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Posted 10/24/10
One of the provinces of the empire
Posted 1/6/12
Han left the Empire and ended up passing here.
Posted 1/7/12

The_One_Death wrote:

Han left the Empire and ended up passing here.


Jonathan mumbled up his words
Posted 1/7/12


Han sees Jonathan as a suspicious character and avoids making any contact.
Posted 1/7/12

The_One_Death wrote:



Han sees Jonathan as a suspicious character and avoids making any contact.


HE passe sby han. "hello, you seem lost"
Posted 1/7/12


"Sorry, but i'm not lost."
Han doesn't stop and continues walking.
Posted 1/7/12
He looked at how he walkd then saw the crest of the empire from his clothing. He smirked then marks started to attach on and in Han's body. His body started to freeze, from the nervous system to the cardiacs and the veins
Posted 1/7/12


(There is no possible way i would have Han run away from the castle and still strut about with the Empire's emblem visibly flashing.)
Posted 1/7/12

The_One_Death wrote:



(There is no possible way i would have Han run away from the castle and still strut about with the Empire's emblem visibly flashing.)


(the trade mark of the clothing is what he saw, he knows knows the emblem. Since the trade mark of the clothing has the emblem on it even though lets say its at the back of his neck. He would instantly notice it, besides he can smell the blood of a royal from kilometers away)
Posted 1/7/12


(Nothing of that sort was stated in your character. And another thing. Your character's ability is completely godmoding. It's unfair.)
Posted 1/7/12



(you win the first part of the debate, but actually even though the marks in the body is in there, you can still defeat him, jit will only weaken the opponent
Posted 1/7/12


(It might be a good ability in an anime or manga. But you yourself have stated that "he places dance marks all over your body, you're body will dance". That's completely controlling another character.)
Posted 1/7/12
(not literally dancE -=___=-)
Posted 1/7/12


(As the only example given you have already stated complete and utter control over another character.)
Posted 1/7/12

The_One_Death wrote:



(As the only example given you have already stated complete and utter control over another character.)


(fine i'll edit that later, his marks will just weaken the person)
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