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Posted 6/4/11

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Yui smiled and looked to Katrina. "Wanna chara change?" The girl nodded a red necklace appeared. Yui backed up and began to go through the rooms, first just destroying things and then finally just taking money and necklaces.


Haru stood looking at her. "What are you doing?"

[Is it kk if i made my second chara?]
Posted 6/4/11


OOC: Yup yup :D
Yui turned around as she put on another necklace. "Getting some stuff." She said as she turned around.
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occ: awesome but and i made her from Easter so do u have any members from Easter that we can RP with too?

Haru rolled her eyes " how much do you wanna bet that thats not your stuff"
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Ooc: from mine? Both are taken, but you can look around the forums, at the guardian builidng (idk why) there is kumi, cross, and ben.
Yui stood up as she slipped on a braclett over her golden ones. "What are you talking about? I'm wearing them and I own them...now at least." She said as she went to the cloest and put a fancy shirt over hers.
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Ooc: from mine? Both are taken, but you can look around the forums, at the guardian builidng (idk why) there is kumi, cross, and ben.
Yui stood up as she slipped on a braclett over her golden ones. "What are you talking about? I'm wearing them and I own them...now at least." She said as she went to the cloest and put a fancy shirt over hers.


Haru looked at her and sighed.

OCC: both..taken? wait wat? loool im confused do u mean like in RP? or what
Posted 6/4/11 , edited 6/4/11


OOC: I mean that they are both in a rp right now lol
Yui smiled wide and walked back up to Sara. "Time?" She asked, wanting to know if she had any extra to go into all the rooms.
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Posted 6/4/11

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OOC: I mean that they are both in a rp right now lol
Yui smiled wide and walked back up to Sara. "Time?" She asked, wanting to know if she had any extra to go into all the rooms.


Haru sighed.

Occ:OHHHHH yea now i get it i was like taken...by who? loool is that why they cant RP loool anyways yeaaa i got it now ^^
Posted 6/4/11


Yui turned around to Haru and put her hands on her waist. "What's your problem?"
OOC: Kumi is with Cross right now and Reio is with Logan they can't just pop up here lol
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Amelia walks toward her room
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Yui looked as she walked out of Amelia's room with a bunch of jewerly on. She smiled at Haru and slipped the necklaces on Haru's neck.
'See ya later." She said as she and Katrina bolted
(I got to go )
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Amelia walks to you"what you were doing in my room?"

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Amelia walks to you"what you were doing in my room?"



Haru looked at Amelia ' those girl were stealing stuff here " she said as she gave back her necklace
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"I didnt take a thing, I just came since I was bored" Sara walk off holding her laptop
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Amelia takes the necklace from you
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edrosik wrote:

Amelia takes the necklace from you


OOC : Try and use 3rd person, i read a page of the Dorm, and all your posts i wouldn't have linked to others if it wasn't for others quoting you... Also try and lengthen your posts.

"Amelia takes the necklace from you" --- you can change that too.. "Amelia looked at Haru as she held her necklace out. She took the necklace back, but felt some confusion on why the thief managed to get in her room. She nodded and thanked Haru before going into her room"

See? turned your statement of 5 words into a mini-paragraph of 49 words.. a lot better dont you agree? =
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