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This is mainly for if you want to go into greater detail about your OC's history and such, explaining more about what lead to them being where they are now.
When I say I'm back...I should really...y'know...stay...
Vengeance's story (I will likely continuously add more to this for a while. I put it in spoilers because of its length):
When Vengeance joined the Karinosh, which was what his planets military was known as, he instantly shown great prowess and a potential for greatness. In three months alone he was recruited into the highest branch of the Karinosh. They were known as The Order of the Overseer. The code Farran was put in front of his name then, so in the duration of his time there he was known as 1st Lieutenant Farran Vengeance. He was then put in command of a squad consisting of only one other Farran, Farran Destiny. Destiny was like a sidekick to Vengeance, or a kiss-ass depending on how you look at it. There were three more members of his squad, Moriarty, a stealthy sniper, Volchzek, the squad demolition expert, and Ky, the squads medic. Vengeance, however, being a Farran was trained in all these skills as well as many others.
-My apologies but I feel the need to describe what a Farran is in the Illavooian culture. A Farran is a member of The Order of the Overseer who has shown great mental and physical prowess and is a Vruk (a member who's name consists of a human or azarathian word expressing an emotion/label/mindset and stuff like that). Farran are treated with the highest respect of all Illavooian culture other than the Moyek (leader, 99% of which have been from the D'Mona family) and the Overseer (handler of all military, trading and any other jobs involving other planets). But enough about that, let's get back to the story.
One day Vengeance received a message from the Overseer, whom never sent messages and missions to his men. He always sent his assistant, Sub-seer Farran Order, to do it. But this mission was different, and though Vengeance didn't know at the time, would have a bigger impact on him than any other mission. Anyways, let's get on with the story.
"A message has arrived for you, Master Vengeance," Vengeance's AI system, referred to by Illavooians as EIU, said in her usual robotic monotone. "from the Overseer. Code 7 priority procedure unit."
"Must be a protocol error." Vengeance said groggily, having just woken up and spending the entire night in his battle armor, "Code 7 is the highest priority mission except for a global crisis." He corrected her, "Wait...did you say it was from the Overseer...play it" he ordered.
A small silhouette illuminated on Vengeance's arm, "1st Lieutenant Farran Vengeance, commander of squad code 9-3-7-44-9-1-93. You have a mission. You are to head to Azarath immediately to secure a package. It must make it off-world at all costs. You will receive the package from the monks of Azarath for they are it's protectors. You will take your squad with you. End transmission." the message abruptly cut out.
"Azarath, huh? Haven't been there in a while. " he shrugged, "Best get moving.Squad 9-3-7-44-8-7-1-93, gear up, we got a mission to do." he said, activating his helmets speakers.
It took little time for the squad to prepare and meet in the hangar. The trip to Azarath, however, took two and a half hours. They all fell asleep on the way there except for Destiny, whom remained extra cautious and vigilante. They eventually reached Azarath and quickly made their way to the temple.
They were met by many of the monks upon entering. Vengeance stepped towards them in a heroic, dutiful manner, "We are here to secure your package, monks of Azarath." He stated in a businesslike tone.
One of the monks nodded, "This way" he said calmly, turning around and beginning to walk.
Vengeance began to follow and looked back at his squad, "Ky, stay back and watch the shuttle," he said as Ky rushed off the way they came from.
The monk led them to a large door and beckoned them to enter, "The package is in there. You may enter first."
Vengeance nodded and beckoned Moriarty to watch the doorway. He walked into the room casually, with the rest of his squad and the monk following. The room was empty except for a single person, a teenage looking girl wearing a blue cloak, "Where is the package?" He asked, turning to face the monk.
"What do you mean? She is right there." The monk motioned toward her.
"What? We were not informed that the package was an Azarathine girl" Vengeance said with a strange tone in his voice, "What is so special about her, anyways." Vengeance asked, looking at her curiously, she still hadn't noticed them.
"Her name is Raven" the monk said, he briefly explained the prophecy and what she was destined to do.
Destiny sighed, "In the end I guess destiny will be the universe's fall, then."
Vorchzek laughed quietly, "Kinda ironic hearing you say that, Des." he joked.
Vengeance hit his young squad member on the side of the head, "Show respect in this place, corporal." he said.
Vorchzek held his head in pain as Vengeance walked closer to Raven, whom still hadn't noticed them. The monk stepped in front of his path, "You must swear to protect her, Vengeance, only then will we let you transport her out of here."
Vengeance nodded, "I shall tell her my peoples' sacred oath of the guardian, then." he walked up behind her, "Raven." He began calmly.
Raven opened her from her meditation and glanced at him.
"My name is Vengeance. Would you mind if I meditated with you?" he asked, kneeling down beside her.
"No" she said calmly, "but I thought I was going to be taken off-world by the monks."
"I guess there was a change of plans, then." Vengeance replied, sitting down next to her then activating a jet-pack like device that kept him in the air directly beside her.
Raven shut her eyes and began to meditate. It didn't take Vengeance long to catch on to what to say and he joined her, "Azarath. Metrion. Zinthos." they chanted in unison.
After a few minutes of meditation Vengeance lowered himself to the ground slowly, landing on a knee, "In pain, I will heal you. In sickness I will cure you. In battle, I will join you. In death, I have failed you." Vengeance muttered, his suits eye sensors glowing bright blue for a moment.
Raven opened her eyes with surprise and lowered to her feet, "You just..."
Vengeance nodded calmly, standing up, "No harm shall befall you with me by your side, Raven. I am your guardian, from now till my death prevents protection." he said, putting his hand on her shoulder.
Vorchzek put his hand to his helmet, "Hey...hey Ven! Sorry to interupt your little moment but I'm getting nothing off of Ky's radio!" he called over from the entrance to the room.
Vengeance quickly rushed over, "Vorchzek, join Moriarty and secure the rest of the monks." he said as Vorchzek burst out the room, "Destiny, check on Ky, make sure he's alright."
"Of course, Lieutenant." Destiny answered as he charged off.
"EIU, stabilize battle rifle." Vengeance then said as his battle rifle, still appearing as a technologically enhanced battle axe as it always had before, appeared in his hands. He aimed the blunt end at the entrance to the room, holding the axe by the holes in the blade.
Vengeance sat there at the ready for what seemed like hours. Finally though, Destiny returned.
"Vengeance. Ky is dead." Destiny said, dropping his head sullenly.
"Have you received word from Vorchzek and Moriarty?" Vengeance asked, not even phased by Ky's sudden murder.
"Vorchzek barely got the message off. Moriarty betrayed us all." Destiny replied.
Vengeance lowered his battle rifle, "I...I don't believe it. A traitor...in MY team!?!" he roared, "UGH! Where is Vorchzek? We need to regroup! Then we can get Ra-"
Destiny suddenly cut him off, "Vorchzek is dead too, sir. I am sorry." he said sullenly.
Vengeance scowled under his helmet, "Alright, then it's just us! Let's move! We need to escort Raven off-world before he finds us!"
Vengeance, Destiny and Raven quickly left the room. Destiny was taking point.
As they ran, Vengeance heard something in a nearby room, "Destiny. Hold." he said, entering the room slowly. In the darkness he saw Vorchzek and Moriarty walking towards the door quickly with a small group of monks, "Vorchzek? Destiny said..."
Destiny aimed his battle rifle at the back of Vengeance's head, the glow signaling that it was about to fire.
"Commander, threat, 2 meters, six-o-clock." Vengeance's EIU said calmly.
Vengeance quickly spun around, knocking Destiny's battle rifle out of the way as it fired. Destiny quickly teleported away.
"The freak betrayed us all..." Vorchzek said quietly, "I don't believe it..."
When I say I'm back...I should really...y'know...stay...
(Well, this is my character's bio. I didn't mention anything really in her bio, except her powers and stuff.)
First of all, Wonder Sara is supposed to be addressed as "Sara" in her human form. In her human form, she leads the ordinary life of a normal pre-teen girl. She doesn't do much, and she is barely seen in this form. While in her Villain form, Wonder Sara causes plenty of destruction. Later in the role-play, I was planning for my character that Wonder Sara ends up being an alter ego or something. So "Sara" is free but Wonder Sara plans to destroy her, although it fails and "Sara" also has powers so she ends up destroying Wonder Sara. She later starts training her powers and stars planning to become a Titan, which failed. She never stopped believing and later( An approximation of 6 months later.) she finally got to join. By this time, she like maybe be around 14...I think. By spending a lot of time with mostly just the guys of the Titans, she falls in love with every one of them! (Yikes! Jk.) Just kidding, only one. But she can't have a relationship with him because she wants to keep her crush a secret for him. She'll only express love for him by saving/helping him in any way. Also she may act mean to him. Which will be very hard for anyone to tell who she likes because at times she would act mean to anyone she meets.
Sara's new personality also includes her being over-nice and kind to everyone.(Don't be afraid, it doesn't mean she's a pedo!)Anyway, she acts childish sometimes and can be mean too.
(More coming soon.)