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istandcorrected66 wrote:

Try us. I'm sure it'll send a shiver up my spine. (maybe) but you never know. You could be the next Stephen king! Just try it!


Chiyo jumps onto Mina's lap and curls up. "I wanna hear her story too!"
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I wil.....give you a whole box of pocky! If you tell one story.
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"Fine...Long ago, Chishiki academy was an all girls school. One day, a cheerleader was putting her clothes in her gym locker after the big game against Makabishi. The locker room was completely empty, because everyone was out celebrating the win...She was just about to leave when she heard the shower cut on. Curious, she approached the shower...Right when she got up to the shower curtain the water cut off.
'oh sorry, my bad.' She laughed.
No answer.
'They're probably just embarrassed or something' she thought to herself..."

*shrugs*
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Is......there more?
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istandcorrected66 wrote:

Is......there more?


"Yeah, is there?" Kiran tilts her head curiously.
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Sounds like a good beginning....but there should be more! I'm on the edge of my...*looks around* seat(?)
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(Just wanted to make sure it was good and so you guys new i was replying xD)

" So she grabbed her bag and headed towards the door to meet up with her teammates, who it smelled like were having a bonfire. Smoke could be smelled from the exit door. All of a sudden, she hears a breathing in her ear."
*The hall gets darker*
"She freezes.....and doesn't. move. She realizes that the breathing is actually a whisper. The shower cuts on as she listens intently. Her heart rate spikes as the girls voice gets louder and louder in her ear. As if someone was getting closer to her. She looks around the locker room, but no one. Panicking, she starts walking to the exit door. A ear-splitting yell fills the locker room and she drops her bags, and runs to the exit. Just as she gets to the door, it goes up in flames, forming a wall of red-hot fire. Smoke begins to fill the locker room and she darts towards the window..."

*Something scratches at the window behind us*
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*I yelp in surprise and look around hoping nobody noticed* that uh...musta been chiyo-sama
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Kiran stands up and looks at the window. "Tree branch, Chiyo-sama is on your lap, Mina-chan."
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" She's running to the window-but it doesn't get any closer! She's running but how come she can't get there?!"
*A classroom door handle begins to rattle*

" The air becomes thick with smoke and her throat burns, making her incapable of choking out any cry for help.
Not that it would be heard, everyone was gone celebrating. She leaps backwards when a face appears in the window, stumbling onto the ground...
and right into the shower.
Water falls on her, soaking her and chilling her to the bone. Suddenly, something wet but very solid bumps her in the back...
She ever so slowly looks over her shoulder..."
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Jaz_Yasunari wrote:



" She's running to the window-but it doesn't get any closer! She's running but how come she can't get there?!"
*A classroom door handle begins to rattle*

" The air becomes thick with smoke and her throat burns, making her incapable of choking out any cry for help.
Not that it would be heard, everyone was gone celebrating. She leaps backwards when a face appears in the window, stumbling onto the ground...
and right into the shower.
Water falls on her, soaking her and chilling her to the bone. Suddenly, something wet but very solid bumps her in the back...
She ever so slowly looks over her shoulder..."


Kiran looks at Miki, her eye with a little hint of surprise.
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"And that's where the story ends. It's been said that sometimes, when your standing in the locker room, a voice'll breathe in your ear. No one knows exactly what the voice says, they usually don't stay long enough to find out. Girls usually change in their dorms, so they can avoid the locker room. 'Don't be the cheerleader' is a saying some of the girls that've been going to the academy for a while'll say to each other when one of us is holding out on something. People think that the cheerleader had a deeper reason than putting her clothes in her locker. Some believe that she was avoiding someone and that that person was the face in the window..."

*fixes glasses*
Posted 4/7/11 , edited 4/8/11

Jaz_Yasunari wrote:


"And that's where the story ends. It's been said that sometimes, when your standing in the locker room, a voice'll breathe in your ear. No one knows exactly what the voice says, they usually don't stay long enough to find out. Girls usually change in their dorms, so they can avoid the locker room. 'Don't be the cheerleader' is a saying some of the girls that've been going to the academy for a while'll say to each other when one of us is holding out on something. People think that the cheerleader had a deeper reason than putting her clothes in her locker. Some believe that she was avoiding someone and that that person was the face in the window..."

*fixes glasses*


Kiran shivers at the thought of the story. "Scary. That was a good story, Miki-chan!"
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*Shadows flutter across the wall* "Either way..."
*My glasses glint and a dark cloud comes over my head as the moment intensifies*
....
" I'm not signing up for the cheering squad anytime soon."

(gawd that sucked -____- lawlz.)
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Jaz_Yasunari wrote:



*Shadows flutter across the wall* "Either way..."
*My glasses glint and a dark cloud comes over my head as the moment intensifies*
....
" I'm not signing up for the cheering squad anytime soon! hehe" *giggles*


Kiran giggles at Miki's statement. "I'm not either! I wanna tell a scary story."
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