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Posted 1/13/08
as I sit her
in my rosegarden
writing my poems
in my blood
alone
whit my face hiden
in the shadow
trying to find
what Im doing wrong

every day
I make someone mad at me
every day
I make someone shout

I dont like the shouting
the only thing
I know
is they will soon
be happy agein
but
for how long

pepole asking
why do you write
those sad things
about death and blood
I just say
I whant to
and as soon
Im gone I know
you talk behind my back
you cant trick me
whit those smiles
and those words

but

ther you have your answear
thats why
I write those things
beacuse of pepole
like you

why do you allways point
at all my wrongs
whenerver I ask
"what do you think"
you point allways at
the wrongs

Its not that
I whana know
I want to know
what you think
of the work
the story
why dont you tell me that
and dont tell
me
about the wrongs I make
I know you dont have them
but you dont
need to take a littl
of the light inside me
away

My life
is complicaded
whit happiness and sadness
some times
I just whant to end it
run away
and never turn back
but I wont
then I would just run
away
from myself
wouldt I?

I will walk
trough this
cuse I know Im not
the only one
whit
My life
Posted 1/13/08
awesome poem once again very deep , ur poems always hold so much meaning and show so much reality I really like them X3
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Posted 1/13/08

kagura4 wrote:

awesome poem once again very deep , ur poems always hold so much meaning and show so much reality I really like them X3


Thanks
well this one is from my realety
but I like mostly to write about the realety as I say "the one who said that life is a walk on roses...well he forgot the thorns"

Posted 1/13/08

Yamira wrote:

Thanks
well this one is from my realety
but I like mostly to write about the realety as I say "the one who said that life is a walk on roses...well he forgot the thorns"



=D wow! awesome quote too, I love it XD, u really love poetry don't u X3
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Posted 1/13/08

kagura4 wrote:


Yamira wrote:

Thanks
well this one is from my realety
but I like mostly to write about the realety as I say "the one who said that life is a walk on roses...well he forgot the thorns"



=D wow! awesome quote too, I love it XD, u really love poetry don't u X3


Yes I love it
For me poetry is a way to tell your fellings even when they are complicaded
and mayby you can find out the answears when you write them....
Posted 1/13/08

kagur4 wrote:


=D wow! awesome quote too, I love it XD, u really love poetry don't u X3



Yamira wrote:

Yes I love it
For me poetry is a way to tell your fellings even when they are complicaded
and mayby you can find out the answears when you write them....


I believe that too
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Posted 1/13/08

kagura4 wrote:


Yamira wrote:


=D wow! awesome quote too, I love it XD, u really love poetry don't u X3


Yes I love it
For me poetry is a way to tell your fellings even when they are complicaded
and mayby you can find out the answears when you write them....

I believe that too


I thinks all who write belive that
I only write, and Im allways thinking this one is just bad Image well well
thats whit all my poems
Posted 1/13/08

Yamira wrote:


kagura4 wrote:


Yamira wrote:


=D wow! awesome quote too, I love it XD, u really love poetry don't u X3


Yes I love it
For me poetry is a way to tell your fellings even when they are complicaded
and mayby you can find out the answears when you write them....

I believe that too


I thinks all who write belive that
I only write, and Im allways thinking this one is just bad Image well well
thats whit all my poems


I c
Posted 1/13/08
Life got some good sides too, right^^ you do smile and you do like pink, i know it!! stop hiding it
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doriigura wrote:

Life got some good sides too, right^^ you do smile and you do like pink, i know it!! stop hiding it


why dont you just go under a rock and stay ther!
yes ther is good sites to and I smile but I cant be sad all the time then I lose the meaning of life
Posted 1/14/08
whats the meaning XD ????
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