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Posted 10/22/10 , edited 10/22/10
Pain and Misery

My brain hurts. My heart hurts. Everything hurts. This physical and emotional pain dreadfully ran through me, but mostly through my veins that lead to my now hollow heart. I didn’t ask for this at all. I could hear him mimic me as I lied frozen on the ground in my own pool of misery that sought light. At first, I sublimely didn’t know what was coming. A mixed feeling of pain, misery, confusion, and sadness was indebted into me, into my heart. This mayhem was slowly driving me crazy. I thought I was irrevocably in love with him, but that feeling’s incoherent now. My foolishness scarred me for life.

If I were able rename myself, it would turn out to be the word pain. I sought out for anyone that would understand how I’m feeling, only someone with the same scar that I have. To relinquish and purify my sins, for my very soul is marked with idiocy and nothing but darkness.

I walked blankly and squinted my eyes as I saw light. I reached out toward it, but knew I didn’t deserve such glory. But still, my selfishness overcame me and I soon realized that I was chasing after the light that was running away. Its luminosity was escaping my pale hands that were eagerly trying to grab at it. But it stopped, causing me to stop and wonder, why did it stop? That’s until my gaze landed on a sad looking boy. He stared blankly at the ground but turned his beautiful face at me. Towards me. I silently gasped and gazed in awe as his eyes connected with mine, locked on each other just like lips meeting each other.

He walked up to me as I stood frozen, not knowing what to do. He stopped exactly right in front of me and caressed my face as I closed my eyes and put my hand on his. His pure hand on my tainted face felt different somehow, there was sorrow in it.

I opened my eyes and half smiled, “I’m Pain.”

He smiled back with such pure intentions, but somewhat impure, “I’m Misery.”

The End
Posted 10/22/10 , edited 10/22/10
/points at -READ THIS LIST KOOCHAN OR YOU DIIIIEEEEEEEEEEE- thats not actually a LIST.. Owo cuz that would be WEIRD.

owo
I SHALL READ THIS STORY SOOOON 8D
/throws list into air : D
Posted 10/22/10 , edited 10/22/10
...you wroteee thiiis!? owo
I LIKE. ♥
DARKKKKKK. IS ZOOOCHAN OKAAAY!? XD LOL
But no seriously, it makes me want to finish my darkish/somewhat depressing story(s)...owo

Hes Misery, SHES Pain, SO I MUST BE HAPPPINESSSSSSS : D
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LAWL. of course i wrote this!!!
although i feel like my writing has improved somewhat >w<
i wrote thee first paragraph during school cuz it was an assignment to write a short story with thee vocabulary words that we learned XDD
AND YESHHH, IM ALRIGHT. except that...i wrote this when i was in painn (ask choco-chan)
LOL. nooo, u must be RANDOMNESSSSSSS xD
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OH AND THIS IS MY FIRST STORY THAT I EVER FINISHED!!!!!!!
YAYYYYYYYYYYYYYY!!! :DD
Posted 10/23/10
lol OOOOOOO O:
AND IT ISSSSSSSS?! OWO
i coulda swore you had other short stories you finished... o3o
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Posted 10/28/10 , edited 10/28/10
YESH IT IS! LAWL XDD
NONONONO, this is my first short story X33
ur confusing meh with Choco-chan's short stories.... =w=
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