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Posted 11/30/10
Your Katana

Name: Dei no Jikoku (Time of Day)

Reiatsu Color: White

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Shikai

Command to Release: Purify all hearts

Abilities you Gained: Increased defense and offense, heightened senses, better reaction time

Powers you Gained: Healing & barriers

Type: Kido

Additional Info: Time of Day is a healing type zanpakuto that appears in the form of a ring blade and hovers around its wielder. It follows the wielder wherever it goes and does not get in the way. The ring blade is always glowing a certain colour that depends on what time of day it is. In the morning it is a soft orange, in the afternoon it is a bright yellow, and at night it is a soft white. These colours symbolize what time of day it is and determines what its abilities are.


Moves:
Expansion: The ring blade is able to expand to a diameter of 100ft in the blink of an eye enabling it to attack enemies from far away

Shred: The ring blade starts to spin at high speeds and is able to saw its way through even the strongest metals.

Revolving shield: The ring blade expands to a diameter of a little more than the wielder’s height. It then revolves around her so quickly that it looks as if she is trapped inside a silver sphere. Touching this “sphere” will result in that limb being shredded and she can still move around while the ring blade is revolving around her, using this shield as an attack.

Morning Glow: A healing type technique. The ring blade glows a soft orange and it is able to shoot out orange ropes made of kido to attach on to allies. These ropes cannot be cut and they feed the ally with energy and make them immune to all status effects such as poison and loss of senses. She can also use this on herself.

Afternoon Sun: A healing type technique. The ring blade glows a bright yellow and she is able to form a yellow barrier around herself. Anyone inside the barrier is slowly healed and its size depends on the diameter of the ring blade.

Midnight Moon: A healing type technique. The ring blade glows black and is able to shoot out white ropes made of kido to attach onto allies or enemies. These ropes put whoever they attach on to sleep and stop all wounds from progressing any further. She can also use this technique on herself but she does not fall asleep. If on an enemy, she can finish them off while they are asleep.

Bankai

Name: Tsukisenu Dei no Jikoku (Endless Time of Day)

Command to Release: The day is yours

Abilities you Gained: Same as shikai but even better

Powers you gained: Same as shikai but stronger

Additional Info: The ring blade still looks the same and still floats around the wielder but there are 6 more rings floating behind the wielder. These 6 ring blades can be controlled by the wielder but they do not have any abilities besides expanding. The seventh ring, which is floating around the wielder, glows white and has all the abilities of the three phases of the day but uses them in a different way. Instead of kido ropes attaching to allies like in shikai, the main ring is able to create animals made entirely from kido and those animals will have the ability depending on its colour. The larger the animal is the stronger its effects. The main ring is also unable to cut physical things however it can cut reiatsu allowing it to cut things such as kido spells and another’s reiatsu. Someone who has gotten their reiatsu cut by this blade too much will pass out and possibly go into a comatose state.


Moves:
All the moves from shikai

Morning Animals: Orange animals that go towards allies and into their bodies to reenergize them and cure them of any status effects.

Afternoon Animals: Bright yellow animals that are capable of creating barriers around themselves and healing anyone inside.

Night Animals: Pure black animals that put anyone they attach onto to sleep.

Healing World: She throws the seventh ring up into the air and it will begin to expand to a diameter of 5km. After a short period of charging it will release down a huge blast that affects everyone under the ring. The blast instantly heals all allies and transfers those wounds over to the enemies that were caught in the blast. Only works when the sun is out.

Moon’s Judgment: Similar to healing world but instead the blast undoes all releases of enemies and does not allow them to be released as long as her bankai is still active. All allies caught in the blast have their wounds stop progressing and an increase in speed, strength, and stamina.

Drawbacks // Weaknesses (Required)

Shikai :
-Certain techniques can only be used during certain times of day
-Barrier slowly drains the user's reiatsu the longer it is used
-Cannot attack while inside a barrier

Bankai :
-Can only do a huge blast in bankai once every two days
-Healing World and Moon’s Judgement have a charging period of two posts
-Cannot heal detached limbs however she can stop the limbs from bleeding.
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Posted 12/22/10 , edited 12/22/10
Requirements~

a) Name: Xero
b) Command to Release Rise Arashi (storm)
c) Powers you gained in Shikai: able to sense things before they happen & speed
d) Powers you gained in Bankai: appearance changed and gets a full suit of armor plus wings & control of Wind
e) Physical Manifestation of Zanpakouto

Your Katana

Name : Arashi (storm)

Reiatsu Color : Black w/Green Outline

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Shikai

Command to Release : Rise Arashi (storm)

Abilities you Gained : Faster reaction Time & Clairvoyancy (able to see things before they happen)

Powers you Gained : Wind Manipulation

Type : Wind

Moves :
Wind Fang - Launchs a wave of visable wind at the opponent and it appears as a fang
Sonic Strike - Moves as fast as the wind and strikes his opponent from any direction
Wind Sphere - a sphere of wind appears around the user protecting him
Pulse - Launchs a burst of wind at the opponent and pushes them back then the user appears behind the opponent and strikes from behind

Additional Info :

Bankai

Name : Arashi no o ( Storm King)

Command to Release : Kakusei Arashi no o ( Arise Storm King)

Abilities you Gained : A fully suit of armor and wings & shikai abilities

Powers you gained : Wind & Time Manipulation

Moves :
Time Stop - Stops time for a brief period of time and user does one strike and resumes time
Wind's Time Speed - User moves as fast as light and strikes the opponent 10 times
Memory's Of The Past - Traps the opponent in a sphere of time and makes him relieve his most precious memory and turns into the worst ever

Additional Info :

Drawbacks // Weaknesses (Required)

Shikai : When the user uses the winds fang to many times , then wounds will apear on the user

Bankai : if the user is trapped in his own memory of the past then it will be hard to get out
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Posted 12/23/10 , edited 12/27/10
Name :Sadako

Reiatsu Color :Black w/ purple outline

Image in Spoiler (Image of Katana not your Zanpakouto) :


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(I had to go with the chibi version because the real Sadako would scare the crap outta people)

Shikai

Command to Release : The sacrificial souls are here,now lend me your power!

Abilities you Gained : Invisibility as well as speed,almost like a ghost

Powers you Gained :Control over the element Death aka Necromancy.(No I can't kill anyone)

Type :Death

Moves :
Revive:The user is able to revive people as skeletons and become the user's slave.They don't have a physical body.
Afterimage:The user is able to substitute itself with an afterimage.
Invisible Blade:The user is able to turn its Zanpaktou as well as himself invisible.
Hands of Death:The user must stab his Zanpaktou,specifically Sadako into the ground to be able to use this move.Once that is done,the user can summon hands that will appear from the ground and restrict the opponent
Deathly Field:The user must spin a 360 in the air and a disk will be formed in midair.Once done,this disk will protect the user from any attack.Any attack that touches this disk will lose 25% of its power.

Additional Info :None

Bankai

Name :The Reaper

Command to Release : A worthy soul is in the field,now we must crush them!

Abilities you Gained :Power to summon ghosts as well as the giant Grim Reaper

Powers you gained :The user can control ghosts and a giant Grim Reaper.(Like captain number 7)

Moves :
Massacre:The user will summon ghosts that reach number as high as 20.

Additional Info :None

Drawbacks // Weaknesses (Required)

Shikai :The hilt of the katana when using shikai will be on fire.As all moves must be used while holding the Katana,the user must bear with the burning hilt

Bankai :The user must sign a 666 mark on the ground before summoning the Giant Grim Reaper.The size of the Grim Reaper will be determined by the area of the 666 mark takes.
Posted 12/23/10 , edited 12/27/10
My Zanpakutō

Name : Hageshii Onchou (Violent Rhythm)

Reiatsu Color : Red

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Shikai

Command to Release : Shoot to Thrill.

Abilities you Gained :


Powers you Gained :
1) Enhanced Senses
2) Immense Speed & Agility
3) Anger-Induced Physical Augmentation
4) Energized Punches
5) Telekinesis

Type : Unclassified

Moves :


Additional Info : In its Shikai state, the Zanpakutō does not change in appearance at all, retaining its katana form.

Bankai

Name : Junsei Akumu (Perfect Nightmare)

Command to Release : Play to Kill.

Abilities you Gained :


Powers you gained :
1) Vast Spiritual Power
2) Immense Endurance
3) Immense Durability
4) Immense Strength
5) Powers gained in Shikai are carried forward.

Moves :


Additional Info : In its Bankai, Junsei Akumu separates into a thousand slender, tiny blade fragments, which phases into the ground, as though it were a pool of water. Energy ripples expand out, turning the surrounding area dark, and within seconds, two rows of a thousand giant blades rise up from the ground. Those thousand swords then scatter and create countless flying blades. No one knows the exact number of blades generated.

Drawbacks // Weaknesses (Required)

Shikai :
1) Still only a sword.

Bankai :
1) Entirely mentally controlled.
2) The release can be negated before it completes, by wrapping the Zanpakutō before it separates.
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Posted 12/27/10

rkanubis wrote:

My Zanpakutō

Name : Hageshii Onchou (Violent Rhythm)

Reiatsu Color : Red

Image in Spoiler (Image of Katana not your Zanpakouto) :


Image of Physical Manifestation in Spoiler :


Shikai

Command to Release : Shoot to Thrill.

Abilities you Gained :


Powers you Gained :
1) High-Speed Regeneration
2) Enhanced Speed

Type : Unclassified

Moves :


Additional Info : In its Shikai state, the Zanpakutō does not change in appearance at all, retaining its katana form.

Bankai

Name : Junsei Akumu (Perfect Nightmare)

Command to Release : Play to Kill.

Abilities you Gained :


Powers you gained :
1) Enhanced Spiritual Power
2) Enhanced Endurance
3) Enhanced Durability
4) Enhanced Strength

Moves :


Additional Info : In its Bankai, Junsei Akumu separates into a thousand slender, tiny blade fragments, which phases into the ground, as though it were a pool of water. Energy ripples expand out, turning the surrounding area dark, and within seconds, two rows of a thousand giant blades rise up from the ground. Those thousand swords then scatter and create countless flying blades. No one knows the exact number of blades generated.

Drawbacks // Weaknesses (Required)

Shikai :
1) Still only a sword.

Bankai :
1) Entirely mentally controlled.
2) The release can be negated before it completes, by wrapping the Zanpakutō before it separates.


All sounds good, though the "High-Speed Regeneration" would sound a lot like an Arrancar, or Espada, and would make your Character nearly invinsible in battles since it can just regenerate itself after an injury. Wow your Bankai reminded me a lot about Senbonzakura Kageyoshi xDDD (Which isn't bad) and was very descriptive ^^. For your Drawbacks, where it says "Entirely Mentally Controlled", that means it puts a lot of strain in your body, seeing how many moves you have and how complicated, advanced they seem to be.
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KisameHoshigaki wrote:

Name :Sadako

Reiatsu Color :Black w/ purple outline

Image in Spoiler (Image of Katana not your Zanpakouto) :


Image of Physical Manifestation in Spoiler :

(I had to go with the chibi version because the real Sadako would scare the crap outta people)

Shikai

Command to Release : The sacrificial souls are here,now lend me your power!

Abilities you Gained : Invisibility as well as speed,almost like a ghost

Powers you Gained :Control over the element Death aka Necromancy.(No I can't kill anyone)

Type :Death

Moves :
Revive:The user is able to revive a random human and turn them into their slaves.
Afterimage:The user is able to substitute itself with an afterimage.
Invisible Blade:The user is able to turn its Zanpaktou as well as himself invisible.
Hands of Death:The user must stab his Zanpaktou,specifically Sadako into the ground to be able to use this move.Once that is done,the user can summon hands that will appear from the ground and restrict the opponent [Mod : How long? Is it forever?]
Deathly Field:The user must spin a 360 in the air and a disk will be formed in midair.Once done,this disk will protect the user from any attack.Any attack that touches this disk will lose 25% of its power.

Additional Info :None

Bankai

Name :The Reaper

Command to Release : A worthy soul is in the field,now we must crush them!

Abilities you Gained :Power to summon ghosts as well as the giant Grim Reaper

Powers you gained :The user can control ghosts and a giant Grim Reaper.(Like captain number 7)

Moves :
Massacre:The user will summon ghosts that reach number as high as 20.

Additional Info :None

Drawbacks // Weaknesses (Required)

Shikai :The hilt of the katana when using shikai will be on fire.As all moves must be used while holding the Katana,the user must bear with the burning hilt

Bankai :The user must sign a 666 mark on the ground before summoning the Giant Grim Reaper


The fact that you can revive people and turn them to your slaves is almost God-like. and the drawback for your bankai, even if you write 666 in the ground before summoning the Giant Grim Reaper, wat effect does that cause on you? Be more descriptive of that. Other than the ones i mentioned, every thing else seems fine. Please change what i've highlighted in red by editing your post above. Incredibly sorry for the late check-up on your zanpakuto.
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Posted 12/27/10

Sky-King wrote:

Requirements~

a) Name: Xero
b) Command to Release Rise Arashi (storm)
c) Powers you gained in Shikai: able to sense things before they happen & speed
d) Powers you gained in Bankai: appearance changed and gets a full suit of armor plus wings & control of Wind
e) Physical Manifestation of Zanpakouto

Your Katana

Name : Arashi (storm)

Reiatsu Color : Black w/Green Outline

Image in Spoiler (Image of Katana not your Zanpakouto) :


Image of Physical Manifestation in Spoiler :


Shikai

Command to Release : Rise Arashi (storm)

Abilities you Gained : Faster reaction Time & Clairvoyancy (able to see things before they happen)

Powers you Gained : Wind Manipulation

Type : Wind

Moves :
Wind Fang - Launchs a wave of visable wind at the opponent and it appears as a fang
Sonic Strike - Moves as fast as the wind and strikes his opponent from any direction
Wind Sphere - a sphere of wind appears around the user protecting him
Pulse - Launchs a burst of wind at the opponent and pushes them back then the user appears behind the opponent and strikes from behind

Additional Info :

Bankai

Name : Arashi no o ( Storm King)

Command to Release : Kakusei Arashi no o ( Arise Storm King)

Abilities you Gained : A fully suit of armor and wings & shikai abilities

Powers you gained : Wind & Time Manipulation

Moves :
Time Stop - Stops time for a brief period of time and user does one strike and resumes time
Wind's Time Speed - User moves as fast as light and strikes the opponent 10 times
Memory's Of The Past - Traps the opponent in a sphere of time and makes him relieve his most precious memory and turns into the worst ever

Additional Info :

Drawbacks // Weaknesses (Required)

Shikai : When the user uses the winds fang to many times , then wounds will apear on the user

Bankai : if the user is trapped in his own memory of the past then it will be hard to get out


In your bankai, the manipulation of time is okay as long as its limited. If you can stop time, then you can freeze your opponents movements without them realizing it, and you can kill them in a blow which is God-like. I'd recommend your bankai to be Wind and Thunder manipulation since it gives you more chances of more moves, attacks, etc but its not my place to say that. Please change all that's in red. Other than what's in red, everything's fine ^^ and sorry for the late check-up on your zanpakuto
Posted 12/27/10


I could remove the High-Speed Regeneration but i've made a slight change in terms of an additional weakness for the Shikai. If you still want me to remove it, i will make some changes again. In regards to the drawbacks. No, that's not what i meant. I placed it there so that i would not look untouchable in Bankai. Refer to the new Shikai weakness and you'll understand if you didn't at first.
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Your Bankai's good, though for your Shikai, i meant that if you can use High-Speed Regeneration, your character would be nearly invinsible in battle, since it can heal all physical wounds dealt by the opponent on your body.
Posted 12/27/10


I've edited. Please have a look.
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its good. approved
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Posted 12/27/10 , edited 12/27/10
Your Katana

Name : dae shoo hanae (angel wings)

Reiatsu Color : (Choose one in the Spoiler Below) Light blue && white

Image in Spoiler (Image of Katana not your Zanpakouto) :


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Shikai:

Command to Release : To ba sala de ra haru (wings spread) ---- (changes into a harp)

Abilities you Gained : speed increases

Powers you Gained : can heal quickly&weather manipulation ( wind, storm, rain, snow, ice, lightning)

Type : Ancient/Kidou

Moves : Bond, first stage - The snow freezes the opponent
Infliction, second stage- Acid Snow falls on opponent
Punishment, final stage- Lightning stucks the opponent
Yin to ba sa (wing of life)- Heals the target

Additional Info : it changes into a harp

Bankai


Name : nae mu lama dae shoo hanae (goddes wings)

Command to Release :nae mu lama dae shoo hanae karash haru ( goddess wings crashes from heaven)

Abilities you Gained : whole knew clothes

able to read thoughts, enhance speeed, wings, healing, really strong

Powers you gained : weather manipulation (mostly wind)
Moves : Hay Ka (transformation)- Transform into huge white peacock, when it opens it tails it snows and heals the surrounding
Wind reistu hit- The fan is surrounded white reistu and i wack it
Storm Of Light- i fan using the fan and a huge tornado surrounding lightning and attacks the opponent
Swords of the Fan- I exspand the fan and 6 swords appear made of Snow, rain, lightning, wind, storm, ice and attacks the opponent

Additional Info : it changes into a HUGE fan

Drawbacks // Weaknesses (Required)

Shikai : when i heal it takes alot out of me,

Bankai : the fan is heavy and when i hit a wide spot is opened, when i revive i either faint or very tierd

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Your Katana

Name : dae shoo hanae (angel wings)

Reiatsu Color : (Choose one in the Spoiler Below) Light blue && white

Image in Spoiler (Image of Katana not your Zanpakouto) :


Image of Physical Manifestation in Spoiler :


Shikai:

Command to Release : To ba sala de ra haru (wings spread) ---- (changes into a harp)

Abilities you Gained : speed increases

Powers you Gained : can heal quickly&weather manipulation ( wind, storm, rain, snow, ice, lightning)

Type : Ancient/Kidou

Moves : Bond, first stage - The snow freezes the opponent
Infliction, second stage- Acid Snow falls on opponent
Punishment, final stage- Lightning stucks the opponent
Yin to ba sa (wing of life)- Heals the target

Additional Info : it changes into a harp

Bankai


Name : nae mu lama dae shoo hanae (goddes wings)

Command to Release :nae mu lama dae shoo hanae karash haru ( goddess wings crashes from heaven)

Abilities you Gained : whole knew clothes

able to read thoughts, enhance speeed, wings, healing, really strong

Powers you gained : weather manipulation (mostly wind)
Moves : Hay Ka (transformation)- Transform into huge white peacock, when it opens it tails it snows and heals the surrounding
Wind reistu hit- The fan is surrounded white reistu and i wack it
Storm Of Light- i fan using the fan and a huge tornado surrounding lightning and attacks the opponent
Swords of the Fan- I exspand the fan and 6 swords appear made of Snow, rain, lightning, wind, storm, ice and attacks the opponent
Revive- the target gets hovered into the sky and a light glows on the target and the target is revived

Additional Info : it changes into a HUGE fan

Drawbacks // Weaknesses (Required)

Shikai : when i heal it takes alot out of me,

Bankai : the fan is heavy and when i hit a wide spot is opened, when i revive i either faint or very tierd



plz change wats in red. the fact that you can revive some one is god-like
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Posted 12/27/10


changed ^^
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approved!
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