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Posted 1/14/08
Ther is somthing
That every person have innside their heart
They hide it well
But they cant escape
Those cold hands that gripes your heart
What felling that is?
Its
Fear

Fear
What is it
That word....
Its hard to explain
But so easy to feel

Some say they never have feeled it
The cold grip
Of fear
But
It is ther
You cant run away from it
You will never make it
It is ther
Waiting
So dont say you dont have fear
Mayby you will
Reagret those words

So many fears
It is in this world
And some are stupid
And some are right to feel fear
But fear is importen
It showes us
The trut about life
And how
We can survive
This bad world

My fears?....
Im not so sure
And yours.....
Your not sure
Nobody is sure of what
Their fear is
Mayby some will say
A mouse.....
Stupid isnt it...
But
If I asked those persons
What is your real fear
Im sure
Some will look stupid at me
And some will look at me
Just look
Its hard to say
What our real fear is
But I think I know
What our fear is

Screams in a town
Shadows running in the burning streets
Trying to save
Their life
Do you think is much fear ther
That I think
Those
Are screaming for their life
Running for their life

Your fear
Our fear
Is death
And that
No one can run away from
Never...

Do someone know how hard it is to write about fear!!
Posted 1/14/08

Yamira wrote:

Ther is somthing
That every person have innside their heart
They hide it well
But they cant escape
Those cold hands that gripes your heart
What felling that is?
Its
Fear

Fear
What is it
That word....
Its hard to explain
But so easy to feel

Some say they never have feeled it
The cold grip
Of fear
But
It is ther
You cant run away from it
You will never make it
It is ther
Waiting
So dont say you dont have fear
Mayby you will
Reagret those words

So many fears
It is in this world
And some are stupid
And some are right to feel fear
But fear is importen
It showes us
The trut about life
And how
We can survive
This bad world

My fears?....
Im not so sure
And yours.....
Your not sure
Nobody is sure of what
Their fear is
Mayby some will say
A mouse.....
Stupid isnt it...
But
If I asked those persons
What is your real fear
Im sure
Some will look stupid at me
And some will look at me
Just look
Its hard to say
What our real fear is
But I think I know
What our fear is

Screams in a town
Shadows running in the burning streets
Trying to save
Their life
Do you think is much fear ther
That I think
Those
Are screaming for their life
Running for their life

Your fear
Our fear
Is death
And that
No one can run away from
Never...

Do someone know how hard it is to write about fear!!


It must be really hard i never tried personally, but u did a great job capturing the emotion and the thoughts about it
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Posted 1/15/08

kagura4 wrote:


Yamira wrote:

Ther is somthing
That every person have innside their heart
They hide it well
But they cant escape
Those cold hands that gripes your heart
What felling that is?
Its
Fear

Fear
What is it
That word....
Its hard to explain
But so easy to feel

Some say they never have feeled it
The cold grip
Of fear
But
It is ther
You cant run away from it
You will never make it
It is ther
Waiting
So dont say you dont have fear
Mayby you will
Reagret those words

So many fears
It is in this world
And some are stupid
And some are right to feel fear
But fear is importen
It showes us
The trut about life
And how
We can survive
This bad world

My fears?....
Im not so sure
And yours.....
Your not sure
Nobody is sure of what
Their fear is
Mayby some will say
A mouse.....
Stupid isnt it...
But
If I asked those persons
What is your real fear
Im sure
Some will look stupid at me
And some will look at me
Just look
Its hard to say
What our real fear is
But I think I know
What our fear is

Screams in a town
Shadows running in the burning streets
Trying to save
Their life
Do you think is much fear ther
That I think
Those
Are screaming for their life
Running for their life

Your fear
Our fear
Is death
And that
No one can run away from
Never...

Do someone know how hard it is to write about fear!!


It must be really hard i never tried personally, but u did a great job capturing the emotion and the thoughts about it


thank you very much ^^ well try it then Im sure you can make it
Posted 1/16/08

Yamira wrote:


kagura4 wrote:


Yamira wrote:

Ther is somthing
That every person have innside their heart
They hide it well
But they cant escape
Those cold hands that gripes your heart
What felling that is?
Its
Fear

Fear
What is it
That word....
Its hard to explain
But so easy to feel

Some say they never have feeled it
The cold grip
Of fear
But
It is ther
You cant run away from it
You will never make it
It is ther
Waiting
So dont say you dont have fear
Mayby you will
Reagret those words

So many fears
It is in this world
And some are stupid
And some are right to feel fear
But fear is importen
It showes us
The trut about life
And how
We can survive
This bad world

My fears?....
Im not so sure
And yours.....
Your not sure
Nobody is sure of what
Their fear is
Mayby some will say
A mouse.....
Stupid isnt it...
But
If I asked those persons
What is your real fear
Im sure
Some will look stupid at me
And some will look at me
Just look
Its hard to say
What our real fear is
But I think I know
What our fear is

Screams in a town
Shadows running in the burning streets
Trying to save
Their life
Do you think is much fear ther
That I think
Those
Are screaming for their life
Running for their life

Your fear
Our fear
Is death
And that
No one can run away from
Never...

Do someone know how hard it is to write about fear!!


It must be really hard i never tried personally, but u did a great job capturing the emotion and the thoughts about it


thank you very much ^^ well try it then Im sure you can make it


lol highly doubt that but sure i'll try, i'l show u what I come up with when i'm done =3
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Posted 1/17/08

kagura4 wrote:


Yamira wrote:


kagura4 wrote:


Yamira wrote:

Ther is somthing
That every person have innside their heart
They hide it well
But they cant escape
Those cold hands that gripes your heart
What felling that is?
Its
Fear

Fear
What is it
That word....
Its hard to explain
But so easy to feel

Some say they never have feeled it
The cold grip
Of fear
But
It is ther
You cant run away from it
You will never make it
It is ther
Waiting
So dont say you dont have fear
Mayby you will
Reagret those words

So many fears
It is in this world
And some are stupid
And some are right to feel fear
But fear is importen
It showes us
The trut about life
And how
We can survive
This bad world

My fears?....
Im not so sure
And yours.....
Your not sure
Nobody is sure of what
Their fear is
Mayby some will say
A mouse.....
Stupid isnt it...
But
If I asked those persons
What is your real fear
Im sure
Some will look stupid at me
And some will look at me
Just look
Its hard to say
What our real fear is
But I think I know
What our fear is

Screams in a town
Shadows running in the burning streets
Trying to save
Their life
Do you think is much fear ther
That I think
Those
Are screaming for their life
Running for their life

Your fear
Our fear
Is death
And that
No one can run away from
Never...

Do someone know how hard it is to write about fear!!


It must be really hard i never tried personally, but u did a great job capturing the emotion and the thoughts about it


thank you very much ^^ well try it then Im sure you can make it


lol highly doubt that but sure i'll try, i'l show u what I come up with when i'm done =3


Great! ^^
Posted 2/11/08

Yamira wrote:


kagura4 wrote:


Yamira wrote:


kagura4 wrote:


Yamira wrote:

Ther is somthing
That every person have innside their heart
They hide it well
But they cant escape
Those cold hands that gripes your heart
What felling that is?
Its
Fear

Fear
What is it
That word....
Its hard to explain
But so easy to feel

Some say they never have feeled it
The cold grip
Of fear
But
It is ther
You cant run away from it
You will never make it
It is ther
Waiting
So dont say you dont have fear
Mayby you will
Reagret those words

So many fears
It is in this world
And some are stupid
And some are right to feel fear
But fear is importen
It showes us
The trut about life
And how
We can survive
This bad world

My fears?....
Im not so sure
And yours.....
Your not sure
Nobody is sure of what
Their fear is
Mayby some will say
A mouse.....
Stupid isnt it...
But
If I asked those persons
What is your real fear
Im sure
Some will look stupid at me
And some will look at me
Just look
Its hard to say
What our real fear is
But I think I know
What our fear is

Screams in a town
Shadows running in the burning streets
Trying to save
Their life
Do you think is much fear ther
That I think
Those
Are screaming for their life
Running for their life

Your fear
Our fear
Is death
And that
No one can run away from
Never...

Do someone know how hard it is to write about fear!!


It must be really hard i never tried personally, but u did a great job capturing the emotion and the thoughts about it


thank you very much ^^ well try it then Im sure you can make it


lol highly doubt that but sure i'll try, i'l show u what I come up with when i'm done =3


Great! ^^


It took a while but I finally made a poem about fear plz read it X3
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That's cool!!!!...good yamira!!!!...Congratulations
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