7/10
Sorry, I wasn't able to flip the image lol

you know you can just flip it windows image viewer right?

Wow I haven't been here in a looooong time. Let's see here...

3/10 I'm sooorry but, it's pretty basic. T_T
BUT That doesn't mean you can't improve!! Keep practicing and you'll definitely get better~ :3

Good 9/10 I love the colours

9.5/10

Nice sketch! 8/10

Go Color it!!

Eh, thee on before was better, 7/10

@KlienerStollexxx cool ! it looks great lol... was on the 1st page... o_o.. and nice naked man.. eue

8/10 nicely painted

9/10 - Love the eyes and nicely coloured :)

Here's mine

you really like that guy from Sword Arts Online I see. lol
I give you 9/10
Some proportions are slightly off. His head is somewhat too long and his body (or at least from the picture) kinda looks a tad bit too narrow and long for a male. Other than that great color and detail.
Here's mine!

Thank you for the criticism, will help for future work of mine :)
8.5/10 i like the pose and the detail, would be nice to see it coloured ^.^

lol well speaking of, my next drawing is fan art from S.A.O. Don’t really like it much, i don’t draw fan art often :P

I thank you for your criticisms. I finally meet a person who actually gives good feedback unlike other people on other sites lol.

But now onto your work.
This is definitely a good piece of art.
But again "The Criticisms shall commence!"
8.5/10 lower than your first one because some proportion issues.
While in your first picture, the head was somewhat too long. In this picture, it seems like both Kirito and Asuna have slightly distorted heads. This is maybe because both characters were drawn with a 3/4 profile view of their faces. I think this is a tricky view point to draw characters because of the weird angle. To easily correct this, I recommend utilizing more basic shapes or drawn mannequins to help further guide your proportions. With my picture, I heavily used drawn mannequins to try to get the best proportions as possible, albeit I do know that some of mine are off lol. Something I noticed is that Asuna's breasts look somewhat unnatural. From the picture, it looks like they are trying to be both flat and well endowed at the same time. I personally don't know how to improve this area actually.

Now the positives:
It really seems like you put a good amount of effort and time into your art. I admire that, because I spent only a measly 30-40 minutes on my drawing. As you can see, in my drawing, I lack lots of detail in the hair unlike yours because in your drawing, the hair of Asuna really seems like it is flowing unlike my blocky crap lol. I commend you for your attention to detail especially in spots like the wrinkles in clothing and such. The thing I mostly envy in this picture are your hands. How do you draw hands so well? I can't draw hands for sh**! I can draw feet, bodies, heads, faces, and most parts just fine but hands I can never frickin get. Lastly, I love the colors, exactly the same color pallate of the original show.

Can I ask how you color your pictures? It seems like they are colored by some sort of graphics program on the computer (or maybe your just so good lol.) And do you even hand draw or do you use a graphics program on the computer?
If you feel like my criticism was too harsh, then tell me. I am only trying to tell you what I believe you need to improve in. I am an aspiring artist and writer so I try to exercise my opinion. From what I see so far, you draw better than I do lol.

Here's another picture anyways, this was done around four months ago (the first pic was done about a year ago). I think this one is better than my previous one EXCEPT for the eyes. Holy crap I don't know what happened, but somewhere at some point I completely screwed up the eyes lol. I couldn't really fix it and white out wasn't really a viable solution for me so...

Your welcome =) i don’t really like to give out negative feedback much, if anyone puts a pencil/pen to paper and create something on it, to me it's art.

And again thank you =) never have i been criticised like that but again thank you, as i do need this type of criticism. I plan on creating a manga like graphic novel (the character above and the two below this comment) are from my story. So i thank you =) although the style i did Asuna and Kirito in is kind of in a chibi style, no idea why though i just put pencil to paper and drew till i finished. The reason for me to choose that pose is because recently i decided to go all out and try different angles ect, for years i was stuck on one area. About the colour, i did that on the computer (but it was drawn by hand and then cleaned up on the computer) as for your comment about the hands, i was like 'wow'.. Seriously, drawing hands is very hard for me and along with drawing feet are the hardest for me lol so again thank you so much ^^
Oh and i'll give a small pointer for drawing flowing hair if you like? =) what i do when i draw hair is i follow the head shape when drawing hair and i dont draw straight lines there is always a curve/wave to the lines. Hope that helps?

Now, for you art =) Personally i liked your previous drawing more ^^
7/10 for this artwork, i would have given it an 8 but there’s something off with the face/hair/neck area. The expression is good though and the pose as well. Your style is actually pretty good as well

My next drawing, just started this last night and will colour it later =)

7/10
Nice, but you've got some problems with the anatomy, and the shading could be more consistent


First one's my crappy attempt at digital lining, second is my original pencil work.