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Posted 1/8/11
I thought it was really nice at first. I thought it was quite similar to beezlebub. but some how the back chapters weren't really that nice. The ending was weird. I thought it would be longer. And the reverse resolve thing felt like it's hitman reborn. With the fire thing going on. And at first I find Nene and the main guy to be cute together but in the end it gets annoying. and wth is with Nene's breast getting bigger and bigger?! And those seem-like-ecchi scenes. zzz.
Posted 1/8/11
I liked the introduction chapter, then for some fukkin reason there was another Introduction ch, right after it, that was totally different! and the story continued on the basis of intro#2 so i stopped reading.

writers shouldnt throw a story around like that if they want someone to read it.

If what i first read was only a pilot chapter, then they should have indicated it.
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Posted 1/8/11

sheebi wrote:

I liked the introduction chapter, then for some fukkin reason there was another Introduction ch, right after it, that was totally different! and the story continued on the basis of intro#2 so i stopped reading.

writers shouldnt throw a story around like that if they want someone to read it.

If what i first read was only a pilot chapter, then they should have indicated it.


It's called a oneshot. The author makes a story that only lasts 1 chapter. If ppl like it, author may make a series.
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