Post Reply *sighs* I guess CR will do for this fanfic) Broken stars
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Posted 3/30/11
"I wish things could have been different! I hate it!" Ashfur cried out with disbelief as Squirrelflight twined tails with Brambleclaw, but remained unheard.
"WHY? Why doesn't....she love me?" He was Broken, so hurt he wanted to go to starclan right now, toforget about her. He couldn't. No matter how hard he tried, he couldn't escape the agony.
"Squirrelflight, I've done so much more for you....I won't give up. Never," he wiped away stray tears with his paw.
"Never, he won't win! NEVEr"

Firestar awoke with a start, sweat rolling along his fur. He'd dreamed of Spottedleaf, she has a somber look in her eyes, and yet here next to him happily snore sandstorm, kithood enemy now his mate. WAs this right?
"Sandstorm, i'm going to get some air,"
"okay, don't use the brambles,"
"what? nevermind," he walked out of the den, only to see Ash fur wailing in agony not too far off from the camp. Why?
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Broken Stars: The Empty Abyss called 'heart'
- Sunlight lit the camp bright and warm, prey beginning to show from it's burrow. Early spring had cold nights, but warm days, this was perfect. It would be perfect if SHE were with him to enjoy it. Ashfur set his glance across the clearing, Squirrelflight curling up with Brambleclaw. The sight made him want to vomit up bile.
"Ashfur? you okay?" Spiderleg and Brightheart sat beside him, worried expressions upon them.
"Not really," he admitted silently, a bitter glance casting towards the two mooning cats.
"There ou are brightheart! What's going on?" Cloudtail bound up wih great speed.
"Somethings troubling Ashfur cloudtail," Brightheart replied.
"what is it?"
"I don't think ou'd understand, i'll call you all when i'm ready to talk, if ou don't guess first,"A bitter glance once more cast itself towards the two lovey dovey cats.Hate filled his paws, and jealousy swelled.
"well okay, would you like to join our patrol?" cloudtail kindly asked. Ashfur thought for a moment, nodding.
"anything to get me away from camp," he dryly mewed.
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Ashfur didn't even bother to finish his prey, but what a shame it would be if it went to waste. The gre tom flicked it with his back paw by 'accident' and watched it cuff brambleclaw in the back ofthe head.
"hmph!" he snorted laughter, bounding out of the camp after the three others.

"What's goten into that cat?" Sandstorm mmbled.
"I don't know, he was yowling last night at the moon, I don't know of what,"
"Perhaps you should talk to him?" Sandstorm sggested.
firestar hid a no-derp face and nodded.
"Brilliant idea,"
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Spiderleg crept upon a thrush, pouncing it right in ashfur, morel ike his face, he barely caught it between his teeth, cracking its neck.
"woah, our really out of it, are you sure your okay Ashfur?" cloudtail wondered aloud.
"You can guess later, i'm sure you'll know the answer," he nearly growled,but it sounded more raspy.
"Well, we still caught it, let's bring more back to camp, We already patrolled. no problems with the clans as of currently, Squirrelflights kits must be hungry, especially that lionkit," Cloudtail laughed.
"He has more appetite than I do!" Both brightheart and him laughed, Ashfur tilting his head and padding off elsewhere.
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Posted 4/2/11
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"Firestar, the patrols are back, but wheres Ashfur?" Firestar looked up form his vole.
"I don't know, he's been acting strange lately,"the ginger pelted leader stood, stretching.
"Should we search for him?"
"No, if he doesn't return by tomorrow, then we search, he must be having rough times. He won't even go near brambleclaw or squirrelflight. mine as well leafpool, even if he has throns in his pelt!"
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Ashfur trot to a break in teh trees, early greenleaf plants sticking from the ground.
"I can't be around them right now, I won't head back to camp until their gone on patrol," he decided.
"I can't take the pain right now," He lie his head on his paws, and curl up, falling asleep in the cold night.
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"Firestar, Firestar?" It couldn't be sunrise already....
Firestar smelled the sweetest scent of plants, and immediately knew it was spottedleaf. The ginger tom stretched out, cold, icy air enveloping him.
"huh?"
"Hello Firestar," Spottedleafs mew rose with a purr.
"Hello spottedleaf, any news?"
"Yes, actually, beware of your clanmates, some of them will kill for secrecy,"
"who!?"
"I can not tell, But one cat of the clouds foggy pour will be demolished within the razor leaves by a squirrel at a pool,"
"what the starclan does that mean!?"
"I actually don't know either. Bluestar wanted me to tell you,"
"give her my thanks?" he mumbled.
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