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Prologue

A mysterious teenager walks into a village face covered by a hood he walks by an alley and see’s a kid getting beat up he walks up to the bullies beating up the kid. They turn around one of them says “You got a problem” another one says “You want to join the party two we always like kicking some ass.
The mysterious teenager smiles and says really I came here to do the same thing. The kid laying on the ground tried to get up to look at the mysterious teenager a bright light appears when the kid blinked the three bullies were laying on the floor face first the mysterious teenager yells “Yeah now who was the one who was going to get his ass Kicked

The boy stood in shock the mysterious teenager looks at the boy and extends his hand and says “Don’t worry these punks aren’t going to bother you again the bullies get up and they start to run the mysterious teenager turns around and yells “That’s right ??????? You better run go cry to your momma and let them know who gave you your ass whooping.

The Boy chuckles and says who are you? What’s your name? The mysterious teenager turns around and says.
My name…

They Call Me GIN…
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Chapter 1
The Hidden Village


Man Yelling: Stop Him! Stop That Thief!
GIN: (laughs) you cant catch me you old man.
Man Yelling: Stop Him Right Now!
Woman #1: Isn’t that Gin again
Woman #2: Yep again getting into trouble that boy never learns.
Gin: I’m almost home free.
“Crash”
Gin falls to the ground.
Gin: Hey what’s your problem?
Man: Getting into trouble yet again Gin.
Gin: HUH?
Man: What you don’t recognize your old man the leader of this village!
Gin: Who is that again?
“Thump”
Gin: “Ouch” what you did that for?
Man: Do you remember now you little brat.
Gin: Yes Dad I remember.
Gin’s Father/Shin: Yea you’ve better have remembered
Man: I finally caught up to you little thief, oh Shin how are you doing sir?
Shin: I’m doing ok what seems to be the problem here?
Man: This boy here broke into my store and stole from me.
Shin: Oh really now what did you still Gin.
Gin: Some snacks, I wanted to see if my skills are still sharp.
“Smack”
Shin: And you couldn’t buy that stuff you stupid boy.
Gin: I didn’t feel like it you old man.
Shin: I’ll take it from here ill make sure you get paid for any damages.
Man: Thank you Shin you take care of us that’s why you are a great leader.
Shin: A leader is responsible for his people he must protect the no matter what.
Gin: (mumbles) yeah what ever.
Shin: Let’s go for a walk Gin.
Shin: Gin why do you get into so much trouble.
Gin: I don’t know.
Shin: Gin one of these days you will have to be leader of this village, and you must learn to protect it along with our most valued treasures.
Gin: Who would want to protect an old sword?
Shin: That sword is a sword with incredible powers to destroy anything in its path that swords is filled with evil that’s why we protect it to never let it fall in the hands of the enemy.
Shin: But don’t worry my son this village is hidden and only a few know of its whereabouts.
Gin: Cool, but didn’t you tell me about a sword that is strong enough to fight against the evil sword.
Shin: Yes there is it is this sword that is always with me the legend says that if this sword is needed again in battle the spirit of the dragon who rests in this blade will appear to the person who is worthy of calling Master.
Shin: This sword has been hand down through generation and now it is your turn to entrust this sword to you.
Gin: WOW this is a cool sword dad ill guard it with my life.
Shin: I know you will now go we need some supplies from the next village that’s your punishment for getting into trouble.
Gin: Ah man fine ill go.
Girl: So what you do this time Gin.
Gin: Oh hey Kairi nothing just the same old stuff.
Kairi: Always getting into trouble “laughs”
Were you off to .
Gin: To get some supplies for the village.
Kairi: As punishment I see “laughs”
Well see you later Ginki.
Gin: Hey stop calling me that!
Kairi , Kairi
Did she even hear me?
“Gin leaves towards the other village while passing by a stranger he can’t help but wonder”
Gin: I’ve seen him before…
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Chapter 2
The Hidden Village Burns…


“While Gin walks back with the supplies the mysterious man enters the hidden village with one intention in mind to see the village burned down”
Mysterious Man: It’s been so long since I’ve seen this village.
Mysterious Man: Every time I look at this place it makes me sick, once I get what I want ill be happy to see this place burn.
Mysterious Man: “Chuckles”
Guard: Master Shin! Master Shin!
Shin: Yes! What is the problem?
Guard: The Temple. The Temple’s burning.
Shin: What! Get some help from the villagers to put it out.
Guard: Master Shin I don’t think there’s any one here everyone’s has seemed to have disappeared. I think there all dead.
Shin: What! What is going on here? What’s happening?
“Master Shin rushes towards the temple looking around he see’s all his people laying dead on the ground. Master Shin reaches the temple he looks around and see’s a guard walking towards him before he could ask the guard what’s going on. the guard drops dead and a mysterious shadow is seen behind the guard’s body.
Shin rushes towards the shadow he starts getting closer until he can finally see the shadow figure’s face Shin stops in a state of shock.
“Shin Screams”
Shin: You! It can’t be your supposed to be dead.
Mysterious Man: Yes you did you sent me into the cave of no return, but I’m back and my thirst for blood grows. I already have what I came for.
Mysterious Man shows the sword”
Mysterious Man: I have acquired the Black Dragon and you are powerless to stop me the dragon has already been released destruction has come to this village .
Shin: I will not let you do this Sage for the fate of this world I will stop you.
Sage: (laughs) You don’t stand a chance and your not even in possession of the legendary sword and even if you were you can’t even unleash its full potential like I have.
“Sage draws his sword a black aura surrounds him, the swords aura glows darker he points the sword towards Shin”
Sage: Draw your sword I want to end this quickly this sword hungers for your blood.
“Shin draws his sword the sword glows a faint blue aura”
Shin: You may be stronger but I won’t make this easier for you even if I die I will take you with me.
Sage: (Laughs) amuse me old man.
“They engage into battle the village burning in the background the battle not looking to good for Shin, while far away Gin is walking back to the village not knowing of the horror awaiting him…”
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wow nice story....are u gonna make a manga about it?
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maybe in future plans i do have a friend who draws good but my vision is straight to animation if i ever get it finished lol
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Chapter 3
Rise of the Legendary Dragon

“While Gin is walking with the supplies he notices smoke coming from the village he rushes towards it he finally reaches the village only to see it completely burned down he looks around in shock looking for any survivors he looks at the temple far away and notices sparks of swords clashing he rushes towards the temple”
Gin: What is going on what or who caused this.
Gin: Kairi where’s Kairi.
“Gin runs around the village looking for Kairi he shows up at her house only to find it burned to the ground”
Gin: Kairi! Did she get out in time?
Kairi!
“Gin falls on his knees screaming Kairi name while a power within him awakens the image of a dragon opening its eye”
“Gin looks at the temple and see’s the flashes of swords”
Gin: Someone is fighting.
Gin: I must go to the temple someone might need my help.
“Gin arrives at the temple and see’s his father being defeated in front of his eyes”
Gin: FATHER!!!
Sage: If it isn’t daddy’s little boy come to face the same faith as your father.
Gin: I’ll Kill You Son of a Bitch.
“Gin draws his sword the swords starts glowing bright blue, Gin’s body was covered by a blue aura.
Sage: Ah so you are in possession of the sword let me kill you now before you become a treat.
“Sage points his sword at Gin and Gin points his at Sage both swords emitting the strongest glow; they rush each other and a flash of light covers the temple, Gin falls to the ground Sage walks up to his body”
Sage: Your weak just like your father join him in oblivion.
“Sage ready’s his sword Sage thrusts his sword”
“Gin extends his hand towards the sword and whispers”
Gin: Rise Dragon
Flash of light comes out of Gin’s sword and the image of a Dragon appears”
Sage: So you appear now (Laughs) you’re too late.
“Sage thrusts his sword a flash of light blinds Sage, his sword stabs the floor”
Sage: Good one Dragon you have out smarted me this time, you and that boy will live for now but I will kill you when I find you.
“A flash of light appears at an unknown place Gin floats down and lays down on the ground unconscious a mysterious voice appears Gin…”


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Chapter 4
Sai The Legendary Dragon
Mysterious Voice: Gin, Gin, Gin Wake Up!
Gin: Huh What, Give me five more minute’s Dad.
“Slap”
Gin: Owe
Mysterious Voice: You better wake up before I kick your ass.
You lazy boy! How can a boy this lazy released me from the sword.
Does this boy really have the potential to master my power?
“Gin wakes up”
Gin: Huh, Who’s There Were Am I?
Mysterious Voice: You’re in a forest miles away from your village.
Gin: Father, the village, everyone.
Mysterious Voice; There all gone Gin am sorry.
Gin: Father No.
“Gin Cries”
Gin: IL kill that son of a bitch ill make him pay for what he’s done.
Mysterious Voice: We will kill him he must not live as long as he holds that dark and evil sword in his hands.
“Gin looks around in shock”
Gin: Who the hell are you and were did you come from.
“Slap”
Mysterious Voice: you got to be kidding me I saved your life and you don’t even know who I am you must be the stupidest boy ever I cant believe you actually have the power to release me from the sword.
Gin: Hmm what sword?
“Slap”
Mysterious Voice: The one you have in your hand stupid.
Gin: Owe what you did that for.
And stop calling me stupid you asshole.
Mysterious Voice: if you would have known better I wouldn’t be calling you stupid.
Gin: Oh yea what don’t I throw you out in the forest and get rid of you once and for all.
Mysterious Voice: Go ahead do it but know this am the only one with the power to help you.
“Gin Stops and looks at the sword”
Gin: Do you really have that power.
Mysterious Voice: Yes but I am weak it took all my power to teleport you here.
Gin: by the way watts your name oh mysterious one.
Mysterious Voice: Very funny you should know my name you are the village chief son.
Gin: I really didn’t pay attention to the stuff he said.
“Slap”
Mysterious Voice: You Imbecile do you even know anything at all ugh my name is Sai the Legendary Dragon.
Gin: Sai huh I guess that’s cool.
So Sai what do we do now.
Sai: I must train you; you are far too weak to unlock your full potential.
Gin: Training huh.
Sai: Yes we must begin training but let me warn you this training will be fierce you might even die.
Gin Laughs
Gin: Bring it I never back down from a challenge.
Sai: Humph
Let’s hope your right
Be aware you will feel that a lot of time will past while your in the chamber you will feel like its years when its hours.
Gin: What ever let’s do this.
Sai: Reckless I will enjoy this.
“A bright lights shoots up from the ground 4 crystal sides emerged and trap Gin inside creating a diamond shape.
Gin: Screams.
Sai: Let The Training Begin!
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Chapter 4
Sai The Legendary Dragon

Mysterious Voice: Gin, Gin, Gin Wake Up!
Gin: Huh What, Give me five more minute’s Dad.
“Slap”
Gin: Owe
Mysterious Voice: You better wake up before I kick your ass.
You lazy boy! How can a boy this lazy released me from the sword.
Does this boy really have the potential to master my power?
“Gin wakes up”
Gin: Huh, Who’s There Were Am I?
Mysterious Voice: You’re in a forest miles away from your village.
Gin: Father, the village, everyone.
Mysterious Voice; There all gone Gin am sorry.
Gin: Father No.
“Gin Cries”
Gin: IL kill that son of a bitch ill make him pay for what he’s done.
Mysterious Voice: We will kill him he must not live as long as he holds that dark and evil sword in his hands.
“Gin looks around in shock”
Gin: Who the hell are you and were did you come from.
“Slap”
Mysterious Voice: you got to be kidding me I saved your life and you don’t even know who I am you must be the stupidest boy ever I cant believe you actually have the power to release me from the sword.
Gin: Hmm what sword?
“Slap”
Mysterious Voice: The one you have in your hand stupid.
Gin: Owe what you did that for.
And stop calling me stupid you asshole.
Mysterious Voice: if you would have known better I wouldn’t be calling you stupid.
Gin: Oh yea what don’t I throw you out in the forest and get rid of you once and for all.
Mysterious Voice: Go ahead do it but know this am the only one with the power to help you.
“Gin Stops and looks at the sword”
Gin: Do you really have that power.
Mysterious Voice: Yes but I am weak it took all my power to teleport you here.
Gin: by the way watts your name oh mysterious one.
Mysterious Voice: Very funny you should know my name you are the village chief son.
Gin: I really didn’t pay attention to the stuff he said.
“Slap”
Mysterious Voice: You Imbecile do you even know anything at all ugh my name is Sai the Legendary Dragon.
Gin: Sai huh I guess that’s cool.
So Sai what do we do now.
Sai: I must train you; you are far too weak to unlock your full potential.
Gin: Training huh.
Sai: Yes we must begin training but let me warn you this training will be fierce you might even die.
Gin Laughs
Gin: Bring it I never back down from a challenge.
Sai: Humph
Let’s hope your right
Be aware you will feel that a lot of time will past while your in the chamber you will feel like its years when its hours.
Gin: What ever let’s do this.
Sai: Reckless I will enjoy this.
“A bright lights shoots up from the ground 4 crystal sides emerged and trap Gin inside creating a diamond shape.
Gin: Screams.
Sai: Let The Training Begin!
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dont be afraid to coment ppl i wont bite lol

chapter 5 coming soon typing my notes to the laptop
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sorry for the long wait i should have chapter 5 uploaded by tommorow been kinda busy lately. p.s i would like for ppl to comment on my story to see how i am doing
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5 new chapters coming tomorrow for my long awaited gin fans lol if I have any working on new ideas for the story!sneak preview!

Gin's apprentice coming soon





Posted 10/12/11
niceeeeeeeeeeeee story , like it
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Chapter 5 finally typed lol enjoy chapter 6 is almost done
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Chapter 5

Training Begins……Oh Man

“Gin wakes up in the middle of a floor the room pitch black.”
Gin: Where am I?
Sai!
Sai!
Sai! Where Are You?
Sai: Here I am
“Sai appears with a bright light that lights up the whole room”
Sai: Your training starts now.
We will begin training your six senses.
First will start with hearing you must be able to hear your opponent even in a room completely pitch black.
You must sense were he is where is he going to attack.
Gin: Ah I did this before this should be a piece of cake.
“Gin moves across the room trying to hear his opponent all of a sudden his opponent strikes and gin fly’s 10 feet away”
Gin: What the hell.
Sai: Laughs Too slow concentrate harder try to see your opponent in front of you.
Gin: It’s hard to see through all this darkness
Sai: Stop being a cry baby and focus…
Gin: Easy for you to say (whispers) “You son of a bitch”
Sai: What you say!
Gin: Nothing man
Sai: It better be nothing ungrateful bastard.
Gin: Just continue the training already.
Sai: Fine no holding back now.
Gin: “heavy breaths” Time to get this over with.
“Gin focuses his energy blue chakra starts building up around him all of a sudden the shadows starts attacking Gin dodges and quickly counters speeding up his punches and blocking at precisely the right timing.
Gin: Fuck Yea I did it take that Sai how you like me now ha ha ha
Sai: Humph very good you have passed this lesson there seems to be hope for you.
Gin: Oh come on Sai you can give me at least a little credit.
Sai: You haven’t earned it yet boy.
Gin: Humph I’ll show you who’s a boy you mother fucker.
Sai: Next Lesson.
“Gin trains constantly making progress each day while every day Sai makes Gin do tougher challenges pushing him to his limits”
Sai: You are finally ready for this day it is time for me to be unleashed we will start with a simple fusion or unleashment.
Okay I’m ready for this I haven’t train this hard in my life.
Sai: Focus your energy, concentrate, feel my power, make it yours.
Sai: We must become one. Concentrate release my power. Call forth your DRAGON!
Gin: I call forth the hidden power inside of me.
Sai: Now say the words that come to your mind.
Gin: Take me to the places I cannot reach. Where your light impales the darkest BEAST!
Gin: NOW LEND ME YOUR POWER SAI LORD OF THE SKIES!
“Gin glows a bright blue aura and behind him an image of a dragon appears. Gin raises his sword and a tattoo appears on his hand all throughout his arm. The image of the dragon shoots towards his sword the sword changes shape. A huge roar is heard.
Sai: This is my first form you have done well. Your incantation was perfect now we are one.
Gin: I feel your power running through my body, I feel like I can do anything.
“Gin starts flash stepping everywhere”
Gin: ha-ha-ha look at my speed it is ten times faster.
Sai: Slow down Gin this is only the beginning. Sage has had a lot of time to master every form of Zerenos. You must gain more power in order to stand a chance against him. We will stop training for now we have a long journey ahead of us.
Gin: yes im ready to get out of this place.
“Gin looks up and a burst of light shoots down. Gin is now back in the forest and the barrier breaks. Gin lands on one knee and on his right hand. Gin looks at the tattoo still visible. Gin stands up to look at and the tattoo slowly disappears.”
Gin: what happened, why did it disappear?
Sai: That’s just the fusion between us ending you are now back to your normal stupid self ha-ha-ha.
Gin: Shut Up
Sai: Come now it will be dark soon we must find a place to rest.
Gin: Yea I am hungry (belly growls) he-he-he I guess im starving.
Sai: Sometimes I think if your hunger was power you be invincible ha-ha-ha. Well there should be a village close by.
Gin: Really let’s go.
Sai: Its also 15 miles away.
“Gin stops”
Gin Ah Really!
Sai: Yes it’s a good way for you to train.
Gin: what you mean training.
Sai: Oh you thought you were going to walk these 15 miles. Oh no boy you going to run none stop.
Gin: WHAT! But we just got done with training.
Sai: Yes you are write but that was just the mental part of training now comes your physical aspect ha-ha-ha.
Gin: But im so hungry to even start running.
Sai: (slaps gin) Stop Bitching and get to work.
Gin: Ah that hurts. Fine! Say when to start.
Sai: NOW RUN BOY!
Gin HERE WE GO…….







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hey guys sorry for the delay i recently moved and ha no internet i am still writing gin working on transfering my notes to the laptop chapter 7 is all ready finnished adding more details on chapter 6 for my viewers who are waiting this will be the chapter were a new character would be introduced and where the story changes form into a bigger story hope u guys are still interested in reading
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