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Show off your writing skills and write your ass off. you can write about anything as long as its longer than a paragraph or longer than a sentence.
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I awoke with a jolt.
"Where am I?"
I looked around. A single candle was lit and everything else was dark. I got up slowly regaining my balance. I then took the candle and walked till I hit a wall. Literally I hit it and fell backwards. I quickly picked up the candle that had fallen out of my hand. Then I realized. This was made of metal. The entire room. I started to walk the other way. Sweat dropped from my brow. Wait... It was cold in here... How could i had been sweaty? I touched my forehead. A thick liquid was coming out of my head. I looked at my fingers. They were green. Not dark red or blue like normal blood. Then a light came in. It was a door! I could get out!
"Alice! You are awake!"
"Who are you?" I answered back in surprise
"Your friend Redd."
"What's this?" I showed him my palm with the green slim on it.
"Oh that's medicine." I looked behind him. It was an underground cave!
"What's that?" I pointed behind him.
"Oh yeah. Welcome to HQ!" Then all my memories filled back in.

That's all for now! I might make a part 2!
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Prologue.

There is an old German saying "Der Dämon lebt für die Nacht" wich means "the demon lives for the night." This saying is very wrong in alot of ways. First of all demons don't care if its day or night, they will attack or trick anyone or anything that amuses them. Second, a demon can be born during the day, there power coming from the sun. And last but not least, a demon of this world cannot live for some were never born but created, some can never live becuase they have either no soul or mind. The first demon ever recorded, seen or drawn, The first demon ever created or born, was Man. Man was a simple creation, pure, sinless, and even intelligent enough to stay pure. They say that the first man who has sinned loved the feeling of killing and destroying, but that man was not the first demon.The first demon was born by a human female, twins actually, one pure and sinless, and the other pure evil, evil incarnate.
This story starts in the year 600,000 B.C. in a small village inhabited by the first human race, A clan called the Feuer Nacht clan. The twins were treated differently, The good twin, named Abbadon, was treated like a saint for his flawless skin and great acts of kindness. The other twin however was treated badly, he was spit upon and people would talk in disgust behind his back, this twins name was Xerxes.
Xerxes was a great troublemaker, he played the worst pranks that can kill people. He would make a trap that would ddrop boulders on people and dig holes filled with scorpions and snakes. The main thing that seperated Xerxes from his brother was his skin, a snow white, stone hard, jagged skin that looks like armor and cannot be cut or bruised. Xerxes was hated by everyone in the village except for a little blind girl.
Xerxes was about to play a prank on some unsuspected family when a small blind girl walked up to him. Xerxes tried to push the girl and scare her away but the girl didn't even look scared, she would just stand back up and walk closer to Xerxes. Xerxes was shocked when the blind girl touched his cold skin and smiled. After that smile Xerxes felt warm and stopped playing pranks on the villagers everytime he was hanging out with the blind girl named Emily.
This friendship didn't last long. The villagers did not want the two to grow up and have more devilish children like Xerxes. Without Xerxes knowledge the villagers exiled Emily to a cursed sanctuary full of the bodies of the eternally damned, forever to walk the earth. Xerxes eventually found out and when he did it was hell to pay. He tore the spines out of the warriors, crushed the womens skulls and even mutilated the children. The sight was unbearable and cruel, the village was destroyed by a child only 4 feet tall and as skinny as a spider monkey. Abbadon was nowhere to be found, no one knows what happened to him or where he has gone, just that he was the brother of Xerxes.
In the year 40,000 B.C. Xerxes took the title "The Endless" wich was given to him becuase of his tremendous power and endless hate. A Mayian civilization worshipped Xerxes without any knowledge of his past. They gave him sacrifices and offerings. Xerxes killed children and ate men's spines, he was never challenged and if he was he would just have one of his warlords kill the challenger. Xerxes had four warlords, Oonala, Hex, Cosvex, and The first warlord Genevier. These four warlords stood by Xerxes side and cuased mass choas, they would of destroyed the world if it was not for the Hell guard in the year 750 A.D.
The Hellguard consisted of four races, a demon, an angel, a human, and a beast. These four hellguard was very powerful, they wore bloodred armor and each had a skull of their own race on their shoulder. Each wears a special talisman that amplifies there powers. These four hellguard had to stop Xerxes and his warlords so each Hellguard sealed away each warlord in a special kind of box that matched each of their personalities, Seduction, Anger, brutality, and Mutilation. Once the Hell guard sealed them away they all went after Xerxes.
The battle was fierce, The great demon knocked the Hell guard around like a soccer ball. The Hellguard had no choice but to seal him away like they did with the warlords. They all used their medallions and sealed Xerxes away in a box made from bones and skin from the people he has killed. This is what it say's in history books, but there was no recorded findings of the civilization except for the slab of rock that shows the history. The history of a young boy that became a great demon, his first love who was banished, and his hatred and path of carnage. In the present world, everyone has forgotten about these demons, these hellguard, and forgot how terrible it was until today.
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((OO!!! AAAHHH!!!! I like it!))
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((OO!!! AAAHHH!!!! I like it!))


((I got chapter 1 too, need to put it on))
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Prologue: 13 years ago.

“Ms. Mills does not know this but the child she is giving birth to is going to be very dangerous! We must take it for testing as soon as it is born!”
“Listen to me! If we want real results lets wait till it discovers it’s power till we start testing on it. Or else you are going to kill another one.”
“Ongoi you...you... Your right I should have just listened to you thank you boss”
“Mr. Max you must never doubt my words. I will not fail. You know my father was an officer before he died. And the birth of this child is a crime. As soon as it leaves for Wessy we attack.”
“What about the other two? I mean we can handle the parents but what do we with the older twin brothers?”
“ It does not matter kill them all if you have to.”
“Right!”
“Oh and stay close to the family. I’m also sending him out in undercover. Well, what are you waiting for? Get out of here!”
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Chapter 1

The 26th century, the most advanced technology has opened up new ways to fight and build nations. A new building project, on the island of Knossos in greece, is starting to build a new city, a industrial city. Near this building site is the kingdom of Crete, a kingdom full of warriors and soldiers. The 26th century has been known as the age where humans started to go back to using swords and close comat weapons with the discoveries of a mineral found on Mars, stronger than steel and impenetrable. This mineral is called unzerbrechlich, or unbreakable in english, it can not be formed into bullets since they haven't figured out how but they can press and morph this mineral into weapons like swords and axes. Crete was the first kingdom to start using these weapons, they fight like the legendary spartans, they live by the code of their kingdom, Die fighting or don't die at all.
The prince of Crete is known to be the best warrior on Knossos, this prince's name is Acheron. Acheron loved to fight and nothing else, except for a certain childhood friend that he known ever since he was born. Acheron loved this girl and would do anything for her, her name was Penelope. They both loved each other and every body in the kingdom knew about it, they were waiting for the prince to marry and become king.
Acheron walked through the royal garden, the morning sunlight hitting the dew drops on the roses. He watched the butterfly's float gracefully in the air and land, land on the shoulder of his love, Penelope.
"Penelope, your up awfully early, you would usually sleep in like all the other overseer apprentices?"
Penelope looked at Acheron with a sad face "I did not sleep well, every time I closed my eyes I saw death....I could not make it out but I knew that it was very dreadful." Penelope face was pale, her hands were shaky "Penelope" Acheron held her hands gently "Your shaking, please get some rest, you need your strength......do you remember what today is"
Penelope smiled, she began to radiate with joy and blushed "Yes.....I am so excited Acheron....we can finall..." A guard rushes in "Sir the queen requests your presence." Acheron stands up and walks toward the guard and toward the door, he turns to her and whispers "Dont forget." Acheron and the guard goes inside, leaving Penelope smiling and excited.
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Acheron entered the throne room, the queen sitting next to an empty throne "Hello mother." The queen stood up and walked toward Acheron "My dear son, I have grave news" she grabs his arm and leads him to a window "I fear that our outer posts have been destroyed by an unknown force."

not done, anybody can add to it if they want
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(It's the Mars people! they want the metal back!)
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((SORRY IT's REALLY LONG!!!))
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Thankies! I like yours too!

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This is the endless war. No one is free from it, everyone is drawn into it and the fights are intense and hardcore. The land will shake, cities will crumble and lives will shatter.
You must fight to survive, to live, to eat, or to get rid of the anger that forms inside you. Your tranquill life will never be the same, the same routine of everyday life will change day by day, forcing you to change your tactics and think outside the box. If you think that a simple fight or murder or rape was bad, this is worst. The people who fight will as soldiers of the endless war cannot leave, the demonic hatred that fills the hearts of the people on this planet will grow until it burst out of your chest with vengeance. I say to you now, as a fellow warrior, as a fellow soldier, as a fellow human, will you live to fight this war to the very end....Or will you die like the rest of them. That choice is yours in this endless war.
The great demon The Endless is to blaim. He is the root of fear and disgust, the root of all hatred in your heart, the feeling of wanting someone dead. He is your deepest, sickest desire to gut somebody who has hurt you even before you know about it, he will kill anybody he hates, and he hates everybody. He is the starter of the war, of the pain, and of the misery that this world is scarred with. He is the one destroyer of love, dreams and hope.He will gut and devour a new born baby without any hesitation, he loves to here kids scream in pain as he slowly sticks his claws in the stomach and twists slowly. He takes the most interest in girls, he loves to hear the loud pitch scream, the agonizing features on there faces and he especially loves there eye's. This is the great demon who started the war, he is the endless pain that people feel in their hearts, he is the endless fear of dying, he is the Endless.
Then there are the four warlords, eache awakened when The endless awakened. Each of the warlords are more cruel for each one people meet. Each has they're own name but the Endless remembers them by these words: Anger, Mutilation, Brutality, and Seduction. Three of the warlords a guy but the last one is a female demon very close to The Endless and loves the same things as the endless but takes pleasure in playing with the females more, hence the name Seduction.
The great sorrow, home of the entity Pain, a creature born from the pain and misery of every human who has died. Pain will remember the most painful events in a humans life and will feel that humans pain. Pain is the only creature full of sin without even comitting any act of crime or sinful acts, the painful sin's of every human that he is composed of is mostly sinful souls of criminals who has done many things they regret. This is the pain and misery of the world put into one creature, This is Pain.
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completely random short story i made up for my writing class.

Sammy was driving around in his car. He then started to speed up then he heard the cops behind him so he had to stop. The cops then
gave him a ticket for speeding. Sammy got so stressed that he went home to get a bath. He walked in the bathroom and saw something in the bathtub. As he got closer he seen what is was. It was a muffin and some goons. The muffin approched the goons with an evil look in his
blueberry eyes. Sammy watched confused as the goons backed away as the muffin approched but they wasn't fast enough. The muffin over
took the goons and then ate them. Sammy backed away shocked. Then he looked back in the tub and the muffin was gone. Sammy then heard something behing him, so he turned around slowly. It was the muffin and had the same look in his eyes as he came closer to Sammy. Sammy ran into his room. Just as he opened the door to his room the muffin ate him.
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The glass heart

Why do you not shine
In the darkness ?
but only when the light beams upon you
do you glow with delight?
why is it you wish to be raised so high
when you could easily fall
and shatter?
Is it that the pieces
will always be
put together again?
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