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Posted 12/27/10

FadedLife wrote:


KisameHoshigaki wrote:

Name :Sadako

Reiatsu Color :Black w/ purple outline

Image in Spoiler (Image of Katana not your Zanpakouto) :


Image of Physical Manifestation in Spoiler :

(I had to go with the chibi version because the real Sadako would scare the crap outta people)

Shikai

Command to Release : The sacrificial souls are here,now lend me your power!

Abilities you Gained : Invisibility as well as speed,almost like a ghost

Powers you Gained :Control over the element Death aka Necromancy.(No I can't kill anyone)

Type :Death

Moves :
Revive:The user is able to revive a random human and turn them into their slaves.
Afterimage:The user is able to substitute itself with an afterimage.
Invisible Blade:The user is able to turn its Zanpaktou as well as himself invisible.
Hands of Death:The user must stab his Zanpaktou,specifically Sadako into the ground to be able to use this move.Once that is done,the user can summon hands that will appear from the ground and restrict the opponent [Mod : How long? Is it forever?]
Deathly Field:The user must spin a 360 in the air and a disk will be formed in midair.Once done,this disk will protect the user from any attack.Any attack that touches this disk will lose 25% of its power.

Additional Info :None

Bankai

Name :The Reaper

Command to Release : A worthy soul is in the field,now we must crush them!

Abilities you Gained :Power to summon ghosts as well as the giant Grim Reaper

Powers you gained :The user can control ghosts and a giant Grim Reaper.(Like captain number 7)

Moves :
Massacre:The user will summon ghosts that reach number as high as 20.

Additional Info :None

Drawbacks // Weaknesses (Required)

Shikai :The hilt of the katana when using shikai will be on fire.As all moves must be used while holding the Katana,the user must bear with the burning hilt

Bankai :The user must sign a 666 mark on the ground before summoning the Giant Grim Reaper


The fact that you can revive people and turn them to your slaves is almost God-like. and the drawback for your bankai, even if you write 666 in the ground before summoning the Giant Grim Reaper, wat effect does that cause on you? Be more descriptive of that. Other than the ones i mentioned, every thing else seems fine. Please change what i've highlighted in red by editing your post above. Incredibly sorry for the late check-up on your zanpakuto.


1)I'm sorry,I meant reviving people as skeletons.They don't have a physical body.
2)I'm sorry again,I meant to write that the size of my Grim Reaper will be how large the area of my 666 takes.So the bigger the 666 on the ground is,the bigger my grim reaper is.Writing down Giant 666s may take a long time and thus the drawback
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Posted 12/27/10

KisameHoshigaki wrote:


FadedLife wrote:


KisameHoshigaki wrote:

Name :Sadako

Reiatsu Color :Black w/ purple outline

Image in Spoiler (Image of Katana not your Zanpakouto) :


Image of Physical Manifestation in Spoiler :

(I had to go with the chibi version because the real Sadako would scare the crap outta people)

Shikai

Command to Release : The sacrificial souls are here,now lend me your power!

Abilities you Gained : Invisibility as well as speed,almost like a ghost

Powers you Gained :Control over the element Death aka Necromancy.(No I can't kill anyone)

Type :Death

Moves :
Revive:The user is able to revive a random human and turn them into their slaves.
Afterimage:The user is able to substitute itself with an afterimage.
Invisible Blade:The user is able to turn its Zanpaktou as well as himself invisible.
Hands of Death:The user must stab his Zanpaktou,specifically Sadako into the ground to be able to use this move.Once that is done,the user can summon hands that will appear from the ground and restrict the opponent [Mod : How long? Is it forever?]
Deathly Field:The user must spin a 360 in the air and a disk will be formed in midair.Once done,this disk will protect the user from any attack.Any attack that touches this disk will lose 25% of its power.

Additional Info :None

Bankai

Name :The Reaper

Command to Release : A worthy soul is in the field,now we must crush them!

Abilities you Gained :Power to summon ghosts as well as the giant Grim Reaper

Powers you gained :The user can control ghosts and a giant Grim Reaper.(Like captain number 7)

Moves :
Massacre:The user will summon ghosts that reach number as high as 20.

Additional Info :None

Drawbacks // Weaknesses (Required)

Shikai :The hilt of the katana when using shikai will be on fire.As all moves must be used while holding the Katana,the user must bear with the burning hilt

Bankai :The user must sign a 666 mark on the ground before summoning the Giant Grim Reaper


The fact that you can revive people and turn them to your slaves is almost God-like. and the drawback for your bankai, even if you write 666 in the ground before summoning the Giant Grim Reaper, wat effect does that cause on you? Be more descriptive of that. Other than the ones i mentioned, every thing else seems fine. Please change what i've highlighted in red by editing your post above. Incredibly sorry for the late check-up on your zanpakuto.


1)I'm sorry,I meant reviving people as skeletons.They don't have a physical body.
2)I'm sorry again,I meant to write that the size of my Grim Reaper will be how large the area of my 666 takes.So the bigger the 666 on the ground is,the bigger my grim reaper is.Writing down Giant 666s may take a long time and thus the drawback


ALRIGHT plz edit that in ur first post
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Posted 12/28/10

KisameHoshigaki wrote:

Name :Sadako

Reiatsu Color :Black w/ purple outline

Image in Spoiler (Image of Katana not your Zanpakouto) :


Image of Physical Manifestation in Spoiler :

(I had to go with the chibi version because the real Sadako would scare the crap outta people)

Shikai

Command to Release : The sacrificial souls are here,now lend me your power!

Abilities you Gained : Invisibility as well as speed,almost like a ghost

Powers you Gained :Control over the element Death aka Necromancy.(No I can't kill anyone)

Type :Death

Moves :
Revive:The user is able to revive people as skeletons and become the user's slave.They don't have a physical body.
Afterimage:The user is able to substitute itself with an afterimage.
Invisible Blade:The user is able to turn its Zanpaktou as well as himself invisible.
Hands of Death:The user must stab his Zanpaktou,specifically Sadako into the ground to be able to use this move.Once that is done,the user can summon hands that will appear from the ground and restrict the opponent
Deathly Field:The user must spin a 360 in the air and a disk will be formed in midair.Once done,this disk will protect the user from any attack.Any attack that touches this disk will lose 25% of its power.

Additional Info :None

Bankai

Name :The Reaper

Command to Release : A worthy soul is in the field,now we must crush them!

Abilities you Gained :Power to summon ghosts as well as the giant Grim Reaper

Powers you gained :The user can control ghosts and a giant Grim Reaper.(Like captain number 7)

Moves :
Massacre:The user will summon ghosts that reach number as high as 20.

Additional Info :None

Drawbacks // Weaknesses (Required)

Shikai :The hilt of the katana when using shikai will be on fire.As all moves must be used while holding the Katana,the user must bear with the burning hilt

Bankai :The user must sign a 666 mark on the ground before summoning the Giant Grim Reaper.The size of the Grim Reaper will be determined by the area of the 666 mark takes.


This is Approved! xD
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Posted 12/29/10 , edited 1/2/11
Your Katana

Name : Fuyu no Arashi (Winter’s Tempest)

Reiatsu Color : White

Image in Spoiler (Image of Katana not your Zanpakouto) :


Image of Physical Manifestation in Spoiler :


Shikai

Command to Release :
Kōgekisuru (attack)

Abilities you Gained : the ability to control and manipulate the surrounding air.

Powers you Gained : higher defence capability.

Type : Air

Moves :
Mirage – causes the air surrounding the wielder to shimmer, making it hard to discern their position and to attack them. Can be dispelled with water.
Disrupt – where small and sharp bursts of wind that can break up a kido spell or any focused attack. Harmless to shinigami due to the small amount of reiatsu involved, but fatal to normal hollows.
Break – forms a wall of pressured air that protects the wielder from both physical and reiatsu-based attacks.

Additional Info : Shikai is more suitable for close combat and defence.

Bankai

Name : Fuyu no Arashi – Yuki ga futte (Winter’s Tempest – Falling Snow)

Command to Release : (just call out her name)

Abilities you Gained : the ability to control increases to the point where even air pressure can be changed. Also able to manipulate larger masses of air over a wider range.

Powers you gained : renders whatever she wants immobile for a certain period of time, making her opponent the equivalent of a sitting duck, and faster attacking speed.

Moves :
Destroy – a sphere made of spinning air surrounds the wielder, and whatever comes into contact with the sphere will disintegrate. Kind of works like a sanding machine. This gives the wielder time to prepare her next attack.
Arashi – probably the strongest and most original of all the attacks, this attack utilizes all the surrounding air to form a tempest like environment that would blow and tug at the opponent, causing them to use up a lot of energy just to remain standing upright. The user is unaffected At the same time, the temperature will drop drastically and drain even more of the opponent’s strength. Too much time spent in exposure to this environment will cause the opponent to pass out or even die. This attack can be used on multiple opponents at once.
Fuku – this is a personalized attack, where I use the abnormal amount of control I have on my power enables me to change the air pressure around the opponent, rendering them immobile. By controlling the amount of pressure exerted, the opponent will either simply be crushed by the pressure or just be immobilized. To fight this would mean fighting against the atmosphere itself. The only way out of this would be to heat up the air enough to lighten the pressure so that the opponent is no longer immobilized. However, while the opponent is immobile, i can simply kill them outright, and they won't be able to resist, since the wielder is impartial to the change in air pressure.

Additional Info : the blade turns black and the hilt turns white. Bankai is more suitable for attacking and long-range attacks.


Drawbacks // Weaknesses (Required)

Shikai : the amount of reiatsu she is able to use is extremely limited, only around 15% of her maximum power, thus if she meets anyone with a higher reiatsu level than her, then her attacks would be rendered quite useless. That’s why she generally prefers close combat as compared to using her attacks.

Bankai : manipulating the air pressure around her causes damage to herself as well. Despite having an abnormal amount of control on her power, overuse often leads to coughing up blood or extreme dizziness.
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Requirements~

a) Name: Xero
b) Command to Release Rise Arashi (storm)
c) Powers you gained in Shikai: able to sense things before they happen & speed
d) Powers you gained in Bankai: appearance changed and gets a full suit of armor plus wings & control of Wind
e) Physical Manifestation of Zanpakouto

Your Katana

Name : Arashi (storm)

Reiatsu Color : Black w/Green Outline

Image in Spoiler (Image of Katana not your Zanpakouto) :


Image of Physical Manifestation in Spoiler :


Shikai

Command to Release : Rise Arashi (storm)

Abilities you Gained : Faster reaction Time & Clairvoyancy (able to see things before they happen)

Powers you Gained : Wind Manipulation

Type : Wind

Moves :
Wind Fang - Launchs a wave of visable wind at the opponent and it appears as a fang
Sonic Strike - Moves as fast as the wind and strikes his opponent from any direction
Wind Sphere - a sphere of wind appears around the user protecting him
Pulse - Launchs a burst of wind at the opponent and pushes them back then the user appears behind the opponent and strikes from behind

Additional Info :

Bankai

Name : Arashi no o ( Storm King)

Command to Release : Kakusei Arashi no o ( Arise Storm King)

Abilities you Gained : A fully suit of armor and wings & shikai abilities

Powers you gained : Wind & Time Manipulation

Moves :
Altering Time - Allows the user to reverse time and any deadly blow that was dealt , is no longer there (usable only 3 times per fight if its one on one, the more unfair advantage it is against the user the most usable times is it)
Wind's Time Speed - User moves as fast as light and strikes the opponent 10 times
Memory's Of The Past - Traps the opponent in a sphere of time and makes him relieve his most precious memory and turns into the worst ever

Additional Info :

Drawbacks // Weaknesses (Required)

Shikai : When the user uses the winds fang to many times , then wounds will apear on the user

Bankai : if the user is trapped in his own memory of the past then it will be hard to get out




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Posted 1/1/11

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Requirements~

a) Name: Xero
b) Command to Release Rise Arashi (storm)
c) Powers you gained in Shikai: able to sense things before they happen & speed
d) Powers you gained in Bankai: appearance changed and gets a full suit of armor plus wings & control of Wind
e) Physical Manifestation of Zanpakouto

Your Katana

Name : Arashi (storm)

Reiatsu Color : Black w/Green Outline

Image in Spoiler (Image of Katana not your Zanpakouto) :


Image of Physical Manifestation in Spoiler :


Shikai

Command to Release : Rise Arashi (storm)

Abilities you Gained : Faster reaction Time & Clairvoyancy (able to see things before they happen)

Powers you Gained : Wind Manipulation

Type : Wind

Moves :
Wind Fang - Launchs a wave of visable wind at the opponent and it appears as a fang
Sonic Strike - Moves as fast as the wind and strikes his opponent from any direction
Wind Sphere - a sphere of wind appears around the user protecting him
Pulse - Launchs a burst of wind at the opponent and pushes them back then the user appears behind the opponent and strikes from behind

Additional Info :

Bankai

Name : Arashi no o ( Storm King)

Command to Release : Kakusei Arashi no o ( Arise Storm King)

Abilities you Gained : A fully suit of armor and wings & shikai abilities

Powers you gained : Wind & Time Manipulation

Moves :
Altering Time - Allows the user to reverse time and any deadly blow that was dealt , is no longer there(usable only 3 times per fight if its one on one, the more unfair advantage it is against the user the most usable times is it)
Wind's Time Speed - User moves as fast as light and strikes the opponent 10 times
Memory's Of The Past - Traps the opponent in a sphere of time and makes him relieve his most precious memory and turns into the worst ever

Additional Info :

Drawbacks // Weaknesses (Required)

Shikai : When the user uses the winds fang to many times , then wounds will apear on the user

Bankai : if the user is trapped in his own memory of the past then it will be hard to get out






I think everything's good except for some of the moves that involve "Time" . When one stops "Time" they can do anything to their opponent during that period of time. They can even kill the opponent without the opponent realizing efforlessly. So please change it, or edit it
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Requirements~

a) Name: Xero
b) Command to Release Rise Arashi (storm)
c) Powers you gained in Shikai: able to sense things before they happen & speed
d) Powers you gained in Bankai: appearance changed and gets a full suit of armor plus wings & control of Wind
e) Physical Manifestation of Zanpakouto

Your Katana

Name : Arashi (storm)

Reiatsu Color : Black w/Green Outline

Image in Spoiler (Image of Katana not your Zanpakouto) :


Image of Physical Manifestation in Spoiler :


Shikai

Command to Release : Rise Arashi (storm)

Abilities you Gained : Faster reaction Time & Clairvoyancy (able to see things before they happen)

Powers you Gained : Wind Manipulation

Type : Wind

Moves :
Wind Fang - Launchs a wave of visable wind at the opponent and it appears as a fang
Sonic Strike - Moves as fast as the wind and strikes his opponent from any direction
Wind Sphere - a sphere of wind appears around the user protecting him
Pulse - Launchs a burst of wind at the opponent and pushes them back then the user appears behind the opponent and strikes from behind

Additional Info :

Bankai

Name : Arashi no o ( Storm King)

Command to Release : Kakusei Arashi no o ( Arise Storm King)

Abilities you Gained : A fully suit of armor and wings & shikai abilities

Powers you gained : Wind & Thunder Manipulation

Moves :
Calm Before the Storm: stops all wind from flowing
Birth Of The Storm: Restarts all wind and launches a powerful thunderous tornado at the opponent
Wind's Sphere: barrier forms around the user protecting him/her
Storm's Trap: Traps the opponent in a big tornado and the user conceals himself and attacks at high speeds from any direction he/she desires
Chidori: launches a thunderbolt at the opponent
Speed of Light: (Passive) allows the user to move at high speeds
Storm's Fang: a more powerful verion of winds fang but a tornado follows behind the fang

Additional Info :

Drawbacks // Weaknesses (Required)

Shikai : When the user uses the winds fang to many times , then wounds will apear on the user

Bankai : When Chidori is used there is also a major drawback on the user that only allows him to use it 4 times per fight




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Posted 1/4/11

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Requirements~

a) Name: Xero
b) Command to Release Rise Arashi (storm)
c) Powers you gained in Shikai: able to sense things before they happen & speed
d) Powers you gained in Bankai: appearance changed and gets a full suit of armor plus wings & control of Wind
e) Physical Manifestation of Zanpakouto

Your Katana

Name : Arashi (storm)

Reiatsu Color : Black w/Green Outline

Image in Spoiler (Image of Katana not your Zanpakouto) :


Image of Physical Manifestation in Spoiler :


Shikai

Command to Release : Rise Arashi (storm)

Abilities you Gained : Faster reaction Time & Clairvoyancy (able to see things before they happen)

Powers you Gained : Wind Manipulation

Type : Wind

Moves :
Wind Fang - Launchs a wave of visable wind at the opponent and it appears as a fang
Sonic Strike - Moves as fast as the wind and strikes his opponent from any direction
Wind Sphere - a sphere of wind appears around the user protecting him
Pulse - Launchs a burst of wind at the opponent and pushes them back then the user appears behind the opponent and strikes from behind

Additional Info :

Bankai

Name : Arashi no o ( Storm King)

Command to Release : Kakusei Arashi no o ( Arise Storm King)

Abilities you Gained : A fully suit of armor and wings & shikai abilities

Powers you gained : Wind & Thunder Manipulation

Moves :
Calm Before the Storm: stops all wind from flowing
Birth Of The Storm: Restarts all wind and launches a powerful thunderous tornado at the opponent
Wind's Sphere: barrier forms around the user protecting him/her
Storm's Trap: Traps the opponent in a big tornado and the user conceals himself and attacks at high speeds from any direction he/she desires
Chidori: launches a thunderbolt at the opponent
Speed of Light: (Passive) allows the user to move at high speeds
Storm's Fang: a more powerful verion of winds fang but a tornado follows behind the fang

Additional Info :

Drawbacks // Weaknesses (Required)

Shikai : When the user uses the winds fang to many times , then wounds will apear on the user

Bankai : When Chidori is used there is also a major drawback on the user that only allows him to use it 4 times per fight






What about your bankai?
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What do u mean?
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What do u mean?


Sorry nvm. I'm working on a few things at once so got confused. Sorry. I'll approve your captain application in just a sec.
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lol its no prob , nd alright =)
Posted 1/7/11

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ATTENTION!!!

PLEASE REFRAIN FROM POSTING UNRELATED COMMENTS!


Requirements~

a) Name
b) Command to Release
c) Powers you gained in Shikai
d) Powers you gained in Bankai - You may NOT use your Bankai until you're a VC or Captain
e) Physical Manifestation of Zanpakouto

Your Katana

Name :

Reiatsu Color : (Choose one in the Spoiler Below)

Image in Spoiler (Image of Katana not your Zanpakouto) :

Image of Physical Manifestation in Spoiler :

Shikai

Command to Release :

Abilities you Gained :

Powers you Gained :

Type :

Moves :

Additional Info :

Bankai

Name :

Command to Release :

Abilities you Gained :

Powers you gained :

Moves :

Additional Info :

Drawbacks // Weaknesses (Required)

Shikai :

Bankai :



List of Reiatsu Colors :



Name Hana
b) Command to Release: Red
c) Powers you gained in Shikai : getting to know my friends better and talking to them.
d) Powers you gained in Bankai -: Okay
e) Physical Manifestation of Zanpakouto: Looking cute .
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A Zanpakuto's a Sword that releases immense power residing in ur shinigami powers.. if you want you can look at the posts above for examples^^
Posted 1/7/11

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A Zanpakuto's a Sword that releases immense power residing in ur shinigami powers.. if you want you can look at the posts above for examples^^

will fix

Posted 1/7/11

Hana176 wrote:


Hai333444 wrote:

ATTENTION!!!

PLEASE REFRAIN FROM POSTING UNRELATED COMMENTS!


Requirements~

a) Name
b) Command to Release
c) Powers you gained in Shikai
d) Powers you gained in Bankai - You may NOT use your Bankai until you're a VC or Captain
e) Physical Manifestation of Zanpakouto

Your Katana

Name :

Reiatsu Color : (Choose one in the Spoiler Below)

Image in Spoiler (Image of Katana not your Zanpakouto) :

Image of Physical Manifestation in Spoiler :

Shikai

Command to Release :

Abilities you Gained :

Powers you Gained :

Type :

Moves :

Additional Info :

Bankai

Name :

Command to Release :

Abilities you Gained :

Powers you gained :

Moves :

Additional Info :

Drawbacks // Weaknesses (Required)

Shikai :

Bankai :



List of Reiatsu Colors :



Name Hana
b) Command to Release: Red
c) Powers you gained in Shikai : Sward
d) Powers you gained in Bankai -: Okay
e) Physical Manifestation of Zanpakouto: knowing how to use it right.


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