the child to safety. She ran as though she was still be followed by Morga. She ran as though nothing mattered. She ran and ran to wherever her feet would take her. Her tears flowing out like a waterfall. "You can never run away, Mortella!! I will find her!!" Morga screamed, she was not dead yet...
The child cooed at this woman who was her mother, thinking nothing of the situation surrounding her. She would never know what had become of this night or how she became what she had became, or know where had came from. Mortella looked at her darling child as she ran. Oh how she wished she could keep her. Grow and watch this child became strong and beautiful. Fall in love, learn things, get in fights, and smile her smile. All of that was gone in an instant when they had found out what her power would be. All of this was because the power, a power that could destroy an army in an instant. The thing feared by all things in Levicus. A power that could be used against her own country, which is what Mortella feared the most of all things to happen.
Soon she ended up at an orphanage near the large clock in the middle of London. Oh please be safe here. Don’t let Morga find her, please…. She prayed as she squeezed her darling girl once more before finally setting her down before the door of the orphanage. Mortella set a note saying what her name was, her age, and anything else that what be to some use to them. She hoped that it would be enough. She grabbed a cloth beneath her coat and made it look as though she still had the baby. She knocked on the door and disappeared within a flash. She walked away, doing that, her necklace fell. Which now layed in the hands of an elder lady, but let’s not jump to conclusions. Not a trace of her seemed to be left behind. All but the child remained on the doorstep.
The door opened slowly. A woman answered the door, a lady in her middle-ages, possibly now 24 years old. Her brown hair seemed as though she had a rough night. “Hello?” she called. “Hello, anyone there?” She heard a tiny little wail come from the white sheets below her. “Oh my….” The lady picked up the bundle and looked. “Oh my I guess you were left he-.” She had finally closed the door, the last time she would see her.
Mortella watched from behind a building as the woman took her daughter out of sight. Her tears filled her eyes, they would never stop. “Goodbye my darling daughter. Grow strong, and never find out about me or Levicus. Stay safe my darling… “
As she looked through the child’s blanket she had found a note. She looked at it several times. “Why look at this deary. Your mother wrote you a note.” She showed the note to the child even though she knew she could not see it. On it, it had said.
Dear Darling Child,
I will never see you again hopefully. I love you so much though. I understand when you read this you’d be angry, but please don’t. I only did this to protect you that would harm you. I regret it deeply. But, grow strong. Do now be afraid of anything, keep your head high, and never look down. I wish you good luck. Remember, I love you and I wish I could not part with you. Goodbye, Renee.
Your Dear Mother, M
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These all happened seventeen years ago in London. Yet everything was all but forgotten. None of it existed anymore to those who experienced it. Yet, none was forgotten within the necklace that Mortella dropped. It held every memory, every emotion, every vision that it had been through. It would be the one thing that would change, and it can only be described by one word, everything.
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Chapter 1(completed) "The Wishing Jewel"
All it took to get there was a simple wish. That's all it took to get to Levnia. An unevitable wish that would change everything. It would also bring me to my worse nightmare, my most worst secret... A secret that I've kept for so long, and tried so hard to forget about. Except, that I would have to face it all on my own, no help, no defense, and no way out. I wasn't prepared to what will happen to me. Coming out of no where without any warning...
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I look up at the blue sky through my room balcony. My short black hair sways with the nothern breeze. My brown hazel brown eyes shine as the sun reflects it. Sometimes my eyes seem to change colors in the eyes of others. Like it would change from hazel brown to the shade of healthy green grass.
Hi, I'm Renee Wethens. I am 16 years old. I'm about to turn 17 this upcoming Thursday. I was adopted by my parents John and Kathrene. I live with them in London since I was 7 years old. John is a missionary, always out and about, and Kathrene is a nurse. I attend Charles High School with my best friends Steven, Anna, Chjin, Karin, and Luke.
Sometimes I wondered, as I sat there on my balcony, who my parents were. I was abandoned by them since I was 3 years old. Abandoned... Anyways, I'd imagined how they looked like, or what they were in life. And at times, I would imagine them smiling with. Don't get me wrong, John and Kathrene are wonderful to me, but I still wonder. On this paticular day thoough, I wondered, why did they abandoned me?
"Renee!!!", Kathrene's voice cuts through my thoughts. "Renee it's time to go now. Hurry it up now!!
It took a few seconds to register the words into my head.. "Yeah, hold on Kathrene. Me and Kathrene were going shopping near the Thames River today. I quickly run out the door of my room.
"Come on, call me mom for once. Do you ever call me mom?", she said with her 'pouty' face again.
We begin to set out our house into the sunny day of London. It was so nice out. It was really a good day to go out. We quickly get there, and the place already seemed busy and full of life.
We see a little stand with jewelry and went over there. They seem to shine brightly under the sun, making them even more dazzling. A star shaped necklace seemed to cetch my eye as I skimmed through the other necklaces.
"Why isn't that beautiful?" Kathrene said. "Do you want it? You got to pay it yourself though." she said with a laugh.
A sligh laugh slips through my lips. "Yeah I know Kathrene. You don't have to worry about that. " I picked up the necklace. and looked at it. It almost seemed to glow all on its own. My eyes shine at it.
"Oh my. It seems as though you like this necklace. Ah yes, I found that when I was walking in the streets. If you want, you can get it. It doesnt cost that much. And look, it makes your shine a lil'." The strange old women put the necklace near me ad looked. I looked at the mirror. The necklace did make my eyes shine.
As I looked at the star shaped jewel on the necklace, I saw something. I looked at it again, and suddenly, a gust of images came into mind. It landed on one paticular image... In it, a woman was tsanding near the edge of a cliff. I looked closer. I gasep. The woman looked a lot like me. Only thing was, she had tanned skin, long, srtaight black hair that swayed with the breeze, and sea blue eyes. Somehow though, I felt as I knew her, she dazzled me. She was probably in her 40's, yet strong and determined. Her eyes filled with sadness and yet passion.
She had a blue dress, though it seemed new, it was a dress a queen or princess would wear in the miedieval times. As she turned to go away, a glimmer caught my eye.. O her neck was the smae necklace which I now had. I was s confused now. What was goin on?Confusion crept through my mind once more, I didn't know exactly what I was doing.
Shen looked back at the sea. The sea soon blended in with her own eyes. She stood there, near that cliff. Just stood there. Her eyes seemed filled with an unknown sadness. Suddenly, she would say one thing that would change everything. Something that woul effect my very thoughts and dreams. "Renee..."

Chapter 2(incomplete) "Confusion"
I stood there in confusion, wonderment, and in happiness. After she said that name, it felt as though it turned me into stone. Like it was some spell she put on me. I thought to myself, how can this be? There was just one word that I could possibly think of that ould explain to me who she was. She was my mother... I wanted to reach out to her and hug her. To say 'I'm her mom!! It's me, Renee!' My legs would not move though, and yet, I was so happy, I could just burst into tears, I held them.
As soon as I looked back up at her, the image began to slip away. Soon all in all, it disappeared, bringing me back to Lndon. Nothin had changed. Nothin was affected by what I had seen, except me. Just this one girl, in her own thoughts. Awed by what she had seen. Was it magic that brought me there? I thought to myself.I don't think I was imagining it. It was too real for it not to be.. I'm so confused right about now... I thought again. What was going on that I didn't know about? Nothing made sense right about now. Was it just a fragment of my mind, just a image of how I wanted my mother to be? I wasn't sure.
"Honey, is everything alright?" Kathrene asked as she looked at me worriedly. Her eyes seemed to show it as well as her voice.
"Um yeah... Yeah I'm ok." I lied. I put on a small smile at her hoping she would just forget it. She didn't seemed to be convinced. "Seriously, I am." I asure her again. "Um ma'am? Where did you get this necklace? I'm kind of interested in it." Kathrene still had a worried lookk on her face. She didn't know wether or now if she should persaude on in order to get to me, but brushed it off for the moment. The thought still lingered in her mind though. She went to the stand on the other side, hoping to get a good bargain on something there. She watched me on the corner of her eye.
The lady looks at the jewel again. Inspecting it several times, the lady finally remembers. "Oh yeeees. I remember it now..." She retraced her steps. "Yes it was sixteen to sevent een years ago when I found it. I remember like it was yesterday. Ahhhh..." Seventeen years ago, the day I was born. I was now very curious. She jogged through her memories again. "While I was walking, I came across this jewel here. I had it ever since then you see. Now because of my age and also the money, I have to sell some stuff, including this here. Oh I do wish I could keep it a little longer, I've worn it countless of times. Oh well, here you darling." She hands the necklace back to me.
"Thank you ma'am. I appreciate it a lot." I said to her with a smile.
"Oh it's not a problem at all. Thank you for coming darling." She smiled gratefully at me.
As I stood there and looked at this jewel, I finially said, "I'll buy it." Once that was said I was off. The next two hourse were somewhat of a blur. We shopped and shopped, it was fun and it got my mind off of the images. Fianllyit was time to go. The London streets, yet still full of life, was coming to a near end. A day full of confusion and happiness still filled my mind.
It was now time for dinner, and I was starving. Since it was Saturday, it was italian night, so that meant we were having lasagna and salad. Yu... I didn't mind too much, I liked coking. It brought me closer to Kathrene while John was gone. "Okay! You know what to do right? I'm going to give your dad a call while he's there." Kathrene said as she leaves the kitchen.
I could hear Kathrene's voice as she spoke. Those two were just like college students all over again. I smiled to myself at the thought of it. I slight giggle came through my lips. I hope they'll be together for a long time... I thought to myself with a smile upon my face.
While Kathrene was talking, I silently got the necklace out to look at it. It was still glowing even though the sun wasn't out, or there was no light shining upon it. Just my shadow. The colors green, blue, purple all reflected. If you moved it a certain way, they would go from green, blue, purple, to pink, , violet, and turquoise. In the middle of the necklace was a little tiny mirror with a tiny clear jewels the size of a shoestring hole surrounding it. Each shined as beautifully as the other. There was one odd jewel though. The colors turquoise, blue, red, green, violet, and pink mixed into it. All in all, the necklace was beautiful, and special to me somehow. I felt as though I've had this before, or somehow I was related to it somehow. I looked closely at it again. I was still so awed by it.
I kept looking at the necklace for a while and before Kathrene came back I put it in my pocket again. "Well John is in Africa now. So far it is raining, can you believe it, raining! They'll have to wait until the rain stops before they can head out. Oh I do hope he comes home safely."her eyes filled with a bit of sadness and yet excitement. I smiled again at her.
"Don't worry 'bout it, Kathrene. He'll be fine, He always usually is anyways." I patted her back reassuring her. "Besides, it's not like he is alone, he has his friends. Just pray that they'll make it back safely."
After dinner I headed back to my room to change for the night. I was so tired, and yet, full of excitement. I quickly grabbed my clothing and went to the bathroom. I turned on the shower. It always calmed me down a bit once I took a bath. The hot water touched my cold skin. It felt so good that I just closed my eyes with my head to the ceiling. I tired to imagine the images the necklace gave me once more. I imagined me with that woman who could be my mother. I imagined running around and singing, laughing, and just being with each other. I smiled at the thought. I finally opened my eyes. I was sad that I could not see her at least in person, but I couldn't help that.I didn’t know how to get those images back.
I sat at my desk thinking about those images. They were so strange and yet familiar. The necklace seemed familiar in my hands now. I stared and thought at the same time. I couldn’t help myself to try once more to see those images. I looked at the mirror in the necklace concentrating to see if it would work, nothing happened. I looked once more at the mirror and stared hoping this time it would work. Suddenly, the images came to life finally. They swarmed my thought and mind, finially it stopped at one image. It was not the same image as I saw before. I looked away, but something caught my eye. I looked once more.
A man was surrounded by children who seemed to be maids or servants. I couldn't tell, but what they were wearing was different from the man's. I didn't know how the man looked like even though he was facing me. His face was blackened out like a burt picture. It almost seemed as though like someone wanted him to be forgotten. To be nothing to them anymore. I knew he exsisted because his voice rang out through the image into a sweet voice. His voice almost luled me to sleep. I felt conforted and safe in his voice, like a father that I never knew. As I closed my eyes in confort I hear another voice. A voice familiar to me, a woman's voice.
I looked up to see the same women near those cliffs in the other image. This time, she was pregnant and seemed to be near of her labor day. She smiled at the mansurrounded by children with love and happiness at the sight. "George, it is time to come in now. Also, can you not stay untill the child is born? The army can deal with you for that one battle. Please stay..."her expresion had sadness in it now.
"You know I can not, Mortella. True that they might not need me, but I am their king. I must not abandon my men." By now, the children had left the area of the two lovers. Her face fell once more. "I promise though, I will come back. How could I leave my family behind?" He hugs her tightly with eyes filled with love. He knew that there was a possibility that he wouldn't come back, but he said that regardless of what might happen. "Now, let's go in shall we?" He grabbed her hand and led them away. She smiled at the man who is her husband. Mortella hoped he would keep her promise.
"What should we call our child if it is a boy?" Mortella asked her husband. She was eager to know.
"We should call him Reko and if it were to be a girl.... let's see. I don't know." He answered back. They both thought of the name of their child. They both smiled as if they knew what eachother would say. At the same time they answered. "How about Renee?"
At that moment, the images slipped away once more like the last time. I reached out for the two people whom I begin to think are my parents. My hands grabbed nothing. Suddenly, it was black, darkness filled my mind, yet, I could see so clearly through the darkness. No light eluminated the room, yet I could see my self clearly. Hello Renee. Seemed as though youy finally found our family. Do you feel accomplished now? The voice rang out through the darkness. "W-who are you? Where am I?" I asked looking around aimlessly. Why, I am you and you are me, Renee. You are also, in your own mind. You've finally found me as well she said once more. Suddenly, another girl appeared before me. She looked a lot like me! Her hair was white and her eyes were green. They flashed brown. She was completely opposite from me. I felt safe yet terrified by her.
She smiled at me, and yet it was a grin to me. It started to slip. "What, who are you exactly? What d you mean by me?" I tried to reach for her. She just stood there smiling at me Goodbye for now, my darling Renee.Then, the girl and darkness disappeared and it seemed as though I was asleep, my head on my desk where I was before. My head swarmed with those images. My mind was filled with that one girl's face. She looked so much like me.I didn't know wether I shoudl trust her or not. I felt as though I shouldn't and yet, I should

(to reedited and continued. Thanks for reading this partial story!! More will be added as soon I write more. >.<)
Just keep on reading and I promise you there will be more!! I promise!! O_O
Posted 6/29/10

i read teh updatee owo
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MOARRRRRR >3
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okokok. I'm kinda lazyyyyy tho. XD so wait a lil. besides, I'm not evn done writing the story.
Be patient, ne? BTW, still dnt know how to do the color thingy. >.<
GAH~! me so STWUPID>>>>
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Dont worry, mostly everybody in this group is lazy and stupid XDDD but thats just thee way we are >:D i shall read ur story....LATER! i ish too lazy =.= plus i ish watching KHR! heeheeheeheeeeeee. Ur story looks interesting though. Just looking at it makes me wanna update my story X3
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haha thx for the reassurance. ^_^ It makes me feel a lot better. Not time for editing!! =_= But im so tired right now.... Need... Sleep.... *snores* gah!! *reaches for laptop while on floor* almost there!! gah... fail. T_T ~~~
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Posted 6/30/10 , edited 6/30/10
Kinnie shall read it later too! : D She has to go soon so yeahhh xD


**Besides : D Laziiness is awesome
*That and procastination <3
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OOHH, I LIKE THE IDEA!!
I wanna read moooreee now ^^
the necklacceeeee!
it's MAGIKKKKKK I bet :DD

OH OH OH AND ..... *goes off on a predicting spree*
lol just ignore me |D
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Posted 6/30/10
Kinniieiee has finally read ittt
and cannot wait for moreee ♥
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Posted 7/3/10
well.. I've edited it. Please enjoy it. ^_^
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Posted 7/3/10
Awww, the prologue ;w;
so sad TwT
But the story still looks awesome >w<
Posted 7/3/10
Readd teh Prologue ToT
AWWW ! </3
-reads more- <3
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GAH!!! I don't have any ideas for my story! I think I'm on 'Author's Block' moment finally... I don't know what else to type on my story. huh.... well, it'll tke a while for me to reedit this story. so plz be patient ya'll. -_^
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