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Posted 2/29/08

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gwynth wrote:


illuminosferatu wrote:


gwynth wrote:

is this where we put our creations?

if thats the case, here's my creation:

http://www.mediafire.com/download.php?5di17j22ne9

i've also sent my creation at [email protected] just incase

please tell me if u have received it already. thanks!

Author's Note: have fun reading. its a great story for lovers and it will inspire them to stay strong inspite all the bad things that can happen to them. it inspired me at how my love gave me a red rose on the day we met.

†Love Lots†
Lecriscel

PS: sorry i forgot about the chemistry it's: That day, Bethan took the red rose that Oliver had given her and pressed it into a book, so that it would stay that way forever

its quite hard to understand. its somehow related to preserving by not exposing it through air.


I've read your story. Indeed it was a fun read. The story-telling/narrative was almost flawless, as if I was watching a movie where there was a sweet narrative voice kindly speaking to me. The target audience is pretty much universal, and the plot and character designs are easy enough to relate to. The logic behind their conflicts was simple yet realistic. It reminds me of a fairy tale, in that it follows the "Pyramus and Thisbe" greek archetype or perhaps a modern adaptation "Romeo and Juliet". The only problem I might have had with it (BESIDES THE HARD-TO-READ FONT... I ended up copying and pasting it onto notepad (-_-') ) is that you only mention one reference to chemistry when the rules state that two are required. Try looking for another one and posting it up and perhaps it won't be that big of a deal.

*High Five* ( ^_^) /\ (^_^ )
*Thumbs Up* &=(^,~ )

-illuminosferatu
The Vampyre of Light



awww. thank you so much! it was really flattering. thank you, thank you, thank you!

anyway, uhm about my problem, does that mean i cant compete it?


I think all you need to do is to look through your story and find one more thing that's even slightly remotely related to chemistry and post it up. You have a lot of beautiful and/or stormy descriptions to work with, so I don't think it's too hard to find.


ok. but the submission is already finished. how can i still compete it? T_T

uhm. thank you for your help. i really appreciate it.
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Posted 2/29/08

gwynth wrote:


illuminosferatu wrote:


gwynth wrote:


illuminosferatu wrote:


gwynth wrote:

is this where we put our creations?

if thats the case, here's my creation:

http://www.mediafire.com/download.php?5di17j22ne9

i've also sent my creation at [email protected] just incase

please tell me if u have received it already. thanks!

Author's Note: have fun reading. its a great story for lovers and it will inspire them to stay strong inspite all the bad things that can happen to them. it inspired me at how my love gave me a red rose on the day we met.

†Love Lots†
Lecriscel

PS: sorry i forgot about the chemistry it's: That day, Bethan took the red rose that Oliver had given her and pressed it into a book, so that it would stay that way forever

its quite hard to understand. its somehow related to preserving by not exposing it through air.


I've read your story. Indeed it was a fun read. The story-telling/narrative was almost flawless, as if I was watching a movie where there was a sweet narrative voice kindly speaking to me. The target audience is pretty much universal, and the plot and character designs are easy enough to relate to. The logic behind their conflicts was simple yet realistic. It reminds me of a fairy tale, in that it follows the "Pyramus and Thisbe" greek archetype or perhaps a modern adaptation "Romeo and Juliet". The only problem I might have had with it (BESIDES THE HARD-TO-READ FONT... I ended up copying and pasting it onto notepad (-_-') ) is that you only mention one reference to chemistry when the rules state that two are required. Try looking for another one and posting it up and perhaps it won't be that big of a deal.

*High Five* ( ^_^) /\ (^_^ )
*Thumbs Up* &=(^,~ )

-illuminosferatu
The Vampyre of Light



awww. thank you so much! it was really flattering. thank you, thank you, thank you!

anyway, uhm about my problem, does that mean i cant compete it?


I think all you need to do is to look through your story and find one more thing that's even slightly remotely related to chemistry and post it up. You have a lot of beautiful and/or stormy descriptions to work with, so I don't think it's too hard to find.


ok. but the submission is already finished. how can i still compete it? T_T

uhm. thank you for your help. i really appreciate it.


If you submitted it via email... you can probably submit another email saying something like... 'oops i forgot my 2nd referrence. Please refer to page X paragraph X sentence X.' If you submitted it on a forum... just post it. I doubt Jorlwind and the judges are even close to finish reading them all.
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Posted 3/1/08

illuminosferatu wrote:


gwynth wrote:


illuminosferatu wrote:


gwynth wrote:


illuminosferatu wrote:


gwynth wrote:

is this where we put our creations?

if thats the case, here's my creation:

http://www.mediafire.com/download.php?5di17j22ne9

i've also sent my creation at [email protected] just incase

please tell me if u have received it already. thanks!

Author's Note: have fun reading. its a great story for lovers and it will inspire them to stay strong inspite all the bad things that can happen to them. it inspired me at how my love gave me a red rose on the day we met.

†Love Lots†
Lecriscel

PS: sorry i forgot about the chemistry it's: That day, Bethan took the red rose that Oliver had given her and pressed it into a book, so that it would stay that way forever

its quite hard to understand. its somehow related to preserving by not exposing it through air.


I've read your story. Indeed it was a fun read. The story-telling/narrative was almost flawless, as if I was watching a movie where there was a sweet narrative voice kindly speaking to me. The target audience is pretty much universal, and the plot and character designs are easy enough to relate to. The logic behind their conflicts was simple yet realistic. It reminds me of a fairy tale, in that it follows the "Pyramus and Thisbe" greek archetype or perhaps a modern adaptation "Romeo and Juliet". The only problem I might have had with it (BESIDES THE HARD-TO-READ FONT... I ended up copying and pasting it onto notepad (-_-') ) is that you only mention one reference to chemistry when the rules state that two are required. Try looking for another one and posting it up and perhaps it won't be that big of a deal.

*High Five* ( ^_^) /\ (^_^ )
*Thumbs Up* &=(^,~ )

-illuminosferatu
The Vampyre of Light



awww. thank you so much! it was really flattering. thank you, thank you, thank you!

anyway, uhm about my problem, does that mean i cant compete it?


I think all you need to do is to look through your story and find one more thing that's even slightly remotely related to chemistry and post it up. You have a lot of beautiful and/or stormy descriptions to work with, so I don't think it's too hard to find.


ok. but the submission is already finished. how can i still compete it? T_T

uhm. thank you for your help. i really appreciate it.


If you submitted it via email... you can probably submit another email saying something like... 'oops i forgot my 2nd referrence. Please refer to page X paragraph X sentence X.' If you submitted it on a forum... just post it. I doubt Jorlwind and the judges are even close to finish reading them all.


the end of the two-week reading is nearly finished. and besides they must have read our forum post by now.

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