Post Reply "Scelest no Ijo"
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Posted 9/23/10
Mmm, welll. I must say, I LIKE it! it's great! And most things can't make me laugh. but when they were talking about food, I did actually laugh. In all honesty, reminded me of me and my best friend, but that's aside from the point! I liked it a lot! I think it is a very cool idea, and I hope you stick with it. At first I thought, wow, this is long. (and after further thought, it isn't even that long) But upon reading, I would like to read more.
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Posted 9/27/10
thank u very much, m glad u enjoyed reading it, and yes i will stick to it, but i must warn u, the chapters are in deed a little more extensive than this, i am thinking on breaking them down, but i'll see about that.
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Posted 9/27/10
No no, they should be more extensive than that. and you had already stated that that was such a prolog. Although, smaller segments might make them easier to read. at least for lazy people like me. xD
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Posted 9/28/10


lol well i will see what i can do and how short or long can i make them with out taking from their momemtum xDD.
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Posted 9/28/10
Chapter 1
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way to plagiarize: http://www.fictionpress.com/s/2475164/1/Anomaly
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