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Posted 7/31/12
Thank you for the criticism, will help for future work of mine :)
8.5/10 i like the pose and the detail, would be nice to see it coloured ^.^

lol well speaking of, my next drawing is fan art from S.A.O. Don’t really like it much, i don’t draw fan art often :P

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I thank you for your criticisms. I finally meet a person who actually gives good feedback unlike other people on other sites lol.

But now onto your work.
This is definitely a good piece of art.
But again "The Criticisms shall commence!"
8.5/10 lower than your first one because some proportion issues.
While in your first picture, the head was somewhat too long. In this picture, it seems like both Kirito and Asuna have slightly distorted heads. This is maybe because both characters were drawn with a 3/4 profile view of their faces. I think this is a tricky view point to draw characters because of the weird angle. To easily correct this, I recommend utilizing more basic shapes or drawn mannequins to help further guide your proportions. With my picture, I heavily used drawn mannequins to try to get the best proportions as possible, albeit I do know that some of mine are off lol. Something I noticed is that Asuna's breasts look somewhat unnatural. From the picture, it looks like they are trying to be both flat and well endowed at the same time. I personally don't know how to improve this area actually.

Now the positives:
It really seems like you put a good amount of effort and time into your art. I admire that, because I spent only a measly 30-40 minutes on my drawing. As you can see, in my drawing, I lack lots of detail in the hair unlike yours because in your drawing, the hair of Asuna really seems like it is flowing unlike my blocky crap lol. I commend you for your attention to detail especially in spots like the wrinkles in clothing and such. The thing I mostly envy in this picture are your hands. How do you draw hands so well? I can't draw hands for sh**! I can draw feet, bodies, heads, faces, and most parts just fine but hands I can never frickin get. Lastly, I love the colors, exactly the same color pallate of the original show.

Can I ask how you color your pictures? It seems like they are colored by some sort of graphics program on the computer (or maybe your just so good lol.) And do you even hand draw or do you use a graphics program on the computer?
If you feel like my criticism was too harsh, then tell me. I am only trying to tell you what I believe you need to improve in. I am an aspiring artist and writer so I try to exercise my opinion. From what I see so far, you draw better than I do lol.

Here's another picture anyways, this was done around four months ago (the first pic was done about a year ago). I think this one is better than my previous one EXCEPT for the eyes. Holy crap I don't know what happened, but somewhere at some point I completely screwed up the eyes lol. I couldn't really fix it and white out wasn't really a viable solution for me so...
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Posted 8/1/12 , edited 8/1/12
Your welcome =) i don’t really like to give out negative feedback much, if anyone puts a pencil/pen to paper and create something on it, to me it's art.

And again thank you =) never have i been criticised like that but again thank you, as i do need this type of criticism. I plan on creating a manga like graphic novel (the character above and the two below this comment) are from my story. So i thank you =) although the style i did Asuna and Kirito in is kind of in a chibi style, no idea why though i just put pencil to paper and drew till i finished. The reason for me to choose that pose is because recently i decided to go all out and try different angles ect, for years i was stuck on one area. About the colour, i did that on the computer (but it was drawn by hand and then cleaned up on the computer) as for your comment about the hands, i was like 'wow'.. Seriously, drawing hands is very hard for me and along with drawing feet are the hardest for me lol so again thank you so much ^^
Oh and i'll give a small pointer for drawing flowing hair if you like? =) what i do when i draw hair is i follow the head shape when drawing hair and i dont draw straight lines there is always a curve/wave to the lines. Hope that helps?

Now, for you art =) Personally i liked your previous drawing more ^^
7/10 for this artwork, i would have given it an 8 but there’s something off with the face/hair/neck area. The expression is good though and the pose as well. Your style is actually pretty good as well

My next drawing, just started this last night and will colour it later =)

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Posted 8/1/12
7/10
Nice, but you've got some problems with the anatomy, and the shading could be more consistent


First one's my crappy attempt at digital lining, second is my original pencil work.
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Posted 8/1/12
7/10

You could benefit from varying the thickness of the lineart, and I think the right eye (our left) is not in proper perspective, because it's a somewhat side view and the eye still looks like we're seeing the girl head-on (which we're not).
I personally like the sketch more, and some great artists just color over their sketch instead of making lineart. I think it makes for a nice style

I'm still practicing how to paint... have a long ways to go
And the style of the floating... orb/planet/round object was purposely done. I'm not going for smooth painting.



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Posted 8/1/12 , edited 8/1/12
That's a wonderful way to practice actually, and you're a very diligent person for doing it!

Observing the effects of light on balls will help prepare you for lighting scenarios on more complex organic objects, and it's absolutely essential if you ever want to get into painting.

You get an A++ for effort and initiative. 10/10.

(Even if I totally don't understand why the light on top of the ball is green...)

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Hm.

I guess I have to put something here don't I?

GLUTEBIRD, I CHOOSE YOU!



(Shuddup, I can throw the game if I wanna!)
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Posted 8/3/12 , edited 8/3/12
Lmao that made me laugh xD 8/10 i like the creativity/idea from it.

Now mine- Decided to colour in my last drawing i did (i'll also show the black and white one too)







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Posted 8/3/12
5/10
Sorry if I happen to be a little more strict in ratings than others here.
I think your lines are a little stiff , anatomy wise could also be improved.

Here's mine.
Title : [An existence only in my imaginary world]
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Posted 8/3/12
10/10 without a doubt, it would've been a 10/10 without color but you made it even better with color
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Posted 8/6/12 , edited 8/6/12
@Suavisification 6.5: your face shape is not stable. I like how you draw the body and the movement shades of the coat.

@Myo_Chan: Myo_chan from MAL? If so, *waves hello*

Here's mine. This still needs works. The hair needs flexibility, some more frames here and there, and the face needs works. I still need to add the roses.

Reaction Test

http://khanhcpham.deviantart.com/#/d59ipz6
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Posted 8/7/12
I since it's still under process I'll give you an 8.5
I'm nopt much into arts and drawings I can't even draw one to save my life. However I'll try my best to put into words what I'm currently seeing...
I love the movement and I'm sure it will come out as something beautiful if you continue it (with the plan of making the hair move and the face and the roses) The drawing is kinda like in Hayate no Gotoku....

this one is the second page of my friend's attempt at making a manga (behind those walls is the title)
Tell me honestly, what you think. Your words of constructive criticism will be greatly appreciated since I will be forwarding that to her page as a gift and encouragement to remind her to never give up.
Here it is....

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Posted 8/7/12 , edited 8/7/12
9.5/10
Wow, i had to rate this peice ^^ I myself is working on a manga, the design and artwork is really cute and nice. The panneling could use a little work on but other that that, it's great =)

@Khanhcpham- Hey, yes it's me from MAL *waves back* ^w^

Ok, so i need to put up a drawing.. This drawing is an old one xD but many people like this one somehow, it was some random creature i did years ago

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Posted 8/10/12
@Myo_Chan: 8. I think this is better than your digital ones because I like traditional feel to this. It leaves your expression. I wonder if you can use this method on your digital ones.

Here's mine. Just a simple walk and squat test. Its not much but o well =P

Walk and Squat Test

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http://khanhcpham.deviantart.com/#/d5755uf
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Posted 8/12/12
8/10

I think the proportions are off, but idk if I'm really fit to judge, haha.
Posted 8/22/12 , edited 11/19/12

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