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Posted 7/3/10
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fullmoon12 wrote:

Karisuma didnt know what to do when Kyu dissapeared. she looked above her and around her searching for where she could of gone. She prepared her bow.


Kyu appeared only a second and slashed Karisumas side open and dissappeared again

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My RPC need "One Winged Angel" As their theme Song nyan =^.^=
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"Fuck" Karisuma clutched her side. The pain was terrible, felt like her skin was on fire. She was on high alert now. She took out a White sketchbook, placed her hand on the cover " COPY ME, five" Nothing happened with the sketchbook. Karisuma took the book and held it to her chest, holding onto the sides of the book without opening it. She hoped for Kyu to appear in front of her and be caught off guard as the copy's of hers would hopefully knock her over

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OOC: Hey lets try not to god mod.... dont say you got me but imply that you did.
" appeared a second and attempted to slash her side before dissapearing again."
if you would of said that i could of posted something better. like
"Karisuma senced Kyu's presence, as Kyu appeared Karisuma tried to move but her side was slashed before she could react. She keeled over onto the ground on her hands and knee's then jumped at Kyu right as she dissapeared."Fuck" Karisuma clutched her side. The pain was terrible, felt like her skin was on fire. She was on high alert now. She took out a White sketchbook, placed her hand on the cover " COPY ME, five" Nothing happened with the sketchbook. Karisuma took the book and held it to her chest, holding onto the sides of the book without opening it. She hoped for Kyu to appear in front of her and be caught off guard as the copy's of hers would hopefully knock her over."

Then you could look at wether the move karisuma gave your character would expect that move or not. In the post i implyed that you would appear in front of me so my clones could knock you over, but i never said they did. then you could respond and give a longer post. RP's are supposed to be kind of story like. i think the RP would be a little more interesting that way. Go to me and my friends website http://beatyourfacewithaham.webs.com/apps/forums/topics/show/2466441-the-beginning?page=1 That site is the usual skill most RP players play at. well around me at least. check out Bael he's been role playing for 7 years or so. he's a really good role player!!!
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Posted 7/3/10
Sorry there's only so much I can type on a iPod before mymom turnaround and looks to see if I was awake or not. I wasn't trying to god mod... I was trying to make some sort of combitnation move with teleportation and a scythe....... Sorry for the confusion.....I apparentally haven't rp' d in forever to remember what to do
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Posted 7/5/10
haha its ok. but it'd be nice help for others who dont RP much
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Posted 7/5/10 , edited 7/5/10
yea it kinda would
so basically I just set an example
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