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[RP] Kingdom Hearts
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M / Visor Lair
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Posted 5/10/07
OOC: Sure sephiroth but please ppl when posting something irrelavent to the story use the OOC: head line like in my post. Just post a char right here sephiroth and we can throw you in. Just make sure your char isn't godlike and all powerful ok.
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OOC: Srry, my bad. And ok, thanks.

IC:
Name: Flair Marquis

Sex: Male

Age: 32

Weapon: Alchemical greatsword

Physical pescription: Average height, short/spiky black hair, brown eyes, mildly sharp chin, average featues, slightly more muscular than normal, black leather jacket over a beige tunic, large black bird wings, and slightly long canines

Short bio: (from a story I wrote) Flair's brother, Nero, killed his parents. Swearing revenge, Flair sets out to kill him, but is captured and sold to the slave trade. After many years of numbing work, he was adopted by an old war veteran, who took the place of his father. After many years of hardships, Flair sets out again, prepared, to find and slay his brother. I'm not gonna bother to go into his wings. It'd take too long.
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Posted 5/10/07
OOC: Nice char, just have him somehow end up in the kingdom hearts world Radiant Gardens and have him meet up with the crew and your all set. Post soon.
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Posted 5/10/07
OOC: I think you should set up a deadline for the people who want to play, which might work.

We can'r really wait forever.
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Posted 5/14/07
((@ everyone: I don't have to time right now to post a detailed history and introduction so I'll work on the specific of that a little later. For now, I'll just set my character to arrive in Radiant Garden so that I can join in. Plus, I've given a sample of my posting style. Basically, any actions, descriptions, combat, etc, are set in Italics and I make sure to bold the names of people who are talking and separate them into paragraphs so that it's easier to read. When I'm talking out of game, I use the double bracket like I'm doing now.))


*The cover of darkness is suddenly broken by a bright flash of light for a brief moment and then it disappears, engulfed by the darkness once more. This was the method of entrance by a mysterious knight in armor as he enters the realm of Radiant Gardens. He stands on top of a high peak, overlooking the entire area searching for someone.*

Morthoseth (thinks): Galatea... Femrir... I won't let you down. I'll find Zero and obtain the cure. I promise...

*Morthoseth leaps down toward Radiant Gardens and vanishes under the cover of darkness.*
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Posted 5/15/07
Max sits down at a table in back as Kim sits next to him. Kim swallows her food and turns to Max. "So Max isn't today the day you check with Cid about your gummi ship??" "Yeah it is. I was gonna go right after I ate." "You think it's ready?" "I hope, it sure has taken long enough." "What do you mean, long enough?? You only put the down payment on it 2 months ago." "Yeah but should a ship realy take over 2 months to build?" "How should I know?" "Well lets go find out shall we." Max gets up and walks out of the cafe with Kim at his heels. They arrive at Cid's house. Max knocks on the door. The door opens and Cid looks at the 2 of them. "You 2 again? You guys come once a week you know that. It gets kinda annoying ya know." "So Cid any progress??" "For the thousanth time Max no!!! I told you gummi parts are kinda rare now. They aren't as easy to find as they used to be. Your just gonna have to wait." "Well can I see what you do have?" "Fine." Cid leads Max and Kim into the garage. Max takes a look at the ship. "Hey it looks pretty ready to me. How come you say it isn't ready?" "Well I did get almost all of the exterior parts in and applied but it's the interior parts I am missing. Not too many more though, I've got a good vendor now. Maybe another month tops." "Another month. Damn. Are you sure?" "If it is any sooner I'll call you. Now please don't come back next week. If anything you just slow me down." Max and Kim leave the garage. As they walk Kim gets an idea and turns to Max. "Hey Max how about we go see Aerith?" "Sure why not." "Ok lets go." Max and kim hurry off towards Aerith's house as a dark cloud arose on the horizon and neo heartless started creeping out of the shadows.
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Posted 5/15/07
((@ Viser: I was wondering if you could modify the format of your post and space it out a bit more. The reason I'm asking is because, it's not the easiest style to read. To get a sense of what is happening, I have to read through everything instead of just being able to skip through the parts which are not too important and go right into the parts which matter most. In this case, the part about the neo heartless at the very end is the part which is most important and the part I can use, for example, to enter the role-playing.

At the same time, I think your format will also force players who can't role-play as often to read through everything before they have a chance to post and I think it will make it easier on them to be able to skim through a post if it's separated into paragraphs.

Well, here is what your post might look like in another form. Let me know what you think and if I've convinced you of my view:

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*Max sits down at a table in back as Kim sits next to him. Kim swallows her food and turns to Max*

Kim: "So Max isn't today the day you check with Cid about your gummi ship??"
Max: "Yeah it is. I was gonna go right after I ate."
Kim: "You think it's ready?"
Max: "I hope, it sure has taken long enough."
Kim: "What do you mean, long enough?? You only put the down payment on it 2 months ago."
Max: "Yeah but should a ship realy take over 2 months to build?"
Kim: "How should I know?"
Max: "Well lets go find out shall we."

*Max gets up and walks out of the cafe with Kim at his heels. They arrive at Cid's house. Max knocks on the door. The door opens and Cid looks at the 2 of them.*

Cid: "You 2 again? You guys come once a week you know that. It gets kinda annoying ya know."
Max: "So Cid any progress??"
Cid: "For the thousanth time Max no!!! I told you gummi parts are kinda rare now. They aren't as easy to find as they used to be. Your just gonna have to wait."
Max: "Well can I see what you do have?"
Cid: "Fine."

*Cid leads Max and Kim into the garage. Max takes a look at the ship.*

Max: "Hey it looks pretty ready to me. How come you say it isn't ready?"
Cid: "Well I did get almost all of the exterior parts in and applied but it's the interior parts I am missing. Not too many more though, I've got a good vendor now. Maybe another month tops."
Max: "Another month. Damn. Are you sure?"
Cid: "If it is any sooner I'll call you. Now please don't come back next week. If anything you just slow me down."

*Max and Kim leave the garage. As they walk Kim gets an idea and turns to Max.*

Kim: "Hey Max how about we go see Aerith?"
Max: "Sure why not."
Kim: "Ok lets go."

*Max and kim hurry off towards Aerith's house as a dark cloud arose on the horizon and neo heartless started creeping out of the shadows.*
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Even though it's longer, I think this is much quicker to read because it separates who is talking and their actions, so you can just skim through it. It's also very flexible for character thoughts because you can just post something like "Max (thinks):" and we immediately get a quick insight into what Max is thinking. I think the best way to describe the style is to compare it to a script instead of a narrative. But I'm not sure about you though. From my RP experience in other forums, this is the way they've thought me and the one I've used and has worked well. I'm just presenting it to see if it would be helpful.))
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Posted 5/15/07
OOC: I understand and do like that style. I just write that way because I like to have the others read the entire post so they get a feel of what is happening not just the jist of the important crap. I will try a slightly different style to make it easier but it won't be any drastic changes.
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Posted 5/15/07
OOC: I'll wait for the fight scene to happen before my character appears. It looks better that way.
Posted 5/15/07
OOC: Hey guys I think I'll join And then I'll be the first girl! I don't know much about about Kingdom of Hearts, I played the game but hardly finished... but anyway, so tell me, what exactly do we do in this? Just write out a story and stuff... I'm confused.
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Posted 5/15/07
I wunna join! Can I still join? I'll just put my Character Profile

Name: Wolloh

Weapon: Sseltraeh (Cel-Tree) [WTF?! weird name] It has a small keychain resembling the head of a heartless. The weapon generates a dark aura and turns the user into a Heartless like form.

Age: 14

Description: Average Height, Hair like Sora's only black, Wears a white trench coat covering his face with the hood and wearing a black t-shirt and jeans inside.

History: He vaguely knows about his past only remembering he once lived in a quiet world (Actually he came from the World that Never Was) He know searches someone who knows about his past wandering endlessly in different worlds (like in KH)

I'll just join in when it starts :)
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Posted 5/16/07
OOC: Go ahead, both of you can join, although the story already started.
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Posted 5/16/07

Senta wrote:

OOC: Hey guys I think I'll join And then I'll be the first girl! I don't know much about about Kingdom of Hearts, I played the game but hardly finished... but anyway, so tell me, what exactly do we do in this? Just write out a story and stuff... I'm confused.
^ That part about writing a story would just be related to your own character history and maybe when you decide to pursue something on your own but it's really optional. You don't need to have a very long and complex history, just something simple will do.

I guess the main thing to do right now would be to incorporate yourself into the role-playing by getting to the world of Radiant Gardens. That's where the story seems to be going on and where many of us are focusing our histories to arrive to. After that, meet everyone else and just interact with each other by role-playing your character.
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Posted 5/16/07
OOC: I really don't feel like being the next rp post again so I will just make tristen do it tomorrow or close to that. And Yeah everyone join up this is a game where everyone is allowed as long as your char is not god like and all powerful. Just like Morthoseth said you need a little history and how you get to Radiant Gardens. Then you just talk, act, and move like your character should and that is roleplaying.
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Posted 5/16/07
I think we have enough players:

Max (Viser)
Kim (Viser)
Morthoseth
Licec (Caos)
Dragon (azndragon)
Drake (tristen)
Flair Marquis (SephirothXIII)
Wolloh (notpronerz)
(no character yet) (Senta)
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