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Posted 10/17/10


mmkay, thank-you!!!
Posted 10/17/10
Username:neonnekochan
What set did you took?:1
How much time did you take on that set?:10 mins appx.
What program did you use?:Gimp
Result: (gfx in spoiler pls):
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Posted 10/18/10


the color effect's really good , the red tint really stands out nicely.
though the problems are, that one, try zooming in more closely on the white stroke,
it has rough edges, i mean they're not straight. that could only mean one
thing, you didnt render the guy cleanly, remember to render it cleanly
dont just use magic wand., because magic wand does select the whole white
background but it still leaves tiny bits of white in the end.

second, the background needs more design.
try using textures in the background, but not too much
or it will look dirty, try using different textures and changing
they're modes. it'll help a lot in making the background nice.

and lastly, the text needs more improvement.
im not really good at text effects, but try adding patterns
to it and blending it with the text, also try adding gradients
and it will look nice. download fonts which you can use
nicely in dafont.com or any other font site.

i hope that helped a bit.
it takes a lot of practice to make a graphic nice,
so keep it up! xD
Posted 10/18/10


Mmkay, Thanks!!!!
Posted 10/18/10


Mmkay! Thanks lol I suck at rendering
Posted 10/18/10
Username:neonnekochan
What set did you took?:4
How much time did you take on that set?:15-25 mins
What program did you use?:Gimp
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Posted 10/18/10


woot! the color effect's really really nice and i favor it xD
though the problem is it lacks design, you should add
more textures (not too much) and you should work on
the text more again, that's all, keep it up~! xD
Posted 10/19/10


mmkay Thanks!
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Posted 10/21/10 , edited 10/21/10
Username:vocaloid_mikuhatsune01
What set did you took?:3 and 6
How much time did you take on that set?: in the 3rd set it takes 2 minutes and at the 6th set almost 8 minutes
What program did you use?:Photoshop
Result: (gfx in spoiler pls):

Posted 10/21/10
Username: Xx_Angel17
What set did you took?: Set #1
How much time did you take on that set?: only 15 mins
What program did you use?: Gimp
Result: (gfx in spoiler pls):
Posted 10/21/10 , edited 10/21/10


it's actually not that bad. but you might want to a texture or too
so it doesn't look tooo plain. and while your rendering don't
be afraid to zoom in to like 400% and touch the actual black lines.
Posted 10/21/10 , edited 10/21/10

oh okay. ^^
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Posted 10/21/10

okay, for the first three avis, they were good, problem is the second one is too bright
that it almost looks like its white. try darkening it a little but not too much.

as for the two banners, they're good. xD i liked the color effect
and the effectiveness of the textures you used. just improve
the text a lil bit more xD

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Posted 10/21/10


oh and next time look at the instructions more clearly,
it says make it into a "banner" but you made it a text header.
but its alright no worries xD
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Posted 10/22/10

sweetkawaii_princess wrote:


okay, for the first three avis, they were good, problem is the second one is too bright
that it almost looks like its white. try darkening it a little but not too much.

as for the two banners, they're good. xD i liked the color effect
and the effectiveness of the textures you used. just improve
the text a lil bit more xD



Thanks for the compliment and also for the tip !!
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