My Inspiration
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" This is a story about Xyriel {Cy-rel}, a 18 year old girl that is afraid to trust people due to her past. However, with the help of her friends Miguel and Jasmine she learns that trust is possibly a good thing. as soon as Jeremy, a handsomely good looking guy comes into the picture, she encounters familiar feelings and becomes frightened but comforted once again. Will she finally overcome her fear or will time repeat itself? Read and find out. "

A/N: Omomomo~ the chapters aren't that long and sorry for the crappy summary. It practically only summarizes the first chapter but oh well, it was all I could think of @.@. It was inspired by the song "Inspiration by Zeekay". All in all I hope you enjoy this horrible story. Huhu~.
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That tells us nothing to do with the plot, neither do we know where it's set or anything. What I've learnt so far about your story is that some bitch has social anxiety problems, and her half-soaked friends try to help her while finding some cliché smexeh guy, who comforts her and her fear (which is apparently a fear of everything) is overcome. Good times.
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Wow, you have a lot of time on your hands.
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