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Posted 8/5/10
Her hands fall, cold and pale.
The air around her smells of stale.

Red velvet comes from her lips and wrist.
No one knows how she fell to this

............dreadfull twist.
Alone and frightened as she may be.

The darkness clears so she can see.
Not sad, nor content, the confusion around her

.....................deepens yet.
A path of light and a path of dark place their bets,

both knowing where she goes next.
.............But not sure which to follow
She stays behind so her heart can wallow.
Forever cold and lost now is she,
...........not knowing where to be....

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Posted 8/6/10 , edited 8/7/10
This is a haiku
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Usually dont make sense
1 2 3 4 5 6 7
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or
Haikus dont make sense
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The topic does not relate
1 2 3 4 5 6 7
Yummy chocolate chips
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Posted 8/6/10
lol nice
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Posted 8/7/10
haha thnx luv urs 2
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23 / M / Wasting away in f...
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Posted 8/8/10
Demon of the Night (Viewer Disgretion Is Advised)


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Posted 8/10/10
Hey... what do you think about mine?
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Posted 8/29/10
its good haha, really scared me ^-^

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20 / F / Somewhere ...
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Posted 9/3/10
Dont noe if i should die
Dnt noe if i should live this lie
Your words, they were hurtful
even wen you were walking thru that door
you noe,
tears, falling down my face
You look at me but why wit that face ? !
(still working on it xPP)
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Posted 9/10/10

littledevil90239 wrote:

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OMG!!! this one is awesome... can you teach me? can you?? from now on, I'm a fan..

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Posted 9/12/10


lol... well you can't really teach genius
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Posted 9/16/10

littledevil90239 wrote:



lol... well you can't really teach genius



you can't?


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Posted 9/16/10
here's the one I made... :)

For you*

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That's really good... i like it
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Posted 9/18/10

littledevil90239 wrote:



That's really good... i like it


thank you..... but yours is better!!!! much much better!!!
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Posted 9/18/10
eh... it's alright i guess... I meen... it's kinda dark don't you think?
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