Genie of the Sacred Mountain. Chapter 1: A Wishful Thinking
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You chan, Genie of the Sacred Mountain.
Chapter 1: A Wishful Thinking


The sunlight streaming through the holes of dilapidated, old little shack; brought-in the warm and somewhat comforting feeling. While the chirpy song of the finches, blends-in with the gentle whispers of the bubbling brook close by, however, it was the aroma, of a familiar dish that awakens his senses.

Shin slowly opened his eyes, and then, quickly, shuts them again when the sunlight reflected from the mirror shone directly into his face. Instinctively he pulled both of his arms snugly resting from under the thick blanket to block the blinding sunlight.

Meanwhile, the delightful aroma of simmering miso soup did not only awaken his senses; but also made his stomach growl with anticipation of a warm meal. “Hara.. hetta….” Shin uttered in an almost dying tone of voice.

Still unable to move: the creaky floor board revealed that someone was walking towards him slowly… step by step. Unable to remove his arms from blocking the sunlight, Shin waited patiently and hope for the best.

It did not take very long, before he felt a warm and gentle touch on top of his arms that was covering his face from the sunlight. As if, he was being reassured; that everything will be alright.

Shin turned his face away from the gleaming bright light. Afterwards, he slowly turned his sight towards the person who gently touched him, however, when he finally managed to open his eyes.

Shin’s frightened scream reverberates within the entire mountain, creating an echo; that caused the resting birds and crawling wildlife within the vicinity to scurry away. “Aaaaaaah….!” Upon, seeing his naked copy; leaning on top of him. His self preservation instinct tells him to run away, and yet, every inch of his entire being seemed to have been frozen out of fear. He closed his eyes and waited for the worst.

Few minutes later….

Nothing happened… Shin cautiously opened an eye to peek, before he finally opened the other eye… while bracing himself….

Still, nothing happened….

After calming himself down, Shin gathered all of his strength.

“Who…are…you..?” he asked with a trembling voice.

“Who are you…?” his naked copycat replied back with an innocent smile.


“This is just great! I’m abducted by a dimwit alien!*sigh* Thank goodness, this copycat… is as harmless as I am… ” Shin looked away and breathes a sigh of relief.

“Let’s try it again… Who are you?” with his finger pointing on his copycat’s bare chest.

“I am….You?” his copycat replied this time, while looking directly into his eyes.

“I can see that! I mean, YOU….” Shin clarifies, as he, sit-up and face his copycat, close enough, as if he was looking at his reflection in the mirror.

“I am YOU”, his copycat replied confidently with a smile… this time.

Before Shin could say another word… his copycat leaned over his face, put his arms around him, and then, grant him a deep passionate kiss. Shocked beyond belief, Shin struggled to free himself from his tight embrace, however, feeling his warm bare skin against his, while their lips were entwined in a perpetual bliss… it was hopeless.



Few minutes later…. You, let go... of Shin’s lips… but not his tight embrace.

Blushing, and still breathing heavily, “What was that for…?” Shin asked with annoyed tone of voice.

“That would be… what I call… “Bonding”, You replied cheerfully, while still, licking his own lips as if… he just had the yummiest dessert.

“Bonding…?”

“Hey! Your voice improved”, Shin exclaimed, while, You happily nod his head with a sweet smile on his dial.

“Now, that we can understand each other would you mind…, LET GO OF ME!!”

With a teasing smile, You hesitantly loosened his tight embrace… While, Shin could not hide his embarrassment for kissing another guy, even if, he was… technically…, kissing himself.

Looking at You’s tight and tanned naked physique; Shin couldn’t help himself from blushing… “I think, I finally to understood, Narcissus’ feelings… when he… fell in love with himself…. “, He thought… *sigh*

“Is there, by any chance you could find something to cover-up a little?”

“If that’s what you wish…” You replied.

While You were still searching for any left behind clothes, among the drawers and cabinet, Shin couldn’t take his eyes of him…

“If you don’t mind me asking, You… What exactly are you? Before you become me… ”

“Aha! I found one…!” You exclaimed when he found a pair of yukata and fundoshi in one of the drawers.

As soon as he put them on, You turned around toward Shin’s direction and then, smiled.

“How do I look now?” he asked.

However, before Shin could actually reply, You jumped on him again and gave him another passionate kiss… “I, just… love this new body!” He happily said.

“For crying out loud, why on Earth do you have to keep on kissing me?” Shin complained.

“I was just… trying to share my happiness… don’t you like it?” You replied, with a sad puppy look on his face.

With You’s face still few inches from his. Shin couldn’t bear his sad look and gave-in, “Fine It’s okay… But, only when we are alone… okay?” Shin said, with a reassuring smile.

Like a little child, You smiled innocently, before he leaned on Shin’s chest… peacefully.

“Oh, before I forget”, Shin said, “What were you, before you became me..?” He asked…again.

“Before I became you…. I was a bear.” You casually replied.

“WHAT….! Did you… just said…., BEAR!?” surprised, Shin pulled-up You’s hair to confirm, what he just said… However, You just nodded… with apologetic looking smile.

“Are you, the bear who chased me all over the forest…?” Shin asked with a straight face.

“Yes and No, I wasn’t chasing you… I was trying to tell you that you are running towards a cliff…! Thank goodness, you bump into a pine tree and knock yourself out, before it’s too late… Man, you should have seen the look on you face…. Ha ha ha ha!”

“Yeah, that’s very funny!” Shin sarcastically replied. “If I was that pathetic… Why did you copy me?” he asked while looking at You curiously.

“Because…, you wished for it, while you were sitting on my shrine.”

“Your shrine… The big boulder in the middle of the footpath was a wishing shrine…?” Shin asked with a surprised expression.

“Yup! You sat on my shrine and wished that you could live with yourself… Mann, that was the most interesting wish I’ve ever heard, so… Here I am… at your service…Master.”

You raised his head and lovingly gaze upon his Masters face.

“Hey, You… Is there by any chance I could, cancel my wish?” Shin asked with a serious tone of voice.

“Of course; unfortunately, it’s too late… The bonding kiss…, already sealed our contract… Sorry… Do you dislike me this much?” You asked.

You rise-up and sit beside Shin, “If one of us dies, then, the seal will be broken and our contract nullified”, You explained with a sorrowful expression.

Shin rise up and sit closely behind You, tenderly, he leaned on You’s shoulder and whispered into his ear, “I’m sorry… I didn’t mean to hurt your feelings…., My You chan.”

“By the way, I’m starving…, and please…, call me Shin--otherwise, I will call you Genie… ”

To be continued….
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Author's note:

This fantasy romance is my original story. It is my attemp to make my friends smile and blush at first... However, just like every striving writer... I became addicted to those beautiful smiles and blushing cheeks.

I hope you don't mind, if I share it with you... My Friends. *Smiles*

Posted 3/9/11
Ahaha, I laugh at his narcissistic comment of living with himself. Hey, I really liked it!!! I knew it was going to be great to agree with you about distributing your yaoi and fantasy ideas! I really enjoyed reading the "moments"; they were different from the others that I have read. But really! Awesome! I never really thought that you were going to make him kiss him! Truthfully, if he were the hott anime guy on the bottom of the displayed picture, that would be a turn on! LOL
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Thank you very much, LoveNews... I'm so happy you liked it. *Blushing smiles*

You are a very brave and independent young lady; to say the least. Most people would just read it and not leave any comment on---to protect their own reputation. I don't blame them... I just hope they have some fun. That's all...

But not you... You are one of a kind! *Smiles*

Your comment means a lot to me, LoveNews.... They are my guiding light, so, I could be able to improve the story plot bit by bit. "Pure Love Relationship," that was developing between Shin and You chan will go even deeper than a kiss.... He he he

Welcome to my world of "Fantasy Romance". *Smiles*
Posted 3/10/11

IzumiKoji wrote:

Thank you very much, LoveNews... I'm so happy you liked it. *Blushing smiles*

You are a very brave and independent young lady; to say the least. Most people would just read it and not leave any comment on---to protect their own reputation. I don't blame them... I just hope they have some fun. That's all...

But not you... You are one of a kind! *Smiles*

Your comment means a lot to me, LoveNews.... They are my guiding light, so, I could be able to improve the story plot bit by bit. "Pure Love Relationship," that was developing between Shin and You chan will go even deeper than a kiss.... He he he

Welcome to my world of "Fantasy Romance". *Smiles*


Holy crap! Deeper than a kiss?! Man, that's just going to be freaking HOT and AWESOME! MORE than, please? Oh, really? I feel worth it somehow! Thanks for saying that to me; I feel heaven.
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Dearest LoveNews,

Yep! Deeper than passionate kisses!! And a lot of them too... in all sort of conditions, positions and venues. *Smiles*

Posted 3/19/11
OMG! That's awesome! GO FOR IT and then notify me, alright buddy?! I can't WAIT! Ahahahahaha!
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Dearest Jenny,

You are a fascinating little miss, aren't you? *Giggles* I will... definitely!

Unfortunately, I'm a little tied up at the moment... School stuff. I'll try to post the next one tomorrow... Just for you. *Smiles*

Posted 3/20/11
Ah, thank you very much for everything! YOU ROCK!
I almost thought that that was a photo of Zabuza from Naruto because of his...I don't know; they just look sort of similar... :D
Moreover I will wait for it! *blushing*
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